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Rewrite Due to Fetishistic Description?: Zettai Ryouiki

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Sackett Since: Jan, 2001
#526: Aug 4th 2011 at 8:59:03 PM

[up][up] We already had that debate, and a crowner.

SakurazakiSetsuna Together Forever... Since: Jun, 2010
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#527: Aug 4th 2011 at 9:44:37 PM

[up][up][up]

So what, you want to remove the trope from the trope?

Also, you're about 500 posts late...

Arha Since: Jan, 2010
#528: Aug 4th 2011 at 9:51:48 PM

Well, personally, the references to budding sexuality make me feel like there's an old man leering at high school girls just waiting for them to be legal. But it's an accurate description to use so there's no point really getting bothered over it.

shark33 Since: Nov, 2010
#529: Aug 4th 2011 at 10:11:41 PM

I'm cleaning some of the examples, something I admit to haven't look at, and there are some things that really are creepy, plus there are some below-C examples.

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#530: Aug 4th 2011 at 10:25:28 PM

I gotta ask - aside from keeping the A and B grades, and the page staying as Zettai Ryouiki, did anyone have any serious issues with the writeup that I did? The current description feels very clunky and scattershot in its layout...generally I don't care to brag, but I was rather fond of what I came up with.

EDIT: Also, is it time to make an IP thread for the page?

edited 4th Aug '11 10:32:52 PM by Willbyr

Raso Cure Candy Since: Jul, 2009
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#531: Aug 4th 2011 at 10:36:49 PM

There was an A and B version only pic somewhere on the sandboxes just put it up.

The Knee High Socks redirect needs to go though that was the C examples that go voted out.

[up] make a version with the current info and ranks and let's see it?

edited 4th Aug '11 10:40:09 PM by Raso

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Sackett Since: Jan, 2001
#532: Aug 4th 2011 at 10:43:31 PM

[up] I thought we decided to keep the Rank C pic so that people knew what not to add?

edited 4th Aug '11 10:43:45 PM by Sackett

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#533: Aug 4th 2011 at 10:56:37 PM

[up] I'd prefer not to; that's one of the reasons why I mentioned an IP thread, as we can go with the A and B type pic, or the multicolored pic from early in the thread that had all the grades marked on one pair of legs...that one can be tweaked to note that we're only interested in A and B.

Here's the new version of my take on the description (and only the description)...I added in a note about Shana Clone since it became valid and made some other tweaks and shuffles.

edited 4th Aug '11 10:57:19 PM by Willbyr

Sackett Since: Jan, 2001
#534: Aug 5th 2011 at 5:27:55 AM

Now come on. My rewrite didn't win the crowner either.

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#535: Aug 5th 2011 at 6:55:38 AM

[up] Which one was yours, 1 or 2?

Sackett Since: Jan, 2001
#536: Aug 5th 2011 at 8:39:17 AM

.#2 I believe.

My point is that we just had a crowner and a winner. It seems out of order to try and propose a another rewrite just because you disagree with the crowner result.

edited 5th Aug '11 8:39:24 AM by Sackett

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captainpat Since: Sep, 2010
#538: Aug 6th 2011 at 7:20:30 PM

Probably off topic, but I don't think this trope is Fanservice.

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#539: Aug 14th 2011 at 11:27:36 AM

Well, the description has been swapped. We should lock this, and if there are any other problems (such as suggested in the post above me), a new thread can be created.

Writing a post-post apocalypse LitRPG on RR. Also fanfic stuff.
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SingleProposition: ZettaiRyouikiGradeC
8th Jul '11 10:38:36 AM

Crown Description:

Does Grade C Zettai Ryouiki count as an example?

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