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- When Erika attempts to use a theme song. You can seriously just imagine an accompning Record Scratch.*roll theme*Ness: Wait, we aint have no opening!Erika: Oh! Sorry! Heh heh
- Sonic, Ness, and Robin's first response.Fic: Sara went to nentendo world to save.Ness: What save file?Sonic: Aww, Ness! I wanted first dibs!Ness: Tuff luck, dude!Robin: This is my first exposure to English - first impression: This writer is horrid at it.
- Imagining this small detail in video format helps make the fic much more bareable.
- Erika's reaction to Supper Smash Bras.The game where you smash bras for supper?
- Erika's response to Sonic and Rock not knowing of 'lesbans' is this for those who have seen what she means first hand.Ironic considering your fandoms...
- Another humourous reaction.Fic: you Christens wil be defeet on day!Sonic: Off with their feet! Wait, whats a Christen?
- Sonic is left with no idea about what Mr. Jonson is saying, and asks Robin for help.Robin: What? Im used to literature, not the embodiment of the worst that can happen without a publishing house!
- According to the fic, God is 'waring a rob'.Sonic: Rob? Hes wearing ROB?! My, what a unique fashion sense, if I say so myself!
- Apparently, a bunch of Heatrans disapprove of God murdering Mr. Jonson.Erika: I didnt type that folks, it was spelt like that and capitalized like that from the start its just HEATRANS!!!)*pics of Heatrans spin around as HEATRANS!!11!! flashes onscreen*
- Sara's bro is her brother.Robin: Unless "bro" is his name?
- Satan plans to do evil stuff in 'Nentendo World'.Robin: Stuff. How specific.Sonic: It's a vague threat of vagueness!
- Erika takes the "Hai" and adds an "O" to it.
- Sara mistakes 'Samas' for "Mister Chef from Hallo".Sonic: Theres a chef in the house?! Hey Mr. Chef, Id like a chili dog with the works, please!
- Sara mentions how she 'cloded' her eyes.Rock: She clouded her eyes? No, that makes no sense for a biological human.
- Ness gets confused by Sara 'madding out' with an apparent robot.Ness: *double take* Fluffernutters! How is that even possible?!
- They find out that 'Mister Chef' was actually 'Samas'.Ness: Oh no,it's not Samus, it's this person named "Samas"!Erika: Dude, is she color blind?
- The reaction to the shooted/shouted confusion.Ness: Shes shootin werds outta her mouth now? Actually, that sounds like a legit verb!
- 'Samas' starts to 'rap'.Sonic: Samus rapping? Now thats hilarious!Erika: Wait, you dont mean *dramatically, screen zooms in* No. This just plunged into that territory!? *red beacon flashes*
- 'Samas' grabs Sara's shirt and her shirt.Sonic: Two shirts? That some kinda fashion statement?
- Marth acts heavily out of character in the fic, prompting this line.Sonic: Unfortunately, Marth was dragged back in after having a bunch of copies throw the invader off.
- Amongst the 'Christens' is Sold Snape.Robin: All of a sudden, Severus Snape from that story was sold into here Okay, that sounded wrong.
- The reason for 'Snape' being Marth's father is a failed attempt at Rule of Cool.Ness: Dude, theyre from two completely different times! This ladys troll logic is hilarious! *stuffs face with popcorn*
- Sara mentions a 'govermint vaksine'.Ness: Introducing, the new Govermint! Its a government an mint all in one!
- The fic does not include every Smasher.
- Before the commentary even begins, Calem mistakes Sonic for a Pokemon.
- Wario can apparently only eat Vegetas.Erika: Sonic, what's the stupid level of this? *tosses him script*Sonic: IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAAAAANND!!!
- The whole party's collective confusion at "3" and their individual responses, culminating into Erika being cut off mid-sentence.Roy: Pardon? Is that it?Robin: *rubs eyes with arm*...What?Rock: *scratching head* *pupils rolling around cartoonily* Does not compute!Lucas: Umm Ness?Ness: Sorry dude, even I cant translate this, man!Pit: Uhh 4!Kristoff: *wat face*Calem: Quoi? Is that supposed to be an emoticon?Sonic: Beats me!Sudz: *scratches head* Three? *somehow kitty-faced without the mouth* The heck is that supposed to mean?Ryu: I dont evenErika: Three? T-three?! *shakes arms, goes up to the screen* THRE- *cut off*)
- Everyone's reaction to the "Lick my shit?" line. Which includes a Troll 2 style scream from Erika, a very strange Hurricane of Euphemisms from Ness, and Kristoff being deadpan and Rock and Sudz being naive as usual, among other things.
- In the author's notes, Erika refers to the party as "7 kids and a chaperone" (referring to Robin).
- What is Cloud's quote when "selected"? "Okay then... let's mosey."