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** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners, in one notable case force-feeding the ashes of Ziri's comrades to him. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human shield}}s, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also slaughters his own guards for perceived disrespect. [[AbusiveParents Horrifically raising his own children]] to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram [[WeHaveReserves sacrifices hundreds of his own troops]] to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on [[FinalSolution genocidal purges of the Chimaera, Chimaera]], alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also slaughters his own guards for perceived disrespect. [[AbusiveParents Horrifically raising his own children]] to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram [[WeHaveReserves sacrifices hundreds of his own troops]] to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also [[BadBoss slaughters his own guards]] guards for perceived disrespect. Raising [[AbusiveParents Horrifically raising his children own children]] to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram [[WeHaveReserves sacrifices hundreds of his own troops]] to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also slaughters his own guards for perceived disrespect. Raising his children to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram sacrifices hundreds of his own troops to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human shields}}, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human shields}}, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also [[BadBoss slaughters his own guards guards]] for perceived disrespect. Raising his children to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram [[WeHaveReserves sacrifices hundreds of his own troops troops]] to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{humanshields}}, shield}}s, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human
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** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also slaughters his own guards for perceived disrespect. Raising his children to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram sacrifices hundreds of his own troops to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human shields}}, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
** [[TheCaligula Emperor Joram]] leads the Seraphim on genocidal purges of the Chimaera, alongside his younger brother, Jael, enslaving the survivors of their attacks to suffer as their empire grows. Within his empire itself, Joram [[SerialRapist forces women to become his concubines]], mistreating them to the point they have attempted suicide to escape him; he also slaughters his own guards for perceived disrespect. Raising his children to become front line soldiers for his armies, Joram shrugs aside their deaths when they are killed for the "glory" of his empire. When he lays siege to the Chimaera capital of Loramendi, Joram sacrifices hundreds of his own troops to weaken the enemy's defenses, then invading the city to massacre the thousands within, both soldier and innocent civilian alike. After winning his bloody conquest, Joram intends to further expand his tyranny, next laying eyes on a peaceful group of seraphim, ever-hungry for more power.
** The aforementioned [[InsaneAdmiral Jael]] leads his brother's elite forces "The Dominion" and is the one who murdered Akiva's mother. His unit [[TheDreaded feared]] even among Joram's empire for their brutality, Jael leads them on purges of Chimaera villages, and relishes the chance to murder unarmed women and children personally, as well as torturing prisoners. A being of voracious lust, Jael [[SerialRapist rapes]] both civilian women and his own female soldiers. Seizing the throne with Joram's death, Jael kills his own nephew and all the guards present for his coup, leaving only his niece, Liraz, alive to become his SexSlave. Discovering the human Earth, Jael intends to present himself as a messianic figure, then manipulate them into eliminating his enemy races, by manipulating the humans into giving him dangerous weapons to annihilate his enemies. When confronted by Akiva, Jael uses his own men as {{human shields}}, caring for nothing but his own selfish conquest.
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature whose equally as stunning and falls in love with her immediately in spite centuries of blood feuds]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly due to {{New Powers As The Plot Demands}}]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]], and her [[spoiler:chimaera traits are all beautiful and cool]]. All in all, she can count as BlackHoleSue, GodModeSue, RelationshipSue and SympatheticSue. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
-->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries]].''
-->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries]].''
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly due to {{New Powers As The Plot Demands}}]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. All in all, she can count as BlackHoleSue, GodModeSue, RelationshipSue and SympatheticSue. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], creature whose equally as stunning and falls in love with her immediately in spite centuries of blood feuds]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly due to {{New Powers As The Plot Demands}}]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]].all]], and her [[spoiler:chimaera traits are all beautiful and cool]]. All in all, she can count as BlackHoleSue, GodModeSue, RelationshipSue and SympatheticSue. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries]].''
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->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries]].''
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->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries]].''''
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]].fly due to {{New Powers As The Plot Demands}}]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. All in all, she can count as BlackHoleSue, GodModeSue, RelationshipSue and SympatheticSue. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
->''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, her gaze always sparking and luminous, and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, that hinted at secrets and mysteries.''
->''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, her gaze always sparking and luminous, and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, that hinted at secrets and mysteries.''
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], beautiful]] - but [[ObliviouslyBeautiful obliviously so]] - wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
->''Karou ->''[[BeautyEqualsGoodness Karou was, simply, lovely. lovely]]. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with [[LongHairIsFeminine long azure hair hair]] and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, alive]], [[EverythingsBetterWithSparkles her gaze always sparking and luminous, luminous]], and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], head, [[ManicPixieDreamGirl her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, danced]], [[MysticalWaif that hinted at secrets and mysteries.mysteries]].''
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative, young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative, creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}}, an exciting present life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes Karou as follows:
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}} and an exciting present life, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is raised by monsters and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. The book describes her as this: ''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, her gaze always sparking and luminous, and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, that hinted at secrets and mysteries.'' It shold also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]].
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative creative, young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}} and Past}}, an exciting present life, life and a {{Meaningful Name}}, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], an {{Omniglot}}, travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is [[ParentalAbandonment raised by monsters monsters]] and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. The book She also is [[WaifFu a great fighter]] and [[IJustWantToBeNormal just wants to be normal]]. There are some other [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome qualities that make her not fully any race at all]]. It should also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]]. In the books, she describes her Karou as this: ''Karou follows:
->''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like asphinx.sphinx]]. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, her gaze always sparking and luminous, and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, that hinted at secrets and mysteries.'' It shold also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]].''
->''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], [[PurpleProse she moved like a poem and smiled like a
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* {{Mary Sue}}: It certainly can be argued that Karou is one. Let's see... [[TheBeautifulElite stunningly beautiful]], wildly creative young woman with a {{Mysterious Past}} and an exciting present life, who is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of a romantic pacifist who was tragically killed for her bonding with an enemy creature]], travels extensively and buys a lot of beautiful things on her voyages with [[SecretlyWealthy her loads and loads of money]], her body is covered with cool tattoos, her hair is [[RapunzelHair long]] and [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair peacock blue]], she is raised by monsters and later on [[spoiler:she can fly]]. The book describes her as this: ''Karou was, simply, lovely. Creamy and [[ShesGotLegs leggy]], with long azure hair and [[WhatBeautifulEyes the eyes of a silent-movie star]], she moved like a poem and smiled like a sphinx. [[DescriptionPorn Beyond merely pretty, her face was vibrantly alive, her gaze always sparking and luminous, and she had a birdlike way of cocking her head]], her lips pressed together while her dark eyes danced, that hinted at secrets and mysteries.'' It shold also be of note that [[AuthorAppeal the author]] [[SequentialArtist studied art as well]] [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair and has pink hair]].
