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wham line isn't ymmv
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* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, the first two or three sentences are enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
-->''[[spoiler:You should not have come here. This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here. What is here is dangerous and repulsive.]]''
-->''[[spoiler:You should not have come here. This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here. What is here is dangerous and repulsive.]]''
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* NightmareFuel: The effects of the "curse". The fact it's actually [[spoiler:radiation poisoning]] doesn't make it any less scary.
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* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [[spoiler: "This is not a place of honor"]] is enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
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* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [[spoiler: "This is not a place of honor"]] is the first two or three sentences are enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.already.
-->''[[spoiler:You should not have come here. This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here. What is here is dangerous and repulsive.]]''
-->''[[spoiler:You should not have come here. This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here. What is here is dangerous and repulsive.]]''
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* FridgeHorror: The story is meant to inspire this feeling in the reader by the end as it recontextualizes what happens in the rest of the story.
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* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [spoiler]"This is not a place of honor"[/spoiler] is enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
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* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [spoiler]"This [[spoiler: "This is not a place of honor"[/spoiler] honor"]] is enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
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* GeniusBonus: The story's Foreshadowing is only comprehensible to people who can recognize the structure from its description.
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* FridgeHorror: The story is meant to inspire this feeling in the reader by the end as it recontextualizes what happens in the rest of the story.
* GeniusBonus: The story'sForeshadowing {{Foreshadowing}} is only comprehensible to people who can recognize the structure from its description.description.
* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [spoiler]"This is not a place of honor"[/spoiler] is enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
* GeniusBonus: The story's
* WhamLine: The translation of the writing on the wall. For those who are familiar with the structure, [spoiler]"This is not a place of honor"[/spoiler] is enough to give them the chills and make them realize exactly what the building was, if they hadn't figured it out already.
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* GeniusBonus: The story's Foreshadowing is only comprehensible to people who can recognize the structure from its description.
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