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* AssPull - [[spoiler:Alecto's]] love for Pamela came ''way'' out of left field.
** Also, at the end when it is revealed that [[spoiler: the whole story took place in the forties despite everything being decidedly modern. Especially when you remember that Cora has pictures of Ash that are dated for the 1990's. AssPull indeed. Probably crosses over with WritersCannotDoMath.]]
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: "I choose to live happily."
** Also, at the end when it is revealed that [[spoiler: the whole story took place in the forties despite everything being decidedly modern. Especially when you remember that Cora has pictures of Ash that are dated for the 1990's. AssPull indeed. Probably crosses over with WritersCannotDoMath.]]
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: "I choose to live happily."
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* AssPull - AssPull:
** [[spoiler:Alecto's]] love for Pamela came ''way'' out of left field.
** Also, at the end when it is revealed that[[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the whole story took place in the forties despite everything being decidedly modern. Especially when you remember that Cora has pictures of Ash that are dated for the 1990's. AssPull indeed. Probably crosses over with WritersCannotDoMath.]]
*SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
* "I choose to live happily."
** [[spoiler:Alecto's]] love for Pamela came ''way'' out of left field.
** Also, at the end when it is revealed that
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* "I choose to live happily."
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome - [[spoiler:Everyone Pamela's ever helped with her fortune-telling shows up to repay the favor, foiling Belus in the process.]]
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome - SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome:
** [[spoiler:Everyone Pamela's ever helped with her fortune-telling shows up to repay the favor, foiling Belus in the process.]]
** [[spoiler:Everyone Pamela's ever helped with her fortune-telling shows up to repay the favor, foiling Belus in the process.]]
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* NightmareFuel - The demons, what the "sage" in one of the stories [[ImAHumanitarian is feeding people]], and the fact that [[spoiler: Alecto is infected by maggots by Belus that eventually drives him insane.]]
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* NightmareFuel - NightmareFuel: The demons, what the "sage" in one of the stories [[ImAHumanitarian is feeding people]], and the fact that [[spoiler: Alecto is infected by maggots by Belus that eventually drives him insane.]]
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* FoeYay - [[spoiler:Ash]] both loves and hates Pamela. [[spoiler:The same goes for Alecto.]]
** [[spoiler:Belial admits that Pamela is the person he loves the most in the world. He also went on an elaborate plan to make her immortal, just so he could have more time to fuck with her. He's the person she hates most in the world.]]
** [[spoiler:Belial admits that Pamela is the person he loves the most in the world. He also went on an elaborate plan to make her immortal, just so he could have more time to fuck with her. He's the person she hates most in the world.]]
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Flame Bait, zero context
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* HoYay - Lots.
* MagnificentBastard - [[spoiler:Belus, Ash and Alecto.]]
* MagnificentBastard - [[spoiler:Belus, Ash and Alecto.]]
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** Arkasia. That is all.
* RelationshipSue - Pamela, [[spoiler:especially as she turns out to be this for all of the male main characters except Aaron and Nebiros.]]
* TearJerker - Quite a few.
* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!
* RelationshipSue - Pamela, [[spoiler:especially as she turns out to be this for all of the male main characters except Aaron and Nebiros.]]
* TearJerker - Quite a few.
* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - [[spoiler:Everyone Pamela's ever helped with her fortune-telling shows up to repay the favor, foiling Belus in the process.]]
** When the tree spirit [[spoiler:impales the abusive father of a little boy and uses the treasure hidden in his tree to pay for the boy's future, despite it meaning that he'll die]].
** When Pamela [[spoiler:figures out that she's trapped in a dream world and impales Victor in that dream, in revenge for ruining her life and killing Ash.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - "I choose to live happily."
** The story of Bread and Cheese.
** When [[spoiler:the alchemist chooses to save the sweet jester doll instead of letting the princess torture it further.]]
** When the tree spirit [[spoiler:impales the abusive father of a little boy and uses the treasure hidden in his tree to pay for the boy's future, despite it meaning that he'll die]].
** When Pamela [[spoiler:figures out that she's trapped in a dream world and impales Victor in that dream, in revenge for ruining her life and killing Ash.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - "I choose to live happily."
** The story of Bread and Cheese.
** When [[spoiler:the alchemist chooses to save the sweet jester doll instead of letting the princess torture it further.]]
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: "I choose to live happily."
** The story of Bread and Cheese.
** When [[spoiler:the alchemist chooses to save the sweet jester doll instead of letting the princess torture it further.]]
** The story of Bread and Cheese.
** When [[spoiler:the alchemist chooses to save the sweet jester doll instead of letting the princess torture it further.]]
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome - [[spoiler:Everyone Pamela's ever helped with her fortune-telling shows up to repay the favor, foiling Belus in the process.]]
** When the tree spirit [[spoiler:impales the abusive father of a little boy and uses the treasure hidden in his tree to pay for the boy's future, despite it meaning that he'll die]].
** When Pamela [[spoiler:figures out that she's trapped in a dream world and impales Victor in that dream, in revenge for ruining her life and killing Ash.]]
** When the tree spirit [[spoiler:impales the abusive father of a little boy and uses the treasure hidden in his tree to pay for the boy's future, despite it meaning that he'll die]].
** When Pamela [[spoiler:figures out that she's trapped in a dream world and impales Victor in that dream, in revenge for ruining her life and killing Ash.]]
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* CompleteMonster - Victor. [[spoiler:This becomes a plot point, with Ash counting on Victor's [[CompleteMonster complete monstrosity]] in order to lure Pamela in. It works.]]
** Also, the princess from the alchemist's story. She initially is believed incapable of feeling any emotion at all. When the alchemist creates a jester doll to amuse her, she quickly finds great pleasure in ''sadistically whipping and torturing the poor thing''. This leads to her ripping the jester's leg off and leaving it bleeding on the ground. When the jester is repaired, the first thing she does is demand it back for more beatings, even as he cries and begs to be saved. [[spoiler:When the alchemist - the only person who believed at all that the princess could love - is disgusted and orders the princess to leave the jester alone, she ignores him and tries to forcibly drag the jester away. It bites her in the butt, in the most painful way possible.]]
** Also, the princess from the alchemist's story. She initially is believed incapable of feeling any emotion at all. When the alchemist creates a jester doll to amuse her, she quickly finds great pleasure in ''sadistically whipping and torturing the poor thing''. This leads to her ripping the jester's leg off and leaving it bleeding on the ground. When the jester is repaired, the first thing she does is demand it back for more beatings, even as he cries and begs to be saved. [[spoiler:When the alchemist - the only person who believed at all that the princess could love - is disgusted and orders the princess to leave the jester alone, she ignores him and tries to forcibly drag the jester away. It bites her in the butt, in the most painful way possible.]]
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* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!
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* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!jester!
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* FoeYay - [[spoiler:Ash]] both loves and hates Pamela. [[spoiler:The same goes for Alecto.]]
** [[spoiler:Belial admits that Pamela is the person he loves the most in the world. He also went on an elaborate plan to make her immortal, just so he could have more time to fuck with her. He's the person she hates most in the world.]]
* HoYay - Lots.
** [[spoiler:Belial admits that Pamela is the person he loves the most in the world. He also went on an elaborate plan to make her immortal, just so he could have more time to fuck with her. He's the person she hates most in the world.]]
* HoYay - Lots.
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** [[spoiler:Of course, she doesn't really ''want'' any of it, especially since it tends to lead to her getting kidnapped, nearly raped, forced into horrific nightmares, etc.]]
** ... Which makes it border on SoBeautifulItsACurse. Just because she doesn't like the attention she gets doesn't mean she's not a RelationshipSue.
** ... Which makes it border on SoBeautifulItsACurse. Just because she doesn't like the attention she gets doesn't mean she's not a RelationshipSue.
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** Also, the princess from the alchemist's story. She initially is believed incapable of feeling any emotion at all. When the alchemist creates a jester doll to amuse her, she quickly finds great pleasure in ''sadistically whipping and torturing the poor thing''. This leads to her ripping the jester's leg off and leaving it bleeding on the ground. When the jester is repaired, the first thing she does is demand it back for more beatings, even as he cries and begs to be saved. [[spoiler:When the alchemist - the only person who believed at all that the princess could love - is disgusted and orders the princess to leave the jester alone, she ignores him and tries to forcibly drag the jester away. It bites her in the butt, in the most painful way possible.]]
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* TearJerker - Quite a few.
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* TearJerker - Quite a few.few.
* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!
* TheWoobie - Dear lord, the jester!
