I'll probably bring in Violet for Iceberg. I've done some retooling since her last appearance, so random violence shouldn't be nearly as much of an issue.
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialviolet is psycho girl, right? oh goody. maybe not random violence, but random psychosis would be fun, no?
Whatcha gonna do, little buckaroo? | i be pimpin' madoka ficsLooks like carnival's headed for an explosive finale...
No one believes me when I say angels can turn their panties into guns.Oh, one thing to remember as this thread draws to a close.
Most of the time, the tropers who participated in it will post on the Character Development Thread after its completion to talk about what they learned about writing, what they learned about their character(s), how they think they handled their character... you name it. I'm going to assume that we are still keeping those things on the Carnival thread instead of here.
Also, I am withdrawing a little earlier. Cyrus is not a very strong exorcist compared to, say, his mentor, and all this power is giving him a migraine. Realistically, there is no reason to keep him in anymore.
edited 16th May '11 8:42:11 PM by CrystalGlacia
"Jack, you have debauched my sloth."...it is impossible to write a fight scene like this.
um.
i am never going to try writing a fight scene like that ever again.
i apologize for stealing characters in order to insert one-liners, it just feels so unnatural without dialogue.
Whatcha gonna do, little buckaroo? | i be pimpin' madoka ficsohhh god.
sooo
because i'm stupid and we're all ninjaing each other.
the room has been...
1. subject to an Ao E electricity spell...that everybody promptly ignored.
2. subject to an Ao E ice spell...that actually worked. okay then, um...
the knife is...
1. broken, but still retains its properties
2. broken, and needing to be reforged in order to regain its properties
3. embedded inside Mary ANN
4. not embedded inside Mary ANN, seeing as she's going on like nothing's happening
Mary ANN is...
1. in the greenhouse
2. in the middle of a jump
3. on the lawn.
I have officially no idea what's going on.
Whatcha gonna do, little buckaroo? | i be pimpin' madoka ficsWell, I would only complain about it if you were making the characters act inconsistently with their established mannerisms, but I think you handled that just fine.
I dislike it when my characters are stolen by someone else for obvious reasons. The last time I had my character stolen, he was made to behave in exactly the opposite way I would've made him react in that situation. That made me a little unhappy.
Fight scenes are a little hard to choreograph alone, but with four other people added in, the difficulty goes up considerably.
edited 16th May '11 9:21:39 PM by CrystalGlacia
"Jack, you have debauched my sloth."And here I am, more alert and focused than I've been all day. I think coordinating the fights could help a bit, but it seems to be working out well enough.
No one believes me when I say angels can turn their panties into guns.I said it was because the thing got shattered — since such knives are supposed to be invincible, the result was actually undefined, and I just rolled with it. Could also blame the proximity of the universe's end making even Anti-Magic fail — you could just straight up say stopping AnA from getting the Tesseract has been rendered physically impossible, because it has to happen. Whatever.
At this point, the Damur is mostly going to stay out of the way and No-Sell everything, staying alive by pure will to live until the time is right.
edited 16th May '11 9:37:31 PM by KillerClowns
She's also being slowly frozen to death, unless she's got some kind of magic resistance.
^ Yeah. That's what I was thinking. Except not slowly freezing, just...dead. Very dead.
Unless there's magical resistance that I don't know about because I don't know what's going on.
Whatcha gonna do, little buckaroo? | i be pimpin' madoka ficsWait, but where are we, because Helen and Frederick are on the lawn right now. Because they don't have magic freeze-spell resistance.
Is Kiora on the lawn as well?
Whatcha gonna do, little buckaroo? | i be pimpin' madoka ficsYeah, everyone's on the lawn except Mary, and we're coordinating a strike.
No one believes me when I say angels can turn their panties into guns.

Actually, I'll go with Alex, since she is the only one of them from a realistic setting and sees how she goes. I'll just put Kevin, Finn, and Justice into the queue.
But now I can't have a Titanic-style Auto Erotica scene...