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** Foxface's death. Unlike in canon, [[spoiler:she actually allied with Peeta until she was killed by the wolverine that took his leg when he tried to save her]]. Her last words were ''"Peeta... needs to be you... go home... too much love to die..."''
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child.
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child.
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** Foxface's death. Unlike in canon, [[spoiler:she actually allied with Peeta until she was killed by the wolverine that took his leg when he tried to save her]]. Her last words were ''"Peeta... needs to be you... go home... too much love to die..."''
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child."''
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child.
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* MartyStu: Peeta is, for all intents and purposes, perfect. Mind you, being rich as he is after winning the 74th Hunger Games, he's ''able'' to be as absurdly generous as he is with Katniss and her family. Possibly subverted as the story is continued though, since he's only seen through Katniss' POV and it's only been a few days.
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* Glurge: Enjoyable as the story is, it edges dangerously close in places.
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* Glurge: {{Glurge}}: Enjoyable as the story is, it edges dangerously close in places.
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* Glurge: Enjoyable as the story is, it edges dangerously close in places.
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* TearJerker: Although [[ForegoneConclusion it was inevitable]], Larkspur's death. Even though we only have a short time to get to know her, it's like Rue's death crossed with [[spoiler:Prim's]]. She was such an innocent little girl, all she wanted was to kiss a boy and to get to have a Toasting and Peeta gave her both.
** Foxface's death. Unlike in canon, [[spoiler:she actually allied with Peeta until she was killed by the wolverine that took his leg when he tried to save her]]. Her last words were ''"Peeta... needs to be you... go home... too much love to die..."''
** Foxface's death. Unlike in canon, [[spoiler:she actually allied with Peeta until she was killed by the wolverine that took his leg when he tried to save her]]. Her last words were ''"Peeta... needs to be you... go home... too much love to die..."''
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* MartyStu: Peeta is, for all intents and purposes, perfect. Mind you, being rich as he is after winning the 74th Hunger Games, he's ''able'' to be as absurdly generous as he is with Katniss and her family. Possibly subverted as the story is continued though, since he's only seen through Katniss' POV and it's only been a few days.
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child.
* WhatAnIdiot: Katniss' ObliviousToLove tendancies are so strong that it's hard to believe she wasn't dropped on her head as a child.
