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* DiagnosedByTheAudience: It's not exactly clear what Luna's issues are. An AxCrazy psychopath with traits of a {{Narcissist}}. Either way, the mare has some problems.
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* NamesTheSame: No, Katrina is not the Katrina from G1. She does look kind of similar to her, though.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable, (and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable, (and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Discord causing the near extinction of the alicorn race or (in)directly responsible for the extinction of humanity.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Discord causing the near extinction of the alicorn race or and being (in)directly responsible for the extinction of humanity.
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** The princesses, and ''especially'' Celestia. After having their home, parents, and entire civilization destroyed, they're forced to take up a role they never wanted, while their life expectancy makes it hard for them to form connections due to the discrepancy.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Nav draws on several of the author's own experiences. ''Hopefully'' not too many...
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Nav draws on several of the author's own experiences. ''Hopefully'' not too many...
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** The princesses, and ''especially'' Celestia. After having their home, parents, and entire civilization destroyed, they're forced to take up a role they never wanted, while their life expectancy makes it hard for them to form connections due to the discrepancy.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Nav draws on several of the author's own experiences. ''Hopefully'' not too many...discrepancy.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Nav draws on several of the author's own experiences. ''Hopefully'' not too many...
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable,(and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable,(and unlikable, (and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* FanPreferredCouple: There are quite a few of them floating around. Nav x Spike, Nav x Fluttershy, and Nav x Celestia are the most prominent,
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* FanPreferredCouple: There are quite a few of them floating around. Nav x Spike, Nav x Fluttershy, and Nav x Celestia are the most prominent,
prominent, though.
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* DarkneesInducedAudienceApathySyndrome: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable,(and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* DarkneesInducedAudienceApathySyndrome: DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable,(and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
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* FanPreferredCouple: There are quite a few of them floating around. Nav x Spike, Nav x Fluttershy, and Nav x Celestia are the most prominent, though.
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* DarkneesInducedAudienceApathySyndrome: With most of the protagonists being almost as villainous as the actual villains, a main character who is incredibly unlikable,(and never gets called out on it) the world being much ''much'' darker than in canon and even members of the main six doing morally ambiguous things it can be very hard for some people to get invested in this story.
* FanPreferredCouple: There are quite a few of them floating around. Nav x Spike, Nav x Fluttershy, and Nav x Celestia are the mostprominent, prominent,
though.
* FanPreferredCouple: There are quite a few of them floating around. Nav x Spike, Nav x Fluttershy, and Nav x Celestia are the most
though.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In this story, cats rule Egypt. In the official comics, we're introduced to Anugypt, which is ruled by, you guessed it, cats.
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* NamesTheSame: No, Katrina is not the Katrina from G1. She does look kind of similar to her, though.
* JerkassWoobie Nav. While it is true he has been thrown into a world he'll never completely fit in with due to his past self pissing off Discord, and has been tortured, raped, lied to, used as a pawn and even those he calls his closest friends have a habit of letting him down. And like the princesses, he also lives to see everything he's ever known destroyed by Discord. However. There is one thing that everyone, even the readers seem to forget: '''The guy is practically a''' '''HateSink.''' He's a {{Hypocrite}}, a {{Jerkass}}, he's racist ''and'' sexist, stubborn to a fault, he kills and tortures for little to no reason, he ''never'' learns from his mistakes, and he refuses to accept any attempts to get him to change.
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** Nav. Thrown into a world he'll never completely fit in with due to his past self pissing off Discord, the guy ends up tortured, raped, lied to, and used as a pawn. Even those he calls his closest friends have a habit of letting him down. And like the princesses, he also lives to see everything he's ever known destroyed by Discord.
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* GrowingTheBeard: The story really starts to hit its stride about 32 Chapters in. The author himself agrees that the story gets much better later on, and viewed the [[OldShame first 12 chapters]] as so bad that they underwent a complete rewrite.
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* GrowingTheBeard: The story really starts to hit its stride about 32 Chapters chapters in. The author himself agrees that the story gets much better later on, and viewed the [[OldShame first 12 chapters]] as so bad that they underwent a complete rewrite.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Discord causing the near extinction of the alicorn race.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Discord causing the near extinction of the alicorn race.race or (in)directly responsible for the extinction of humanity.
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* FanDumb: Several of the in-story comments on humanity are a TakeThat against the HumansAreTheRealMonsters nature of other works. This didn't stop several fans from completely missing the point, and 'agreeing' that humans are evil.
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* CompleteMonster: This version of Discord, considering that he's responsible for the near destruction of the alicorn race.
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