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** Additionally, nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'' Especially since Ghost Klaus pretty much ''[[PromotionToParent raised]]'' Five.
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** Additionally, nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'' ''Ewww.'' Especially since Ghost Klaus pretty much ''[[PromotionToParent raised]]'' Five.
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** Canon Klaus [[spoiler: is the one who goes looking for Vanya instead of Allison. When he finds her, he ''almost'' manages to talk her down, until Leonard forces the reveal of Allison's rumor. Vanya freaks out and triggers a Vietnam flashback in Klaus, and he desperately tries to get her away from the 'warzone'. This makes Vanya fling him away in a panic, causing lethal injuries. The worst part is how Klaus is still in the middle of his flashback, so even as he's dying he's thinking about how Vanya needs to get somewhere safe.]]
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** Five's slowly deteriorating mental state during 'for the ones who try again', thanks to a combination of grief, guilt, stress, and several unfortunate misunderstandings with Canon Klaus.
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** Five's slowly deteriorating mental state during 'for the ones who try again', thanks to a combination of grief, guilt, stress, and several unfortunate misunderstandings with Canon Klaus.Klaus.
* WriterCopOut: in addition to [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus]]'s DisneyDeath, some readers may find the combination of DeusExMachina and DebateAndSwitch to resolve perhaps [[InnocentInnuendo the largest climax in the series so far]][[note]]the end of [[spoiler: Act Two of ''for the ones who try again]][[/note]] cheap and dissatisfying. However, it's likely that they'll find the former less so than the latter, since [[CaptainObviousReveal everybody saw it coming]].
* WriterCopOut: in addition to [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus]]'s DisneyDeath, some readers may find the combination of DeusExMachina and DebateAndSwitch to resolve perhaps [[InnocentInnuendo the largest climax in the series so far]][[note]]the end of [[spoiler: Act Two of ''for the ones who try again]][[/note]] cheap and dissatisfying. However, it's likely that they'll find the former less so than the latter, since [[CaptainObviousReveal everybody saw it coming]].
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** [[TragicKeepsake WINNER AT: BEING AN ACTUAL PERSON]].
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** [[TragicKeepsake WINNER AT: BEING AN ACTUAL PERSON]].PERSON]].
** Canon Klaus comes to believe that [[PoorCommunicationKills Five is homophobic, and considers him 'disgusting']]. As he notes, his sexuality is pretty much the ''one'' aspect of himself his family has never had a problem with.
** Five's slowly deteriorating mental state during 'for the ones who try again', thanks to a combination of grief, guilt, stress, and several unfortunate misunderstandings with Canon Klaus.
** Canon Klaus comes to believe that [[PoorCommunicationKills Five is homophobic, and considers him 'disgusting']]. As he notes, his sexuality is pretty much the ''one'' aspect of himself his family has never had a problem with.
** Five's slowly deteriorating mental state during 'for the ones who try again', thanks to a combination of grief, guilt, stress, and several unfortunate misunderstandings with Canon Klaus.
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* BonusMaterial: Compiled into an entire fic of its own. The author regularly posts new chapters of background facts, rambling headcanons, anouncements of fanart, and quite a few drabbles that couldn't be fit into the story proper.
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* BonusMaterial: Compiled into an entire fic of its own. The author regularly posts new chapters of background facts, rambling headcanons, anouncements of fanart, and quite a few drabbles that couldn't be fit into the story proper.
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* {{OTP}}: '''Platonic.''' Though it may not have been your BroTP before, after reading this series you'll be gushing over Klaus and Five's interactions like the rest of us are.
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* {{OTP}}: '''Platonic.''' Though it may not have been your BroTP [=BroTP=] before, after reading this series you'll be gushing over Klaus and Five's interactions like the rest of us are.
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* [[OneTruePairing BroTP]]: Five and Klaus. To a lesser extent, Klaus and Ben.
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* JerkassWoobie: In 'for the ones who try again', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world.
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler: Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past self walking around, to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler: Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past self walking around, to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: In 'for ''for the ones who try again', again'', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world.
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler: Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past self walking around, to add to thetrauma. trauma]]. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]him.
* {{OTP}}: '''Platonic.''' Though it may not have been your BroTP before, after reading this series you'll be gushing over Klaus and Five's interactions like the rest of us are.
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler: Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past self walking around, to add to the
* {{OTP}}: '''Platonic.''' Though it may not have been your BroTP before, after reading this series you'll be gushing over Klaus and Five's interactions like the rest of us are.
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** Nearly Additionally, nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'' Especially since Ghost Klaus pretty much ''[[PromotionToParent raised]]'' Five.
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** The drabble 'When It Rains' features Five coming to terms with the fact that his brother experienced [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil repeated sexual assault]] [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror to the point where he barely considers it noteworthy.]]
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** The drabble 'When [[BonusMaterial drabble]] ''When It Rains' Rains'' features Five coming to terms with the fact that his brother experienced [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil repeated sexual assault]] [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror to the point where he barely considers it noteworthy.]]
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** Pretty much every time Klaus thinks about his darker days out on the streets.
** The drabble 'When It Rains' features Five coming to terms with the fact that his brother experienced [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil repeated sexual assault]] [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror to the point where he barely considers it noteworthy.]]
** The drabble 'When It Rains' features Five coming to terms with the fact that his brother experienced [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil repeated sexual assault]] [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror to the point where he barely considers it noteworthy.]]
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** Nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'' It's not helped that Ghost Klaus pretty much ''raised'' Five.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus's LastStand]] had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus's LastStand]] had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
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** Nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'' It's not helped that Especially since Ghost Klaus pretty much ''raised'' ''[[PromotionToParent raised]]'' Five.
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* TearJerker: Ghost Klaus's LastStand had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus's LastStand LastStand]] had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
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** Nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]''
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** Nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]'']]'' It's not helped that Ghost Klaus pretty much ''raised'' Five.
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** Nearly everyone thinks that Five and Raithe (Ghost Klaus) are screwing. ''[[IncestIsRelative Ewww.]]''
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* {{Squick}}: Ghost Klaus expresses that he wants to [[ScrewYourself screw his past self]]. Ew.
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* {{Squick}}: Ghost Klaus expresses that he wants to [[ScrewYourself screw his past self]]. Ew.Ew.
* TearJerker: Ghost Klaus's LastStand had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
* TearJerker: Ghost Klaus's LastStand had '''everyone''' crying, and the comments on the final chapter of 'for the ones who think they can' were almost 5 times as numerous as the instalment's average.
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* [[OneTruePairing BroTP]]: Five and Klaus. To a lesser extent, Klaus and Ben.
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** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler: Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past self walking around, to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]]]
* {{Squick}}: Ghost Klaus expresses that he wants to [[ScrewYourself screw his past self]]. Ew.
* {{Squick}}: Ghost Klaus expresses that he wants to [[ScrewYourself screw his past self]]. Ew.
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* JerkassWoobie: In 'for the ones who try again', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world. But this is because [[spoiler: he literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered right in front of him, using weapons he helped develop, and now he has to save the world while barely knowing anything ''and'' grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past version walking around to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: In 'for the ones who try again', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world. But world.
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler:he Five literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered right in front of him, using murdered, by weapons he himself helped develop, and now he has to save the world while barely knowing anything all on his own ''and'' while grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past version self walking around around, to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
** However, this behaviour is forgiven by many because [[spoiler:
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* CaptainObviousReveal: Some people feel this way about [[spoiler: Ghost Klaus turning out to have been captured by the Commission instead of killed]], while others were completely blindsided.
* JerkassWoobie: In 'for the ones who try again', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world. But this is because [[spoiler: he literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered right in front of him, using weapons he helped develop, and now he has to save the world while barely knowing anything ''and'' grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past version walking around to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
* JerkassWoobie: In 'for the ones who try again', Five regresses in his CharacterDevelopment, antagonizes his siblings, behaves erratically and obsessively, and does not particularly seem equipped to save the world. But this is because [[spoiler: he literally just saw his LivingEmotionalCrutch get murdered right in front of him, using weapons he helped develop, and now he has to save the world while barely knowing anything ''and'' grieving his brother - who, by the way, has an oblivious past version walking around to add to the trauma. Between Five's frequent panic attacks and shrinking options and inability to feel positive emotion, it's almost impossible not to feel sorry for him.]]
