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* RonTheDeathEater: Sakura played it straight, then subverts it, as while she wasn't evil here, she was much louder than her canon counterpart prior to her character development, in addition to her being TheLoad till she got better.
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* WhatAnIdiot:
** Mikey charges at Itachi despite Jiraya telling him and his brothers, Naruto included, to stay out.
** 1(Hun) v 9 (Naruto, [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especially how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
** Mikey charges at Itachi despite Jiraya telling him and his brothers, Naruto included, to stay out.
** 1(Hun) v 9 (Naruto, [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especially how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Kin.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Both Naruto and Sakura.
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** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especially how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
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** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], (Naruto, [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especially how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
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* FridgeLogic:FridgeBrilliance:
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Danzo, who caused the Uchiha massacre and locked up Naruto's mom. In addition, he took all of the previous eyes of the uchiha members and attached them all to himself for power.]] And he had no regrets about his crimes.
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* AssPull: [[spoiler: Empress form Isis, who pops out of nowhere to defeat Kira. There was no explanation for this whatsoever.]]
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** [[spoiler: Danzo's actions, all for self-profit]]
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** Danzo [[spoiler: Danzo's actions, ordered the Uchiha/Ankoku massacre, sealed Kushina in a root prison for 13 years, and took all for self-profit]]of the arms of previous members to attach to his arms.]]
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Kin.
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* HilariousInHindsight:
** It makes sense in context that [[TheFool Mikey]] replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
** It makes sense in context that [[TheFool Mikey]] replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
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* HilariousInHindsight:
**HilariousInHindsight: It makes sense in context that [[TheFool Mikey]] replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
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** Kira's murder on Isis.
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** Kira's murder on Isis.Isis, when the latter was a [[WouldHurtAChild baby]], at that!.
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** Itachi's [[spoiler: massacre of the Uchiha clan. Though it's subverted when he was ordered against his will. His massacre on his own group seems to play it more straight.]]
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** Itachi's [[spoiler: massacre of the Uchiha clan. [[spoiler: Though it's subverted when he was ordered against his will. His massacre on his own group seems to play it more straight.]]
* TakeThatScrappy: Sai's absence here was pretty much one for him.
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** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especilly how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
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** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especilly especially how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
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I think the fic came AFTER TMNT 2012.
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** [[BloodKnight Raph]] is teamed up with [[TheStoic Neji]] against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012 2012 series]] with [[{{Jerkass}} Spyderbytez]]...
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* FridgeLogic: The reason Konoha isn't as creeped out by the turtles as much as back in New York? Konoha is more used to non-humans!
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* FridgeLogic: FridgeLogic:
** The reason Konoha isn't as creeped out by the turtles as much as back in New York? Konoha is more used tonon-humans!non-humans!
** Why was Naruto compatible with all of the turtle's weapons? Because he trained with them and has all of their personality traits!
** The reason Konoha isn't as creeped out by the turtles as much as back in New York? Konoha is more used to
** Why was Naruto compatible with all of the turtle's weapons? Because he trained with them and has all of their personality traits!
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** [[spoiler: Sakura eventually follows suit, losing her entire family during the Konoha invasion.]]
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** [[spoiler: Sakura eventually follows suit, [[spoiler: losing her entire family during the Konoha invasion.]]
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** Kira's murder on Isis.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Sakura played it straight, then subverts it, as while she wasn't evil, she was much louder than her canon counterpart prior to her character development, in addition to her being TheLoad till she got better.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Sakura played it straight, then subverts it, as while she wasn't evil, evil here, she was much louder than her canon counterpart prior to her character development, in addition to her being TheLoad till she got better.
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** Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke, all are [[LastOfHisOwnKind Last Of Their Own Kind]]...
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** Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke, all are [[LastOfHisOwnKind [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Their Own Kind]]...
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** Kushina was one too, being sealed for '''13''' years.
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** Kushina was one too, being sealed for '''13''' years.years.
** Hinata was an in-universe example.
** Hinata was an in-universe example.
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** It makes sense in context that Mikey replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
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** It makes sense in context that Mikey [[TheFool Mikey]] replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
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* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse? Better yet how they got there and back by plane?
* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse? Better yet how they got there and back by plane?
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* {{Narm}}: Raph's calling out on Neji sounds more like what the 87 '87 version would say rather than the 03 one.
* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse? Better yet how they got there and back by plane?'03 one.
* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse? Better yet how they got there and back by plane?
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* TheWoobie: Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke, all are LastOfTheirOwnKind...
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* TheWoobie: WhatAnIdiot:
** Mikey charges at Itachi despite Jiraya telling him and his brothers, Naruto included, to stay out.
** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especilly how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
* TheWoobie:
** Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke, all areLastOfTheirOwnKind...[[LastOfHisOwnKind Last Of Their Own Kind]]...
** [[spoiler: Sakura eventually follows suit, losing her entire family during the Konoha invasion.]]
** Mikey charges at Itachi despite Jiraya telling him and his brothers, Naruto included, to stay out.
** 1(Hun) v 9 ([[{{Badass}} Naruto]], [[LightningBruiser Sasuke]], [[CuteBruiser Sakura]], [[GoodIsNotSoft Himeko]], [[LadyOfWar Kin]], [[TheLeader Leo]], [[TheBigGuy Raph]], [[BadassBookworm Donnie]], and [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Mikey]]). What that really the best idea on the former's part, especilly how badly his Purple Dragons army was defeated?
* TheWoobie:
** Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke, all are
** [[spoiler: Sakura eventually follows suit, losing her entire family during the Konoha invasion.]]
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* Narm: Raph's calling out to Neji sounds more like what the 87 version would say rather than the 03 one.
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* Narm: {{Narm}}: Raph's calling out to on Neji sounds more like what the 87 version would say rather than the 03 one.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Danzo, who caused the Uchiha massacre and locked up Naruto's mom. In addition, he took all of the previous eyes and attached them all to himself for power.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Danzo, who caused the Uchiha massacre and locked up Naruto's mom. In addition, he took all of the previous eyes of the uchiha members and attached them all to himself for power.]]]] And he had no regrets about his crimes.
* FridgeLogic: The reason Konoha isn't as creeped out by the turtles as much as back in New York? Konoha is more used to non-humans!
* FridgeLogic: The reason Konoha isn't as creeped out by the turtles as much as back in New York? Konoha is more used to non-humans!
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* JerkassWoobie: Hun may be a villain, but he was still getting the short end of the stick.
* JerkassWoobie: Hun may be a villain, but he was still getting the short end of the stick.
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** Raph [[BloodKnight Raph]] is teamed up with Neji [[TheStoic Neji]] against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012 2012 series]] with Spyderbytez...
* JerkassWoobie: Hun may be a villain, but he was still getting the short end of the stick.[[{{Jerkass}} Spyderbytez]]...
* JerkassWoobie: Hun may be a villain, but he was still getting the short end of the stick.
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** Neji comes close to crossing this when he tried to kill Hinata.
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** Neji comes close to crossing this when he tried to kill Hinata.Hinata at the chunin exams.
* Narm: Raph's calling out to Neji sounds more like what the 87 version would say rather than the 03 one.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Sakura played it straight, then subverts it, as while she wasn't evil, she was much louder than her canon counterpart prior to her character development, in addition to her being TheLoad till she got better.
* TheWoobie: Naruto, Himeko, andSasuke.Sasuke, all are LastOfTheirOwnKind...
** Kushina was one too, being sealed for '''13''' years.
* TheWoobie: Naruto, Himeko, and
** Kushina was one too, being sealed for '''13''' years.
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* AntiClimaxBoss: [[spoiler: Orochimaru's last fight against Himeko and Sasuke.]]
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** Raph is teamed up with Neji against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come TMNT2012 with Spyderbytez...
** Raph is teamed up with Neji against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come TMNT2012 with Spyderbytez...
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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
** It makes sense in context that Mikey replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
** Raph is teamed up with Neji against Kidomaru, a spider person. ComeTMNT2012 the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012 2012 series]] with Spyderbytez...
** It makes sense in context that Mikey replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
** Raph is teamed up with Neji against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come
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** Neji comes close to crossing this when he tried to kill HinataHinata.
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** Raph is teamed up with Neji against Kidomaru, a spider person. Come TMNT2012 with Spyderbytez...
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* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse?
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* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse?Narutoverse? Better yet how they got there and back by plane?
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Both Naruto and Sakura.
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* HilariousInHindsight: It makes sense in context that Mikey replaces Naruto as the foolish one.
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* JerkassWoobie: Hun may be a villain, but he was still getting the short end of the stick.
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* PlotHole: Was it ever explained how anyone in the Turtleverse knew of the Narutoverse?Narutoverse?
* TheWoobie: Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke.
* TheWoobie: Naruto, Himeko, and Sasuke.
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** [[spoiler: Danzo's actions, all for self-profit]]self-profit]]
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* AntiClimaxBoss: [[Orochimaru's last fight against Himeko and Sasuke.]]
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* AntiClimaxBoss: [[Orochimaru's [[spoiler: Orochimaru's last fight against Himeko and Sasuke.]]
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* AntiClimaxBoss: [[Orochimaru's last fight against Himeko and Sasuke.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Danzo, who caused the Uchiha massacre and locked up Naruto's mom]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Danzo, who caused the Uchiha massacre and locked up Naruto's mom]]mom. In addition, he took all of the previous eyes and attached them all to himself for power.]]
* MoralEventHorizion:
** If Orochimaru and [[spoiler: Shredder]] are anything to go by, they probably crossed this a while before the events even started.
** Neji comes close to crossing this when he tried to kill Hinata
** Itachi's [[spoiler: massacre of the Uchiha clan. Though it's subverted when he was ordered against his will]]
** [[spoiler: Danzo's actions, all for self-profit]]
* MoralEventHorizion:
** If Orochimaru and [[spoiler: Shredder]] are anything to go by, they probably crossed this a while before the events even started.
** Neji comes close to crossing this when he tried to kill Hinata
** Itachi's [[spoiler: massacre of the Uchiha clan. Though it's subverted when he was ordered against his will]]
** [[spoiler: Danzo's actions, all for self-profit]]
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