Out of curiosity, is Avax and xyr attitudes to things annoying or to melodramatic, I wonder? I'm kind of trying to portray a case of 'Blue-and-Orange Morality' with it that's not always human but is still understandable in some sense or another. Also, I like the idea of aliens that are more alien than just Rubber-Forehead Aliens, but I wonder if it gets too confusing? The other thing, is Avax's presence making things more serious than they should be? I know that this is meant to be fairly light-hearted.
-Avax slowly gets to xyr feet and stands next to Luna-
Your... your majesty... it is good, to see you on... on my side. I thought you had betrayed the moon, and justice.
edited 31st Aug '12 9:48:48 AM by Eventua
Nah, bro. I think he's fine so far. Definitely getting Blue and Orange vibes from him. :)
(Still building a card tower.)
(Also looks Phoenix over to see if he's gotten better. Cringes at Tomo's words.)
edited 31st Aug '12 9:51:53 AM by MobileLeprechaun
make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019-Avax glares, and begins to bare xyr teeth, more so than before- [1]
Sorcerer, 'incubus', fiend, abomination... I care not for your name. But I do care that you have so flagrantly done so much wrong.
-xe rises to xyr full height-
You have tortured innocents! Manipulated others! You have used sorcery, and rejected the will of others, even when they ask you to stop!
-xyr second mouth extends-
And while I may be separate from my kind, the will of my ancestors still breathes through me! With their strength, with the light of the moon, with the help of those who reject injustice and see the need for force when due...
-xe snarls, and releases a deep, foul scream, that chills the bone and breaks the hearts of the weak-
I swear, you will suffer! Agony for agony!
-and so, xe charges forwards, claws and teeth bared-
edited 31st Aug '12 9:58:39 AM by Eventua
(Nods solemnly. Tries to stop Avax from plowing into Tomo's firewall, using his body as a shield)
(Plays with his hair, trying to stifle any anomalous concern for the well-being of others that might crop up.)
edited 31st Aug '12 10:00:41 AM by MobileLeprechaun
make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019-as Myszkowski tries to block Avax, xe spins, forcing his blade away-
-the second mouth then extends, spraying forth a small burst of acid through the flames, igniting as it passes through towards Tomo-
You cannot break my will so easily, fiend! And Myszkowski, while I respect your will, if you will not back down, then I will treat you as I would treat this deciever, for you willingly join him!
edited 31st Aug '12 10:04:44 AM by Eventua

(Decides that whatever's going on is not worth his time and starts building a card tower.)
(Hasn't looked up. Eyes shift slightly to look at Phoenix.)
edited 31st Aug '12 9:42:16 AM by MobileLeprechaun
make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019