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** Kozue. She debuted too late in the story when [[spoiler:Junpei was between Aya and Tsukasa only, with Satsuki almost out of contention. Although people think her crush on Junpei was actually fairly well written, and she had some focus in a few chapters (being more active than Aya herself despite the fact that she is an even bigger ShrinkingViolet than her), [[DemotedToExtra she quickly becomes just an extra character]], thus feeling like a pointless RomanticFalseLead. The same could be said about her friends.
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** Kozue. She debuted too late in the story when [[spoiler:Junpei was between Aya and Tsukasa only, with Satsuki almost out of contention. ]] Although people think her crush on Junpei was actually fairly well written, and she had some focus in a few chapters (being more active than Aya herself despite the fact that she is an even bigger ShrinkingViolet than her), her) [[DemotedToExtra she quickly becomes just an extra character]], thus feeling like a pointless RomanticFalseLead. The same could be said about her friends.
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* TheWoobie: Aya. She still hearthbroken for being dumped this is affecting her job as writer.
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* TheWoobie: Aya. She still hearthbroken heartbroken for being dumped this is affecting her job as writer.writer.
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