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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#201: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:18:47 AM

Just finished another entry. I'm feeling like I'm being too harsh for the writer, but it wasn't a good story. (By the way, I'm going out of order a little bit, even though anyone whose not a judge knows the order the entries are being judged by. I bet the messenger scrambled them, right?)

And to state my "Overall" scoring scale again:

  • 15/15: Masterpiece/Exciting. Want to read it multiple times over the year.
  • 12: Great and interesting. Would read it again.
  • 9: Good but average. Could read it again.
  • 6: Passable but with flawed. Could live without reading it again, but probably won't read it again.
  • 3: Boring/Horrible. Not going to read it again.

Most stories aren't going to go over 12, but I wouldn't be surprised if I have to stoop all the way towards 3. Hopefully, I won't have to do that.

edited 12th Jul '11 9:20:26 AM by chihuahua0

snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
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#202: Jul 12th 2011 at 10:02:57 AM

Heads up: I know you're all dying to get the scores, but they'll definitely be coming before the marked-up copies. I do take notes as I go along, but I want to be helpful, so I go through them at least one more time to see what else I can say. I've gotten through four entries, looked through most of the rest, and made enough meaningful comments on two of them.

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jewelleddragon Also known as Katz from Pasadena, CA Since: Apr, 2009
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#203: Jul 12th 2011 at 10:27:53 AM

Yes, they're scrambled, so keeping track of when people finished won't avail you. (Also, not everyone announced it.)

chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#204: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:16:34 PM

Should I post the results once I'm done with all of them, or wait until all the other judges are done?

I finished reading the fourth before I had to go to my Harry Potter camp. It's a good one. I'm glad there's a variety of quality, because I wouldn't be a good judge if I said all of them were good or bad.

I'll probably have at least five or six read by the end of the day.

One more question about the theme score: If I feel like the multiple POVs are slapped on or poorly executed, can I knock off points?

edited 12th Jul '11 1:20:10 PM by chihuahua0

snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
Thou errant flap-dragon!
#205: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:25:13 PM

Post scores whenever you're ready.

Of course you can take points off for that. I'm doing it too.

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#206: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:29:09 PM

Okay. Some of the authors either got a little redundant with their viewpoints, or it was poorly done.

Dealan Since: Feb, 2010
chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#208: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:37:58 PM

Don't worry. I'm mostly just knocking one point off, unless it was completely pointless, which it probably will receive a 2 or a 3 out of 5. But so far, I hadn't have that problem. The redundant viewpoints had revealed at least something new.

Dealan Since: Feb, 2010
#209: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:41:02 PM

Meh, it was more of joke than anything. Kinda like "OH SHIT THEY NOTICED!!!"

snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
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#210: Jul 12th 2011 at 1:52:10 PM

I took off a point or a half if it was done depressingly straight. I can think of a few different ways to do it, they just came to me before I had enough time for the contest.

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BetsyandtheFiveAvengers Since: Feb, 2011
#211: Jul 12th 2011 at 6:05:14 PM

Do we have to post all of our comments at once, or can we do them in installments?

CrystalGlacia from at least we're not detroit (Living Relic)
#212: Jul 12th 2011 at 6:33:27 PM

I... hope my multiple viewpoints don't feel tacked-on...

What I'm really worried about is the ending.

"Jack, you have debauched my sloth."
Chubert highly secure from California Since: Jan, 2010
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#213: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:42:43 PM

Uh, since Chihuahua's doing it, I may as well too. For the "overall" section, I'm taking off 1, 2, and 3 points for everything that bugs me. Haven't taken off three points for any issue yet.

Also, guys, a tip: semicolons separate independent clauses without using a conjunction.

So this:

I went to the store; and I bought some rice.

is wrong.

And this:

I went to the store; buying some rice in order to feed my family of starved pandas.

is also wrong.

Lottssss of these mistakes cropping up.

And another thing: If you take issue with one of my corrections, it may be entirely valid. I am, after all, only human. So when I put those up, feel free to take me up on some particular issue.

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snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
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#214: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:45:07 PM

^ MY HERO

How many of you guys used Microsoft Word? I'm seeing a lot of single dashes where there should be two and I know that Word's autocorrect combines them, but it might not render on Free Text Host.

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#215: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:48:02 PM

That was a problem that bugged me too. However, one person forgot to complete a set of emdashes, so I took note of that.

Actually, I'm not doing the "one point off for each flaw" system. That would imbalance some stuff. I'm just estimating my enjoyment level and the number of flaws in one story. It can be a little unwieldy, but it works.

edited 12th Jul '11 9:48:52 PM by chihuahua0

snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#217: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:49:54 PM

I'm using full points, but I think that's okay.

BetsyandtheFiveAvengers Since: Feb, 2011
#218: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:57:36 PM

I've been taking full points off, but now I think I may have been too strict on my grading of those first few entries.

chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#219: Jul 12th 2011 at 9:58:38 PM

So far, I have two positive scores (one I'm writing right now), and two negative scores. I was harsh with one of them, but I'm going to see if I can tweak it to make it slightly more constructive.

[down] I think I know one of the goods and the terrible, although I have two greats.

After I finish watching this music video, I'm going to finish writing up the fourth score.

edited 12th Jul '11 10:08:56 PM by chihuahua0

snowfoxofdeath Thou errant flap-dragon! from San Francisco Suburb Since: Apr, 2012
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#220: Jul 12th 2011 at 10:03:24 PM

I have two good, one great, and one terrible. I'll be back by Thursday with everything else.

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BetsyandtheFiveAvengers Since: Feb, 2011
#221: Jul 12th 2011 at 10:03:41 PM

My comments are constructive, but I'm afraid that whatever justifications I have for my scoring will be ignored if people see the number, not the reason for it.

edited 12th Jul '11 10:03:52 PM by BetsyandtheFiveAvengers

Chubert highly secure from California Since: Jan, 2010
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#222: Jul 12th 2011 at 11:21:30 PM

Out of curiosity, Chihuahua, what do you believe makes the "this bugs me, points off" system bad?

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#223: Jul 13th 2011 at 5:51:19 AM

It's not that I don't like it, I just feel like that my system is more organic.

Chubert highly secure from California Since: Jan, 2010
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#224: Jul 13th 2011 at 8:43:15 AM

Ehhh, yeah, I think that I'm beginning to dislike my own system as well.

I'll just use the five-star method.

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#225: Jul 13th 2011 at 9:02:28 AM

I decided to skip scoring the fourth entry since I can't figure out how to word it, and I just read the fifth story. It's middle of the pack, but with a racially different style than the last four (two were deep, while two were confusing to read).

And if any of the judges want to discuss the entries with me, you can either start a conversation with PMs, or if you're using Google Docs to judge it, we can set up a chat session with that.


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