- Many of the Rated M for Manly moments of the story are so incredibly over the top that is very hard to take them seriously.
- In the seventh part of the story, a wizard names Clawdorf marries a pony. Ma Kes Just As Much Sense In Context.
- In the third part of the story, there is a chapter names "Hulk Loses His Pants", which contains this gem:
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