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* HarsherInHindsight: This story isn't that far off from what was later revealed about Cinder in canon. Only differences are Cinder was canonically an orphan before being adopted by an EvilMatriarch that used her for slave labour.
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* HarsherInHindsight: This story isn't that far off from what was later revealed about Cinder in canon. Only differences are Cinder was canonically an orphan before being adopted by an EvilMatriarch that used her for slave labour.labour.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married Cinder's rich father to drive him to suicide and [[GoldDigger take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive their father to suicide from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling to keep her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder into the monster she would later become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall's Fall]]'s [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married Cinder's rich and depressed father to drive him to suicide and Anthony [[GoldDigger to take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit wealth for herself]], withholding therapy from her husband and attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive all of their father to suicide from grief, having tried children when each was newborn in the same thing with process, all to claim the full inheritance. When a 6-year-old Cinder and her brother, Sterling, accidentally learns about Brigit's true colours, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing driving him to commit suicide]]. Physically and mentally abusing Cinder, trying to tempt her to suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder as well and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually fatally poisons Sterling to keep her money, money. A thoroughly empty, hedonistic, and her abuses are what mold irredeemable monster beneath the façade of a beautiful and dutiful wife and mother, Brigit left psychological scars in Cinder long after her death, molding her into the monster she would later she'd become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married Cinder's rich father to drive him to suicide and [[GoldDigger take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive their father to suicide from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling to keep her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder into the monster she would later become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married Cinder's rich father to drive him to suicide and [[GoldDigger take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive their father to suicide from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling to keep her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder into the monster she would later become.become.
* HarsherInHindsight: This story isn't that far off from what was later revealed about Cinder in canon. Only differences are Cinder was canonically an orphan before being adopted by an EvilMatriarch that used her for slave labour.
* HarsherInHindsight: This story isn't that far off from what was later revealed about Cinder in canon. Only differences are Cinder was canonically an orphan before being adopted by an EvilMatriarch that used her for slave labour.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married the Cinder's rich father to drive him to suicide and [[GoldDigger take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive their father to suicide from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling to keep her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder into the monster she would later become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother]], who married the Cinder's rich father to drive him to suicide and [[GoldDigger take his wealth]]. When a young Cinder overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her unborn younger sibling to drive their father to suicide from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death. Growing impatient, Brigit reveals her intentions to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling to keep her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder into the monster she would later become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AbusiveParents Brigit Stark]] is the abusive mother of Cinder Fall. A GoldDigger, Brigit married Cinder’s father with the intention of [[DrivenToSuicide driving him to suicide]] and taking his inheritance, having three children with him. A young Cinder hears her mother talking about trying to get rid of her and her older brother before they were born, planning to do the same with this unborn child in an attempt to get Cinder’s father to commit suicide out of grief. When she catches Cinder listening, she almost strangles her to death before dragging her to bed and [[FauxAffablyEvil threatening her in a motherly tone]]. Growing impatient, Brigit eventually told Cinder’s father the truth about her intentions with marrying him, [[TheBadGuyWins causing him to commit suicide]], much to the horror of his children. After this, Brigit turned Cinder’s siblings against her and made her a slave in her own home, [[ForTheEvulz just because she could]]. She would regularly beat and scream at Cinder, or have Cinder’s older brother, Sterling, bully Cinder on her behalf. In one instance, she beat Cinder for trying to sneak into the kitchen to get a glass of water, afterwards revealing why her father committed suicide and wishing her to do the same. When Sterling started to reach eighteen, she poisoned him to death to keep him from getting any of the inheritance. When Cinder finally snaps, drugs her, ties her to the railing of the stairs, and sets the house aflame with a dust crystal. Brigit goes from threatening the young Cinder to [[VillainsWantMercy pathetically begging for Cinder to save her]]. A [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]], {{greed}}y, [[DirtyCoward coward]], Brigit is single-handedly responsible for Cinder becoming the monster she is.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AbusiveParents [[EvilMatriarch Brigit Stark]] is the Cinder Fall's [[AbusiveParents abusive mother of Cinder Fall. A GoldDigger, Brigit mother]], who married Cinder’s the Cinder's rich father with the intention of [[DrivenToSuicide driving to drive him to suicide]] suicide and taking [[GoldDigger take his inheritance, having three children with him. A wealth]]. When a young Cinder hears her mother talking about trying overhears Brigit attempting to get rid of her and her older brother before they were born, planning to do the same with this unborn child in an attempt younger sibling to get Cinder’s drive their father to commit suicide out of grief. When she catches from grief, having tried the same thing with Cinder listening, she almost and her brother, Sterling, Brigit finds and nearly strangles her to death before dragging her to bed and [[FauxAffablyEvil threatening her in a motherly tone]]. death. Growing impatient, Brigit eventually told Cinder’s father the truth about reveals her intentions with marrying him, [[TheBadGuyWins to her husband, [[DrivenToSuicide causing him to commit suicide]], much to the horror of his children. After this, Brigit turned Cinder’s suicide from horror]]. Beating Cinder and turning her siblings against her and made her a slave in her own home, [[ForTheEvulz just because she could]]. She would regularly beat and scream at Cinder, or have Cinder’s older brother, Sterling, bully Cinder on her behalf. In one instance, she beat Cinder for trying to sneak into the kitchen to get a glass of water, afterwards revealing why her father committed suicide and wishing her to do the same. When her, Brigit eventually poisons Sterling started to reach eighteen, she poisoned him to death to keep him from getting any of the inheritance. When her money, and her abuses are what mold Cinder finally snaps, drugs her, ties her to the railing of the stairs, and sets the house aflame with a dust crystal. Brigit goes from threatening the young Cinder to [[VillainsWantMercy pathetically begging for Cinder to save her]]. A [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]], {{greed}}y, [[DirtyCoward coward]], Brigit is single-handedly responsible for Cinder becoming into the monster she is.would later become.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AbusiveParents Brigit Stark]] is the abusive mother of Cinder Fall. A GoldDigger, Brigit married Cinder’s father with the intention of [[DrivenToSuicide driving him to suicide]] and taking his inheritance, having three children with him. A young Cinder hears her mother talking about trying to get rid of her and her older brother before they were born, planning to do the same with this unborn child in an attempt to get Cinder’s father to commit suicide out of grief. When she catches Cinder listening, she almost strangles her to death before dragging her to bed and [[FauxAffablyEvil threatening her in a motherly tone]]. Growing impatient, Brigit eventually told Cinder’s father the truth about her intentions with marrying him, [[TheBadGuyWins causing him to commit suicide]], much to the horror of his children. After this, Brigit turned Cinder’s siblings against her and made her a slave in her own home, [[ForTheEvulz just because she could]]. She would regularly beat and scream at Cinder, or have Cinder’s older brother, Sterling, bully Cinder on her behalf. In one instance, she beat Cinder for trying to sneak into the kitchen to get a glass of water, afterwards revealing why her father committed suicide and wishing her to do the same. When Sterling started to reach eighteen, she poisoned him to death to keep him from getting any of the inheritance. When Cinder finally snaps, drugs her, ties her to the railing of the stairs, and sets the house aflame with a dust crystal. Brigit goes from threatening the young Cinder to [[VillainsWantMercy pathetically begging for Cinder to save her]]. A [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]], {{greed}}y, [[DirtyCoward coward]], Brigit is single-handedly responsible for Cinder becoming the monster she is.
