Doing some advertising and posting another chapter?
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!Yeah, mentioning and linking to it on his Contributor's Page would help.
Honestly, Nick, I mean no offense but your page comes off as a little whiny. I can relate to you rather easily so it's not that I think you're blowing things out of proportions. Meh, I don't know. I'll shut up now.
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!Can't wait to see the prologue chapters. It definitely needed them since, as I told you in the PM, chapter one was very rushed. A couple do good ideas but not done well (kinda like Sonic '06. It had several good ideas but none of them were done well).
I really need to get to writing the next chapter of my fanfic and work on my novel...
EDIT: Whoa, you didn't have to delete your entire page. There wasn't anything wrong with the tropes section (although, I would suggest that you split it into tropes for your works and tropes for you).
edited 23rd May '11 6:34:22 PM by Zelenal
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!The entire first paragraph is confusing. You don't want to reveal information, that much is obvious, but the way you did it is bad. Might I suggest: "The boy looked down at what was going on. A normal individual would have screamed in pain by now but this one lacked that basic human function by now." This would also solve my next point.
I stopped keeping track after this because I stopped caring.
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book![1], the prologue, explaining why the cast acts as they do. This is the complete prologue for now.
edited 21st Jul '11 11:29:10 PM by NickTheSwing
Any reason the link leads to a blank page?
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!So... you gonna post this on fictionpress.com and link to it?
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!So, just asking, I am trying to make a petty villain, but I want to make sure its not too overwhelmingly stupid given that said villain, while a Smug Snake, is still rather capable otherwise.
One of the villains coming up, Nebiros, is trying to cause the Blood Feast, which would unleash Satan, and cause the end of the world. For that he'd need to kill the hero and take the MacGuffin inside of him. The reason he's doing this? He is the fifth of seven brothers in a magical family, and was always "the average one". So he decided to end the world to make everyone remember him.
edited 24th Aug '11 6:07:07 PM by NickTheSwing
Yes. It is extremely petty. Why not have him do it For Science! to see what happens After the End? Or, alternatively, give him so psychosis so he's just a Complete Monster for no reason other than For the Evulz?
edited 24th Aug '11 6:10:23 PM by Zelenal
Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!Psychosis is always a fun one, mostly because due to part Hollywood Mental Illnesses and part unfortunate real life instances, it can be the explanation for all evil.
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialYeah, I'll have him say its because he is tired of being the Average One, but he's really just a psychotic bastard without any sanity, and he's just in it blatantly For the Evulz.

Well, in his defense, it was eighteen days between his last two bumps and it was twelve days since then with no bumps other than my bit of advice.
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