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Removed what is now "Marty Stu", since it is now Flame Bait that should not be allowed; see the Flame Bait page for more details.
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* GaryStu: Only very early on.
** A pretty debatable statement, as he's still doing things Sylia disapproves of and getting away with it for most of the story. In a lot of ways by the halfway point he's gotten worse, as he's actively asserting his superiority rather than it merely happening.
** A pretty debatable statement, as he's still doing things Sylia disapproves of and getting away with it for most of the story. In a lot of ways by the halfway point he's gotten worse, as he's actively asserting his superiority rather than it merely happening.
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* CompleteMonster: Hollister et al.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: What Hollister and friends want to do with Sylvie and Anri.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: NightmareFuel: What Hollister and friends want to do with Sylvie and Anri.
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X Just X? Come on people!
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** A pretty debatable statement, as he's still doing things Sylia disapproves of and getting away with it for most of the story.
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** A pretty debatable statement, as he's still doing things Sylia disapproves of and getting away with it for most of the story. In a lot of ways by the halfway point he's gotten worse, as he's actively asserting his superiority rather than it merely happening.
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** A pretty debatable statement, as he's still doing things Sylia disapproves of and getting away with it for most of the story.
