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* WhatAnIdiot:
** Mizuki sends Kuze a "letter of challenge", urging him to meet on the school roof in an effort to get him out of his self-inflicted isolation since he discovered he suffers from a [[SoapOperaDisease terminal heart condition]]. He indeed shows up.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' She challenges him ''in words only'' to try to make him understand she really loves him and wants to be with him, despite his condition.\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:Mizuki actually pulls off a surprise attack and kicks Kuze hard in the chest, telling him that he "died once" already. Sure enough, Kuze gets a heart attack shortly after.]]
** When Yuu finds out [[spoiler:that Amamiya was physically and sexually abusing his adoptive sister Yuuko with clear scarring and bruises all over her body...]]\\
'''You'd Expect:''' [[spoiler:Go to the nearest police station and report him, after all with all the bruises and scars plus her testimony he'll be locked up for good.]]\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:He actually confronts him directly which ends with Yuu getting beaten and then he elopes with her.]]
** Mizuki sends Kuze a "letter of challenge", urging him to meet on the school roof in an effort to get him out of his self-inflicted isolation since he discovered he suffers from a [[SoapOperaDisease terminal heart condition]]. He indeed shows up.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' She challenges him ''in words only'' to try to make him understand she really loves him and wants to be with him, despite his condition.\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:Mizuki actually pulls off a surprise attack and kicks Kuze hard in the chest, telling him that he "died once" already. Sure enough, Kuze gets a heart attack shortly after.]]
** When Yuu finds out [[spoiler:that Amamiya was physically and sexually abusing his adoptive sister Yuuko with clear scarring and bruises all over her body...]]\\
'''You'd Expect:''' [[spoiler:Go to the nearest police station and report him, after all with all the bruises and scars plus her testimony he'll be locked up for good.]]\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:He actually confronts him directly which ends with Yuu getting beaten and then he elopes with her.]]
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** Chihiro Shindou's car accident when her sister Kei's English voice actress, Creator/BrittneyKarbowski, would actually get involved in a car crash in 2010.
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** Chihiro Shindou's car accident when her sister Kei's English voice actress, Creator/BrittneyKarbowski, would actually get involved in a car crash that left her temporarily hospitalized with a broken neck in 2010.
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* AntiClimax: [[spoiler: Yuuko's]] death in ''A Tale of Melodies'' is foreshadowed throughout as a tragedy of tragedies. When it's actually portrayed in the anime: [[spoiler: She's hit by a car after chasing a ball into the street.]] Though it could be argued that such a childish act leading to an undignified death was the true tragedy.
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* AntiClimax: [[spoiler: Yuuko's]] death in ''A Tale of Melodies'' is foreshadowed throughout as a tragedy of tragedies. When it's actually portrayed in the anime: [[spoiler: She's [[spoiler:She's hit by a car after chasing a ball into the street.]] Though it could be argued that such a childish act leading to an undignified death was the true tragedy.
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* WhatAnIdiot:
** Mizuki sends Kuze a "letter of challenge", urging him to meet on the school roof in an effort to get him out of his self-inflicted isolation since he discovered he suffers from a [[SoapOperaDisease terminal heart condition]]. He indeed shows up.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' She challenges him ''in words only'' to try to make him understand she really loves him and wants to be with him, despite his condition.\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:Mizuki actually pulls off a surprise attack and kicks Kuze hard in the chest, telling him that he "died once" already. Sure enough, Kuze gets a heart attack shortly after.]]
** When Yuu finds out [[spoiler:that Amamiya was physically and sexually abusing his adoptive sister Yuuko with clear scarring and bruises all over her body...]]\\
'''You'd Expect:''' [[spoiler:Go to the nearest police station and report him, after all with all the bruises and scars plus her testimony he'll be locked up for good.]]\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:He actually confronts him directly which ends with Yuu getting beaten and then he elopes with her.]]
** Mizuki sends Kuze a "letter of challenge", urging him to meet on the school roof in an effort to get him out of his self-inflicted isolation since he discovered he suffers from a [[SoapOperaDisease terminal heart condition]]. He indeed shows up.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' She challenges him ''in words only'' to try to make him understand she really loves him and wants to be with him, despite his condition.\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:Mizuki actually pulls off a surprise attack and kicks Kuze hard in the chest, telling him that he "died once" already. Sure enough, Kuze gets a heart attack shortly after.]]
** When Yuu finds out [[spoiler:that Amamiya was physically and sexually abusing his adoptive sister Yuuko with clear scarring and bruises all over her body...]]\\
'''You'd Expect:''' [[spoiler:Go to the nearest police station and report him, after all with all the bruises and scars plus her testimony he'll be locked up for good.]]\\
'''Instead:''' [[spoiler:He actually confronts him directly which ends with Yuu getting beaten and then he elopes with her.]]
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* AntiClimax: [[spoiler: Yuuko's]] death in ''A Tale of Melodies'' is foreshadowed throughout as a tragedy of tragedies. When it's actually portrayed: [[spoiler: She's hit by a car after chasing a ball into the street.]] Though it could be argued that such a childish act leading to an undignified death was the true tragedy.
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* AntiClimax: [[spoiler: Yuuko's]] death in ''A Tale of Melodies'' is foreshadowed throughout as a tragedy of tragedies. When it's actually portrayed: portrayed in the anime: [[spoiler: She's hit by a car after chasing a ball into the street.]] Though it could be argued that such a childish act leading to an undignified death was the true tragedy.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Viewers who feel uncomfortable with Kuze and Mizuki's MayDecemberRomance may even feel more uncomfortable when they learn that Kuze's English voice actor, Creator/IllichGuardiola, was arrested in May 2014 for having a relationship with a 16-year-old girl.
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* HarsherInHindsight: HarsherInHindsight:
** Viewers who feel uncomfortable with Kuze and Mizuki's MayDecemberRomance may even feel more uncomfortable when they learn that Kuze's English voice actor, Creator/IllichGuardiola, was arrested in May 2014 for having a relationship with a 16-year-oldgirl.girl.
** Chihiro Shindou's car accident when her sister Kei's English voice actress, Creator/BrittneyKarbowski, would actually get involved in a car crash in 2010.
** Viewers who feel uncomfortable with Kuze and Mizuki's MayDecemberRomance may even feel more uncomfortable when they learn that Kuze's English voice actor, Creator/IllichGuardiola, was arrested in May 2014 for having a relationship with a 16-year-old
** Chihiro Shindou's car accident when her sister Kei's English voice actress, Creator/BrittneyKarbowski, would actually get involved in a car crash in 2010.
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* {{Narm}}: The scene in episode 11 where [[spoiler: Renji and Chihiro finish their date by kissing [[TheirFirstTime and then having sex]] in the rooftop of the school]] loses quite a part of its emotion when you see [[spoiler: Chihiro]]'s clothes neatly and primorously folded on the floor, as if they were just ready for morning use. Waaaaay to distract the viewer from all of the dramatic tension there.
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* AntiClimax: [[spoiler: Yuuko's]] death in ''A Tale of Melodies'' is foreshadowed throughout as a tragedy of tragedies. When it's actually portrayed: [[spoiler: She's hit by a car after chasing a ball into the street.]] Though it could be argued that such a childish act leading to an undignified death was the true tragedy.
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* FirstInstallmentWins: While fans acknowledge that ''A Tale of Melodies'' is excellent, ''A Tale of Memories'' tends to get better reviews.
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* FirstInstallmentWins: While fans acknowledge that ''A Tale of Melodies'' is excellent, excellent (at least if they weren't squicked out by the MayDecemberRomance), ''A Tale of Memories'' tends to get better reviews.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Caught the scene in ''memories'' episode 9 where Miyako holds a [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Big Dango Family]] phone card? Both Miyako and Nagisa would be voiced a few years later in English by Creator/LuciChristian. Both series were also license by Creator/SentaiFilmworks.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Caught the scene in ''memories'' episode 9 where Miyako holds a [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Big Dango Family]] phone card? Both Miyako and Nagisa would be voiced a few years later in English by Creator/LuciChristian. Both series were also license licensed by Creator/SentaiFilmworks.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Caught the scene in ''memories'' episode 9 where Miyako holds a [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Big Dango Family]] phone card? Both Miyako and Nagisa would be voiced a few years later in English by Creator/LuciChristian.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Caught the scene in ''memories'' episode 9 where Miyako holds a [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Big Dango Family]] phone card? Both Miyako and Nagisa would be voiced a few years later in English by Creator/LuciChristian. Both series were also license by Creator/SentaiFilmworks.
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* DieForOurShip: There is quite the hate towards Kei for getting in between Hiro and Miyako. Never mind that Kei eventually ends up with Kyousuke anyway.
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''memories'': When Chihiro gets e-mails from her sister about Kei's own life, Kei writes about events that happen during the summer, when it's winter where Chihiro's side is. [[spoiler: Then comes TheReveal where you find that the Chihiro's side is living on a second Otowa. In Australia. Thus, the seasons are reversed.]]
** In ''melodies'', think back over the course of the entire game, and how each couple slowly got shoved towards figuring things out. Yuuko always brutally exposed the problems everyone had to force them to face up to things, but who gave them the crucial last-second encouragement? ''Mizuki.'' Considering their backstory, this only makes sense.
** What does "Ef" stand for? Apparently, there are plenty of songs that has "Ef" as initial, including in the Visual Novel. Eternal Feather. Emotional Flutter. Ever Forever. Euphoric Field. Ebullient Future. AndNowYouKnow.
** In ''melodies'', think back over the course of the entire game, and how each couple slowly got shoved towards figuring things out. Yuuko always brutally exposed the problems everyone had to force them to face up to things, but who gave them the crucial last-second encouragement? ''Mizuki.'' Considering their backstory, this only makes sense.
** What does "Ef" stand for? Apparently, there are plenty of songs that has "Ef" as initial, including in the Visual Novel. Eternal Feather. Emotional Flutter. Ever Forever. Euphoric Field. Ebullient Future. AndNowYouKnow.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Caught the scene in ''memories'' episode 9 where Miyako holds a [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Big Dango Family]] phone card? Both Miyako and Nagisa would be voiced a few years later in English by Creator/LuciChristian.
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* FirstInstallmentWins: While fans acknowledge the ''A Tale of Melodies'' is excellent, ''A Tale of Memories'' tends to get better reviews.
* FridgeBrilliance: ''memories'': When Chihiro gets e-mails from her sister about Kei's own life, Kei writes about events that happen during the summer, when it's winter where Chihiro's side is. [[spoiler: Then comes TheReveal where you find that the Chihiro's side is living on a second Otowa. In Australia. Thus, the season are reversed.]]
* FridgeBrilliance: ''memories'': When Chihiro gets e-mails from her sister about Kei's own life, Kei writes about events that happen during the summer, when it's winter where Chihiro's side is. [[spoiler: Then comes TheReveal where you find that the Chihiro's side is living on a second Otowa. In Australia. Thus, the season are reversed.]]
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* FirstInstallmentWins: While fans acknowledge the that ''A Tale of Melodies'' is excellent, ''A Tale of Memories'' tends to get better reviews.
* FridgeBrilliance: ''memories'': When Chihiro gets e-mails from her sister about Kei's own life, Kei writes about events that happen during the summer, when it's winter where Chihiro's side is. [[spoiler: Then comes TheReveal where you find that the Chihiro's side is living on a second Otowa. In Australia. Thus, theseason seasons are reversed.]]
* FridgeBrilliance: ''memories'': When Chihiro gets e-mails from her sister about Kei's own life, Kei writes about events that happen during the summer, when it's winter where Chihiro's side is. [[spoiler: Then comes TheReveal where you find that the Chihiro's side is living on a second Otowa. In Australia. Thus, the
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* HarsherInHindsight: Viewers who feel uncomfortable with Kuze and Mizuki's MayDecemberRomance may even feel more uncomfortable when they learn that Kuze's English voice actor, Creator/IllichGuardiola, was arrested in May 2014 for having a relationship with a 16-year-old girl.
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* {{Narm}}: The scene in episode 11 where [[spoiler: Renji and Chihiro finish their date by kissing [[TheirFirstTime and then having sex]] in the rooftop of the school]] loses quite a part of its emotion when you see [[spoiler: Chihiro]]'s clothes neatly and primorously folded on the floor, as if they were just ready for morning use. Waaaaay to distract the viewer from all of the dramatic tension there.
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* {{Narm}}: The scene in episode 11 where [[spoiler: Renji and Chihiro finish their date by kissing [[TheirFirstTime and then having sex]] in the rooftop of the school]] loses quite a part of its emotion when you see [[spoiler: Chihiro]]'s clothes neatly and primorously folded on the floor, as if they were just ready for morning use. Waaaaay to distract the viewer from all of the dramatic tension there.there.
* TheWoobie: Damn near everybody, but Chihiro and Yuu get it the worst.
* TheWoobie: Damn near everybody, but Chihiro and Yuu get it the worst.
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* FirstInstallmentWins: While fans acknowledge the ''A Tale of Melodies'' is excellent, ''A Tale of Memories'' tends to get better reviews.
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