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MoeDantes cuter, cuddlier Edmond from the Land of Classics Since: Nov, 2010
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#301: Jul 10th 2011 at 10:39:30 PM

It was a limo... made out of carriages strung together.

My guess is it runs on four horse-power ;)

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gingerninja666 SCH-NEIGH-ZEL from Aboard The Damocles Since: Aug, 2009
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#302: Jul 11th 2011 at 3:06:29 AM

If Rainbow Dash lost all her memories relating to the Mane Cast and went back to Gilda, do you think she'd have a better chance of joining the Wonderbolts?

edited 11th Jul '11 3:09:04 AM by gingerninja666

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#303: Jul 11th 2011 at 8:41:52 AM

[up][up] That's such an awful pun, it Crosses the Line Twice and becomes funny again. tongue

[up] I think she might become more competitive and cut throat from Gilda's influences, which might get her in through the tryouts more easily, but that type of personality would also probably conflict with a team dynamic. So I think she'd get in a bit more easily, but her canon personality would be more likely to be able to stay on the team.

@Moe True, Luna breaking her leg is bad, but I wouldn't say that really comes close to the melting filly. Disintegration like that really alters the mood of the story. If you had described the melting in more 'gory' (for lack of a better word) detail, I think you would have been in grimdark territory for a moment.

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BornIn1142 from Estonia Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Faithful to 2D
#304: Jul 11th 2011 at 12:01:13 PM

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-sunshine-and-fire.html

Ah, that's nice to see... even though the reaction is close to dead silence so far.

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#305: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:21:11 PM

Well, I don't know what things looked like an hour ago, but you've got 9 comments and 14 votes (putting you at a 5 star) so far, which I wouldn't call dead silence. tongue Also, it wasn't posted too long ago and it's a week day. Most people aren't going to be on it right away due to other obligations.

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MoeDantes cuter, cuddlier Edmond from the Land of Classics Since: Nov, 2010
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#306: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:28:38 PM

I just noticed that while the comments speak low, my story has actually gotten 10 ratings and averages 3 1/3 (out of 5) stars. That's not too bad.

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#307: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:45:27 PM

No rejection response yet. Hopefully it gets posted.

I also got another story idea - MLP meets The Book of Mormon.

BornIn1142 from Estonia Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Faithful to 2D
#308: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:47:16 PM

[up][up][up]I was just a little irritated since a good half the comments don't actually have anything to do with the story, but more with snarking about the wording of the post. And the next new story has gotten twice the comments in half the time. The Grimdark tag is probably a turnoff for people.

Still, I can't say I'm displeased. Lots of new readers, lots of emails about people adding it to their Story Alert lists.

edited 11th Jul '11 1:47:30 PM by BornIn1142

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#309: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:48:27 PM

Yeah. Comments can be disheartening. On my fic, I got a comment that said "I'm not reading it because it has OC ponies." And all the "wtf Ayn Rand" stuff...

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#310: Jul 11th 2011 at 1:51:43 PM

Could have been worse. Could have been someone saying "FIRST!" <_<

edited 11th Jul '11 1:58:53 PM by BornIn1142

NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#311: Jul 11th 2011 at 2:43:48 PM

[up][up][up][up]Funny note

check this out God talks about Aestrology

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NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#312: Jul 11th 2011 at 4:59:33 PM

i think only only comment on sunshine and Fire is that Applejack seems to have forgotten her accent

On another note: If RD was responible for releases a evil force that could turn any pony into another nightmare moon do you think she would try and take her own life in greif?

edited 11th Jul '11 5:03:41 PM by NekoLLX

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#313: Jul 11th 2011 at 5:13:17 PM

[up]I doubt it, she'd be more likely to try to repair the damage via kicking some ass.

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NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#314: Jul 11th 2011 at 5:43:10 PM

[up]But what ass is there to kick, she tore open the barrier between worlds letting evil pretty much tango in, do a piorette and then moonwalk.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#315: Jul 11th 2011 at 5:49:35 PM

The evil's ass, obviously. Or whoever the evil is possessing.

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NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#316: Jul 11th 2011 at 6:11:09 PM

[up]So RD let's evin in to corrupt Equestria and she reacts by...kicking the ass of inoncent ponies corrupted by da majicks

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#317: Jul 11th 2011 at 6:24:03 PM

Well, it is Rainbow Dash we're talking about. She certainly wouldn't contemplate suicide.

edited 11th Jul '11 6:24:22 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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Fancolors I draw stuff. from Land of the Mamelucos Since: Nov, 2010
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#318: Jul 11th 2011 at 6:33:54 PM

Would it be cool if there were other lands populated by different kinds of animals, each one of these having their own physical god responsible for an element of nature?

For example, Camelot, a land covered on sand, where Saa, the emperor, will make sure fire keeps existing.

MoeDantes cuter, cuddlier Edmond from the Land of Classics Since: Nov, 2010
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#319: Jul 11th 2011 at 6:35:14 PM

The only way Rainbow Dash would contemplate suicide is if she was rejected from the Wonderbolts, lost the use of her wings, directly caused the death of Twilight Sparkle and then watched Pinkie Pie commit suicide after being diagnosed with diabetes, read Cupcakes, and finally discovers that she really, really sucks at R-Type.

I don't see it happening.

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NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#320: Jul 11th 2011 at 6:38:20 PM

Well dash does fall becoming a nightmare moon of her own and TRY to kill the other 6, as well as releasing 9 other nightmares, she herself corrupted from other ponies and even when those 9 defeated the evil now has a free pass into Equestria, all because of her actions either as her self or her superpowered evil side.

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#321: Jul 11th 2011 at 8:35:55 PM

I agree that she wouldn't think of suicide. At least not in the traditional sense. Given her personality, I think she would be more likely to become angry and prideful and keep fighting and fighting until she wins, or ends up dead (so I guess you could say she would be going on a suicide mission). And considering how she doesn't seem to think things through most of the time, I think it would take a long time for her to realize the corrupted ponies she's fighting were innocents unless another pony were to point it out to her.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#322: Jul 11th 2011 at 9:03:25 PM

Arrrggggg.

I had a great idea for a fic while I was at work today, but I can't get the stupid thing out of my head and onto my computer. I'm just off today or something. Crappiest writing day in a long time.

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#323: Jul 11th 2011 at 9:18:07 PM

I wonder if the version of "Ghost Riders In The Sky" that was in the Ghost Rider movie would pop into anyone's head at the climax of my Western if Desperado said "Let's ride." before galloping off after the tree thieves...

NekoLLX Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar from Soviet America Since: Nov, 2010
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#324: Jul 11th 2011 at 9:19:27 PM

[up][up]Well should should know their corrupted ponies since her own corruption came from fighting beyond the barrier, so she should at least reconize that the other corrupted ponies are just like what happened to her.

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