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How I Traced Your Drawings and Derailed Your Characters
Oh Hell YES is this ever overdue for a roasting. Will be following!
HamburgerTime
Valiona
Seems interesting I tired to read this once, but I just couldn't get though it.
32ndfreeze
Valiona
I recall there being a lot of speculation as to what a "chard monster" is when this comic came out. Some people thought it was a typo of "child molester," owing to Zuko sleeping with a 15-year-old, but I think the consensus was eventually reached that she was supposed to say charred monster; that is, a dig at his scar.
HamburgerTime
Valiona
I would think the author should have take the 10-20 seconds needed to Google the properties of ginseng.
32ndfreeze
Valiona
Korval
OK, I want to say up-front that I think it's a terrible idea to have Azula achieve "redemption" at all. Or at least, not in the way most people think of it. I want Azula to never, ever be sorry for anything she has ever done. Even if she turned to doing "good" later on, Azula would still be unrepentant about her past actions.
And I also want to say that, if you're going to redeem Azula, doing it via amnesia is a terrible way to do it (and this is not limited to Azula; amnesiac redemption is generally not a good idea). That's not to say that it
can't work. But you have to work around one simple fact.
In order to have a character be redeemed, the character has to change (see Zuko). And you're supposed to
show this change (again, see Zuko). Amnesia is basically a giant cheat. You don't need to show change; you just handwave it away. Exactly as they do here.
There's no continuity between actual Azula and "changed" Azula. One of them died off-screen and the other was born in her body. Azula therefore never
achieves redemption; she just
gets it.
Now, that's not to say that it's impossible to make the amnesia angle work. But you can't do it like
this. The key thing you have to do to make this work is to have amnesia Azula still be
Azula. She may not know about her relationships, her "friends", her enemies, her betrayals, or her past. But she should still be
recognizably Azula.
She should be cocky, self-assured, clever, perfectionist, and even dangerous. She may not have her memories, but she should still be who she is. Even if Azula felt vulnerable, she would
never show it. Just getting Amnesia!Azula to admit that she doesn't know who she is should be like pulling teeth.
Zuko says that he "never had relations with Mai,"
Ignoring the ridiculous Bill Clinton parallel there... WHAT? Zuko never consummated his marriage? I know it was arranged and everything, but that's kinda the point of an arranged marriage: to have children with the other person. If the marriage isn't consummated, it isn't actually a marriage.
Further, that adds more righteous fuel for Mai. Even ignoring all she's done to
earn Zuko, he won't even recognize their marriage as legitimate (by attempting to produce a proper heir). This only helps to justify a lot of what she is going to be revealed to do.
execute her like he did with their father
So... all that Aangst that Aang went through was completely nullified. Just like that. And Aang just let it happen.
Sure...
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Valiona
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