YMMV / If Bella Were Sane

• Nightmare Fuel: The Cullens' entire presence is a nightmare to behold in the entire fic, especially when told from the perspective of a sane Bella. First, the whole stalking ordeal in Chapter 1, then Alice kidnapping her to fly to Italy to "save" Edward from dying from suicide, and later Edward driving her to Vegas to get hitched without her consent since she was drunk at the time...
• The Woobie: Hard not to feel sorry for poor Bella, after she gets either stalked or kidnapped by a crazy sparkly vampire in every single chapter of the fic, obviously excluding the content-free Chapter 3. Her relief in getting her non-consensual marriage to her stalker annulled in the final diary entry is palpable.

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