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Description off Fanfiction.net: "One discussion in the academy introduces Naruto to his first real friends and changes his life forever. Together, they will work hard, push each other, and unlock their true potential. NaruHina"

True Potential is a Naruto Fan Fic by DryBonesKing. It's a For Want of a Nail fic, with the divergence point being that Naruto becomes friends with Hinata and Shikamaru during the Academy. The Sandaime Hokage notices this, and subsequently places the three together as a genin team. Their sensei is the rather unusual choice of Anko. The story slowly spirals outward from there, with many marked changes from the original canon.

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One of the fic's strongest points is the usage of Ascended Extra, as many minor or background characters play a prominent role.

The fic is ongoing, currently sitting at over half a million words and counting.


True Potential contains examples of:

  • Aborted Arc: Acording to the author's notes, Hidan's introduction was initially meant to be the focus of a much longer arc, basically being yet another "C-Rank mission going wrong" in which Team Anko fights several Jashin Cultists, eventually leading to a fight against Hidan on a Jashin Temple. The author decided to cancel it upon realizing how little it added to the actual story.
  • Adaptational Badass: Quite a few, though more as a result of changed circumstances:
    • Dosu is rather notable, as his canonical history amounts to curbstomping Lee and then getting one-shotted by Gaara. This time, he's up against Gaara in the preliminaries. Gaara's cocky and doesn't take him seriously. Dosu is quick to show that sand can't block sound, giving Gaara a fairly close fight. While he loses, he does goes on to defect to Konoha.
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    • Hidan may turn into one, as the author has stated his belief that he was easily the weakest member of the Akatsuki. As such, after a humiliating defeat at the hands of Naruto, Sakura, and Kiba (for context, a newly minted chunin — albeit, a jinchuriki, for the strongest biju no less — and two genin, respectively) vows to train harder. And this happens prior to the Time Skip...
      • And when we see him back after the Time Skip, he made good on that vow. On top of being generally stronger, he can now turn his body into a mass of blood to avoid attacks, use his own blood as a weapon, and summon a trio of zombies with body modifications to fight for him.
  • All Your Powers Combined: Like in canon, Kabuto grafted onto himself the DNA of many ninja to acquire their abilities. Unlike canon, though, he extends this to far more people than just Orochimaru, the Sound Five and Taka. He has revealed to possess so far Kimimaro's Dead Bone Pulse, Guren's Crystal Release and Pakura's Scorch Release. And he plans to raid more cemeteries in order to acquire even more Bloodline Limits.
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  • Alternate Universe: Downplayed. While most of the changes are the result of the initial divergence, a few others are not, such as Tayuya being an Uzumaki or Roshi still living in Iwa instead of Walking the Earth.
  • Anticlimax: Kimimaro is unceremoniously killed off by Kabuto while in a coma, having never even encountered the heroes.
    • Somewhat Justified post-Time Skip: Kabuto gives Kimimaro's body to Sasori for use as a puppet and as a peace offering.
  • Arc Number: Three. Naruto, Hinata and Shikamaru form Team 3, there's a lot of emphasis on legendary trios such as Hiruzen, Homura, and Koharu and the Legendary Sannin (with Team 3 becoming the next legends of their generation), and Naruto's Genin Team is Team 9, which is 3 squared.
  • Ascended Extra: Aside from the main trio, many prominent characters had very little canon deveopment.
    • Anko, despite being the former student of Orochimaru, had very little screentime. She's initially not happy with being assigned a genin team, but eventually grows to like them. In addition, she plays a crucial role in killing Orochimaru, and later is inducted into the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist.
    • Dosu survives the Chunin Exams and narrowly avoids getting assassinated by Kabuto; he later provides Hiruzen information on the Orochimaru's plans and eventually defects to Konoha, when he later accompanies Anko, Shikamaru, and Hinata on a mission.
    • Special note goes to the Jinchuriki. The author specifically laments how most of them were underutilized in canon.
      • Han is met by Naruto on the latter's first C-Rank mission, as a jonin-sensei. The Iwa shinobi is very bitter towards humanity in general, and he advises Naruto to give up on ever making friends. The younger jinchuriki eventually manages to get him to loosen up.
      • Roshi is (initially) Han's only friend, though much more upbeat. He has a slight case of Screw Politeness, I'm a Senior!, as well as a rivalry with Jiraiya (see below on Sitcom Arch-Nemesis).
      • Utakata tries to avoid the Kiri civil war, despite both sides wishing to recruit him. He's eventually convinced to join the rebels, upon being impressed with their resolve.
      • Yagura functions as the Big Bad of the Kiri Invasion arc (albeit with Tobi as the Man Behind the Man). He shows exactly why he's the Mizukage, taking on Naruto, Mei and Utakata at the same time. After being freed from the mind-control, he accepts being declared dead so that Kiri can heal.
      • Fu is locked inside Taki after one of her teammates tried to kill her, and is barred from leaving the village for her own protection. Hidan and Kakuzu gather a small army in order to crush Takigakure and capture her. After surviving the invasion, she's forced to move to Konoha while Taki undergoes reconstruction.
    • Kurotsuchi went from being a rather minor character who was only prominent in filler and in the epilogue, for replacing her grandfather as Tsuchikage, to supplanting Temari as Shikamaru's love interest.
    • The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist as well. Besides sparing and expanding Zabuza's role, Jinin Akebino, Jinpachi Munashi and Kushimaru Kuriare are prominently featured in the Kirigakure Civil War arc, the former two fighting for Mei, and the latter two fighting for Yagura. and all of them minus Zabuza end up dead during the arc.
  • Bad Boss: Suien kills one of his subordinates simply because he was taking too long to beat Anko, and to test his Hero Water-infused powers.
  • Battle in the Center of the Mind: In order to release Yagura from Tobi's control, Naruto has to travel inside his mind and fight an avatar of Tobi, as well as the Sanbi.
  • Bitter Sweet Ending: The Iwagakure arc ends this way: Kurotsuchi defeats Suzumebachi, becoming the new Tsuchikage and thus averting a potential war against Konoha, and her resolve impresses Mu so much, he's able to break free from Edo Tensei and returns to the afterlife; however not only Onoki and Kitsuchi died, but to add insult to the injury Kabuto escaped with their corpses.
  • Blood Knight: Anko has this, as befitting someone working in Torture & Interrogation. However, she also manages to combine it with Genki Girl, which greatly unnerves her students.
  • Blood Magic: Some of Hidan's new skills post-timeskip are blood related (on top of the one he already had), like turning himself into a mass of blood or use his own blood to harm his enemies.
  • Broken Pedestal: A rather comedic example occurs to Naruto's view of Jiraiya. The two first meet when Naruto is learning about his heritage, and Naruto actually knows who the Sannin is. He's suitably awed and happy to get to know his godfather, especially once Jiraiya starts teaching him some jutsu. Then Naruto learns about Icha Icha...
  • Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Doku Sugita, the director of the Kiri rebellions medical corps, is very passionate about wounds, examining each wound to try to find out how it happened. He also believes that a person's blood type reflects their personality and compatibility with others. However, he's also shown to be an exceptional healer.
  • Curb-Stomp Battle: During the Konoha Invasion, Hiruzen has to face the Sound Four in their full-power Cursed forms. It's so one-sided as to be a Foregone Conclusion, with Tayuya only surviving due to Hiruzen suspecting her lineage.
  • Death by Adaptation:
    • Orochimaru and Baki die during the Sound-Sand invasion.
    • A very minor example not many people will notice: Anko here states that her teammates died after they were unable to survive being branded with a cursed seal. However, the manga shows that at least one of them is still alive (Kabuto's team's sensei in the Chunin Exam).
    • Cee (the Fourth Raikage's blonde sensor-nin bodyguard) is murdered by Fu & Torune on Danzo's orders, in the latter's efforts to ruin the possibility of Konoha/Kumo peace.
    • Onoki made all the way to the end of the manga. Not here, where he dies in a duel against Suzumebachi Kamizuru.
    • Same goes for Kitsuchi, who survived the Fourth Ninja War, but is killed by Kabuto here.
  • Death Faked for You: After being freed from Tobi's mind control, Yagura is given the identity of Kamui, a rebel shinobi who was stationed in Kirigakure as a spy for Mei. Being rather religious, he's not too happy with the name, but goes along with it.
  • Demoted to Extra: The rest of Team 7 (Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi) recieve much less focus, due to the protagonist being on a different team. However, Sasuke does receive significant development during the Chunin Exams, even being convinced to not pull a Face–Heel Turn. Sakura is later developed during a return mission to Nami no Kuni, dealing with her feeling of Can't Catch Up. Both also become close friends of Naruto regardless.
  • Embarrassing Nickname: Anko's nicknames for her genin, "Whiskers" (Naruto), "Stutters-chan" (Hinata) and "Lazy Ass" (Shikamaru).
  • Enemy Mine: Upon learning from Itachi of Akatsuki's attack on Kumo during the Chunin Exams, Jiraiya tries to convince the Raikage that, even if an alliance won't happen, at least they should work together in order to fight this threat.
  • Face Your Fears: Why Hinata accepted to act as the Hokage's bodyguard during his meeting with the Raikage: to show everybody that she isn't afraid of him or Kumo from what happened during the Hyuga Affair.
  • Freudian Excuse Is No Excuse: No, seriously, this fanfic loves this trope.
    • In Chapter 17, when Hinata asks Naruto and Shikamaru not to hate Neji for his behavior, adding that Neji has his reasons, Naruto replies that no matter what Neji went through, it doesn't excuse him being rude to her.
    Hinata : That's…my cousin. He…wasn't always like that. P-Please don't hate him for that. H-He has his reasons for his behavior…
    Naruto : I don't care what reasons he has, no one can be that rude to you. He better hope we don't have to fight!
    • Risho, from Iwa curb-stomped Kiba and almost killed him in the preliminary exams. Why? Risho is from the Kurogane clan. During the Third Great Ninja War, over a third of Iwa's casualties came from said clan alone. Sasuke and Sakura aren't sympathetic and the former clearly hopes to avenge Kiba. Naruto, while slightly sympathetic and pointing out that Kiba was also a jerk, also adds that Kiba had nothing to do with the Kurogane clan's casualties.
    ""Disgusting." Naruto finished Han's sentence with a slight growl. The blonde was clenching his fists tightly. "…even if he lost most of his clan, even if Kiba was also being an ass, that is no excuse for that. He looked like he was going to straight up kill him, and Kiba didn't do a damn thing! He wasn't the one who killed anyone in war." The Uzumaki turned his look over to where Risho was in the corner of the room. His eyes narrowed. "It's disgusting and pathetic!""
    • An old woman explains to Shikamaru and Suigetsu in Chapter 45 that she is excited about the execution of five bloodline wielders because her husband and children were killed by the Kaguya clan (who happens to have bloodlines). While they hide it, Suigetsu (who has a bloodline himself) later tells Shikamaru that he's not sympathetic at all and that he's sure that the people about to be executed have nothing to do with the woman's family's death. Shikamaru agrees.
    "" I know about the fucking mission, okay? I'm doing what I can! But it's kinda hard hearing these bastards talk about how they're excited to watch people like me die." Suigetsu hissed at him. "I don't care who or what killed their families. It wasn't me and I sure as hell know it wasn't any of the people they're going to execute. So sorry if it pisses me off listening to them talk for too long!""
    • When Hiruzen orders Tsunade to come back to Konoha, he tells her that the loss of Dan and Nawaki is not an excuse to become bitter towards Konoha, as it would dishonor the very thing Dan and Nawaki fought for.
    Hiruzen : I know what happened to Nawaki and Dan, Tsunade. I know you are still affected by the events, but we have all experienced loss. I gave you all of the time in the world to mourn; I did not give you time to allow your grief to consume you. And I did not give you time to place any form of bitterness against Konoha, the very village that both Nawaki and Dan loved above all else! They would both be honored to see you as the Hokage and you know that. Don't reject the title [of Hokage] out of bitterness; the very action is a direct insult against everything they stood for!"
  • Genre Savvy: Deconstructed. Not being related to the clan head, Kanji Yamanaka realized that he's pretty much a Red Shirt, somebody who will probably never go past Chunin, will die during a mission or battle, and no one besides his immediate family will mourn or remember him. The reason for this line of thinking is that his older brother Fu Yamanaka disappeared one day many years ago on his way to the Academy, and Kanji felt that the clan did very little to find him, not helped by the fact that very few people went to the funeral.
  • Hannibal Lecture: The brutal Kiri bloodline exectioner Karitoriki gives one to Shikamaru while Shikamaru prepares to kill Karitoriki via immobilizing him with shadow jutsu, and then sticking explosive tags all over his body. The executioner taunts him, gleefully pointing out that Shikamaru is brutally killing him in revenge for his earlier murder of bloodline users. Karitoriki kills those with bloodlines due to one of them murdering his family when he was young. Thus, he proclaims that he and Shikamaru are exactly the same, laughing manically as Shikamaru detonates the tags just to stop his taunting.
  • Handicapped Badass: Misora, a Kiri kunoichi who's actually blind, but learned to sense chakra to such point that she doesn't appear to be blind.
  • Heel–Face Turn: Dosu and Tayuya end up working for Konoha, and all the happier for it.
  • Heroic BSoD:
    • Shikamaru has one after the above Hannibal Lecture. It takes several chapters and a pep talk with his team and family for Shikamaru to get over it.
    • Fu (the Seven Tails jinchuriki) also has one after she fails to control her Tailed Beast power in a spar against Killer B and Yugito.
    • Kanji Yamanaka and his brother Fu (the Root agent) share one upopn reuniting with each other, to the point that Fu allows Kanji to scan his mind, so he can know what happened after Fu was inducted into Root.
  • Hidden Depths:
    • Yoshikane is such a stickler for tradition because it justifies the death of his youngest son. The real reason he opposes the abolishing of the Caged Bird Seal is because he's jealous that his eldest son won't have to mark one of his children like he did, especially since the seal is ultimately what led to Hizashi's death.
    • Fu might look like a female Naruto at first sight, but she's also a skilled gardener, and enjoys writing poetry.
  • High-Heel–Face Turn: When the Sound Four fight against Hiruzen, he easily kills all the male members, but spares Tayuya on the grounds that she might be an Uzumaki. She later forsakes her allegiance to Orochimaru and becomes a Konoha ninja.
  • I Need to Go Iron My Dog: Upon seeing how well Fu and Shino clicked, Ino left and dragged Choji with her, claiming that Choji had to help her with some "clan stuff".
  • I Owe You My Life: During the Third War, Kakuzu saved the life of a Takigakure ninja who would become its Jonin Commander. Of course, Kakuzu exploits this debt in order to gain access to the village and capture Fu.
  • It Has Been an Honor: Fu (Yamanaka) and Torune mentally tell this to each other after failing Danzo's plan to assassinate the Raikage, knowing that they will be executed.
  • Karmic Death:
    • Unlike canon, Hayate's murderer Baki is killed by Anko.
    • Similarly, Orochimaru is killed by the sensei he tried to murder with the aid of the student he turned into a guinea pig.
  • Klingon Promotion: One becomes Tsuchikage by beating the previous one in a duel. However, in order to do be able to challenge him to begin with, one must have a lot of popular support behind.
  • Lady Swears-a-Lot: Anko is one of these, much to Hinata's discomfort. Also Tayuya. To a lesser degree, Katsumi, and her teammate Hanabi habitually corrects her.
  • Lame Pun Reaction:
    • How Katsumi reacts towards Kanji's puns. Much to her chagrin, most people find them genuinely funny.
    • Also, how Naruto reacts when Yugito (The Two Tailed Cat host) makes a cat pun. She takes offense when Naruto negatively compares it to Killer B's rapping.
  • Lampshade Hanging: Shikamaru comments how often C-Rank missions end up becoming more dangerous than they should be due to somehow ending up involving fighting against a high-level missin-nin (as it happened to Team 3, Team 7 and Team 10), to the point that he thinks that the "C" of the C-Rank stands for "Curse".
  • Leaning on the Fourth Wall: After Sasori and Deidara bring Kabuto to the hideout in the Land of the Rivers note , the former replies with "Really? A rock blocking a secret entrance? That sounds like something out of a kid's manga".
  • Long-Distance Relationship: Shikamaru has one with Kurotsuchi. At one point he expressed a little jealousy over Naruto and Hinata being able to see each other every day.
  • Might Makes Right: Invoked. For Hinata and Neji's plan to unite the Main and Branch houses and remove the Caged Bird Seal, they have to defeat the leader of the elders and Hiashi's father, Yoshikane, in a public duel in front of the rest of the elders. Yoshikane brings Sai to the fight as his partner to even the odds. Hinata and Neji rise victorious, making it a case of Right Makes Might.
  • Mythology Gag: Shikamaru "loses" his match with Sasuke the exact same way he "lost" to Temari.
  • Names to Run Away from Really Fast:
    • Koharu is the "Grim Reaper of Konoha". Chapter 57 shows that she more than lives up to the name.
    • Karitoriki is Kirigakure's "Bloodline Hunter/Executioner". In his first appearance, in chapter 45, he executes 5 people who happened to have bloodlines.
  • Named by the Adaptation: Hiashi's father had no name in neither the manga nor the anime. This fic gives him the name "Yoshikane".
  • Nice Job Fixing It, Villain!: Suzumebachi manages to galvanize plenty of support in Iwa towards challenging Onoki to a formal duel for the position of Tsuchikage in her plot to erase all the progress he's made and go to war against Konoha (especially after Danzo's operatives manage to kill her brothers but fail to kill her); traditionally, when the duel is won, the loser and all of Iwa will follow the winner's lead without question. But after her victory, Suzumebachi then coldly executes the unconscious and helpless Onoki. This blatant breaking of tradition and cold-blooded act of murder immediately turns the entire crowd against her, guaranteeing they'd never follow her as Tsuchikage.
  • Not Me This Time: When Kakuzu shows up to the Akatsuki meeting alone, everybody assumes he just killed his partner again. While Kakuzu was planning to kill him nevertheless, he quickly points out that his partner was killed by a feral Naruto.
  • Not So Similar: When Anko calls out Suien for killing one of his own henchmen, Suien points out that Anko was also trying to kill him and that like him, he didn't care about the henchman's life. Anko 's rebuttal is that he was her enemy and his goals opposed hers, but he was Suien's subordinate who shared the same goals, and Suien only killed him out of pure sadism.
  • Offscreen Moment of Awesome: At several times in the story, important events such as Naruto learning the Rasengan or Neji learning the truth about his father are skipped over or only alluded to. According to the author, these moments occur more or less identically to canon, and he felt he couldn't add anything meaningful to those scenes.
  • One Steve Limit: Chapter 77 lampshades that there are two characters named Fu. The first Omake of chapter 85 has Naruto and his friends trying to find a way to avoid confusing one with the other.
  • Our Zombies Are Different: On top of the canonical Edo Tensei reanimations, there are also the Revenants, zombies made out of Hidan's sacrifices to Jashin, modified for combat purposes. Hidan summons three of them in his fight against Fu.
  • Out of Focus: Shikamaru, Anko, and to a much lesser extent Hinata once the story enters the Shippuden timeframe, due to Naruto's Genin team being introduced and hogging quite a lot of spotlight.
  • Poor Communication Kills: Played for Laughs: Anko first meets her students by bursting into the Academy room with her trademark banner... and then Iruka sheepishly tells her she wasn't supposed to do that for another hour. Later on in an omake, Anko rushes in late to a meeting about the Chunin Exams, only to be told that she isn't a proctor due to having participating students.
  • Pungeon Master:
    • Naruto's student Kanji is one, much to his teammates' dismay.
    • Donwplayed with Yugito, who likes to make puns (usually cat related) from time to time, but nowhere near as often as Kanji.
  • The Quisling: Zagi, Takigakure's Jonin Commander, helped Kakuzu and Suien invade his own village. Though unlike most examples of this trope, he doesn't do it out of personal gain, but because Kakuzu saved his life during the Third War, which Kakuzu cashed in for his collaboration. While fighting for Taki's enemies, he felt horrible doing it and hoped Shibuki and the rest of the Taki ninjas could kill him.
  • Reasonable Authority Figure: Contrary to his usual depiction in fanon, Hiashi Hyuuga is one. While he begins distant as usual, his views begin to change during the pitched match between Neji and Hinata. After the Invasion, he personally begins training the two, in hopes of convincing the clan elders to change traditions on the Cursed Seal.
  • Relationship Upgrade:
    • As it turns out, Yagura and Mei were quite close prior to the former's appointment as Mizukage, and rumors suggested that they were going to marry. However, then Tobi mind-controlled Yagura, and Mei began to lead the rebellion against him. This is one of the primary reasons why Yagura's survival is kept top-secret.
    • Also, Naruto and Hinata during the Kiri Civil War arc.
  • The Remnant: After Orochimaru's death, Yoroi and Misumi decided to gather an army in order to destroy Konoha and avenge him. Unfortunaterly, the small army they gather is easily wiped out by a trio of Konoha ninjas.
  • The Resenter: The real reason Yoshikane opposes the new seal, as stated by Hinata. He's jealous of the fact that his descendants, including his son and grandchildren, won't be forced to mark their children like he had to with Hizashi.
  • Reverse Mole: Itachi feeds intel on Akatsuki to Konoha (and unlike canon, we both get to see it and Konoha gains valuable knowledge on the enemy). However, the fact that Team Three was in Taki to warn them about Akatsuki trying to abduct Fu just when Kakuzu and Hidan were about to do that made them realize that it was too much of a Contrived Coincidence and that there's a traitor among them.
  • Right for the Wrong Reasons: An invoked trope. After the Kiri invasion, Yagura's survival is kept as an S-class secret. However, gossip is already spreading that Naruto helped to kill him, and Hiruzen is well aware that Naruto won't be able to entirely keep in his discomfort at maintaining the lie. Instead, he suggests that Naruto admit discomfort due to "killing" a fellow jinchuriki. This seems to work so far.
  • Sadist: Being one is a requirement for working on Torture & Interrogation. And you will become one after working there for some time if you're not one to begin with.
  • Sadist Teacher:
    • Anko loves to make her students suffer.
    • Yoshino Nara loves to inflict pain when training her son, Naruto or Hinata. To her credit, it proves to be a very effective method.
    • Ibiki as well becomes this for Naruto's Genin when he becomes their temporary sensei, putting on a terrifying display and scaring them to death. However, he himself admits he did it just for his own amusement, and in practice he actually averts this trope.
  • Saying Too Much: During his confrontation with Kabuto, Tobi unwittingly hinted that it's him, not Pain, the true leader of Akatsuki.
  • Sitcom Arch-Nemesis: Jiraiya and Roshi have this dynamic, their hatred from each other being born not out of being ninjas of feuding villages (though there is bad blood from a Noodle Incident during the last war), but out of being dueling writers. Jiraiya's books sell better, but Roshi argues (not without reason) that this is only due to the porn. Not helping matters is the fact that Naruto genuinely likes Roshi's books and dislikes Jiraiya's.
  • Sinister Scythe:
    • Misora carries two of them.
    • This is also Zagi's Weapon of Choice, which he uses to channel Wind Style jutsu.
  • Shockingly Expensive Bill: Anybody dumb or naive enough to treat Naruto to ramen will find themselves with one of these.
  • Sonic Stunner: Dosu has his Melody Gauntlet as in canon. The match against a cocky Gaara demonstrates that it can ignore his otherwise-invulnerable sand.
  • Spared by the Adaptation: Zabuza, Haku, Dosu, Tayuya, Hiruzen, Yagura.
  • Speaks Fluent Animal: Fu is able to communicate with insects.
  • Straw Vulcan: Misora, the blind Kiri kunoichi, who believes all ninja should be ruled by logic and discard emotions. Dosu, however, points out that, if she followed logic like that she should never had become a ninja in the first place due to her blindness, yet she defied logic and trained in order to develop chakra sense fine enough to replace her lack of sight.
  • Summon Magic:
    • The snakes allow Anko to pass on the snake summoning contract to one of her students. She eventually picks Hinata.
    • Shikamaru learns to summon slugs from Tsunade.
  • The Spymaster: After Jiraiya is appointed as Godaime Hokage, he appoints Tayuya as his successor.
  • Team Pet: Hebihiro, Hanabi's snake friend, is this for Team 9.
  • Teeth-Clenched Teamwork: During the Kiri Invasion arc, Hinata is forced to work with Ao, a rebel shinobi who had taken a Byakugan eye from an Hyuga he killed in the previous war. Ao thinks of her as a self-righteous hypocrite since Hinata wouldn't care if that Hyuga killed Ao instead, while Hinata sees him as representing the entire reason for the Hyuga clan's division.
  • Trademark Favorite Food: Naruto and ramen, as always, but also Anko and dango. The similarity is lampshaded several times.
  • Training from Hell: Anko is quite fond of this. Most of the time, her students are completely exhausted by the end. Naruto, when he gets his own genin team, emulates her in his own way.
  • Tyrant Takes the Helm: Invoked. Suzumebachi really wants to replace Onoki as the next Tsuchikage, and undo all the progress he made towards Konoha in order to start another war.
  • Unrelated in the Adaptation: Onoki isn't the grandson of the first Tsuchikage. This was done to avoid making him related to the Kamizuru siblings, who are also featured in this fic.
  • You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!:
    • Anko has this reaction upon seeing the bill after treating Naruto to ramen. Teuchi mentioned that Iruka and the Third Hokage had similar reactions.
      • Later, when Anko is confronting Naruto about having to blow a week worth of pay on ramen, Naruto said that he tried to eat less than usual, since he didn't want Anko to spend too much money on him. A rather shocked Anko tries to ponder how Naruto can eat so much ramen, and more importantly, pay for it with his Genin earning.
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