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* FridgeHorror: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* FridgeHorror: FridgeHorror:
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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AAP requires commercial underperformance or other objective proof it alienated. Wasted is unused not poorly used plots.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: ''Bumped'' is a young adult novel about a dystopian future where a virus has made everyone over the age of 18 infertile and reliant on teenage girls as surrogate mothers. People were {{squick}}ed out by the TeenPregnancy, while readers who do want to read about it criticized the book for exploiting a serious problem in society for shock value.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The inherent FridgeLogic of the setting is never really explored beyond lazy shock value.
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** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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**FridgeHorror: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[spoiler: Melody and Zen's]] first kiss. And the moment Melody calls Harmony "sister" for the first time.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[spoiler: Melody [[spoiler:Melody and Zen's]] first kiss. And the moment Melody calls Harmony "sister" for the first time.
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* FridgeHorror:
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** Building on that: most ten-year-olds don't have the physical maturity or the bone structure to conceive or bear children. So...do they give them hormones, so their bodies mature faster? And how many girls have died or been made infertile by trying to get pregnant at ten?
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** Building on that: most ten-year-olds don't have the physical maturity or the bone structure to conceive or bear children. So...do they give them hormones, so their bodies mature faster? And how many girls have died or been made infertile by trying to get pregnant at ten?
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** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** Building on that: most ten-year-olds don't have the physical maturity or the bone structure to conceive or bear children. So...do they give them hormones, so their bodies mature faster? And how many girls have died or been made infertile by trying to get pregnant at ten?
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** Building on that: most ten-year-olds don't have the physical maturity or the bone structure to conceive or bear children. So...do they give them hormones, so their bodies mature faster? And how many girls have died or been made infertile by trying to get pregnant at ten?
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Decided to replace the Audience Aliening Premise with the version on the main page as the latter actually describes more of the premise and explaining why people didn't like the premise. Also commented out a ZCE
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The {{Epigraph}} is a quote from a fictional president talking about how America can lead the world in teen pregnancy again, and it only gets weirder from there.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The {{Epigraph}} ''Bumped'' is a quote from a fictional president talking young adult novel about how America can lead a dystopian future where a virus has made everyone over the world in teen pregnancy again, age of 18 infertile and reliant on teenage girls as surrogate mothers. People were {{squick}}ed out by the TeenPregnancy, while readers who do want to read about it only gets weirder from there. criticized the book for exploiting a serious problem in society for shock value.
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* TheWoobie: Poor Malia.
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* NightmareFuel: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
** The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* WhatAnIdiot: Ash and Ty, as summarized by Melody herself: "How could they [[spoiler:turn their only daughter into a toxic asset in need of a quick bump bailout?]] I'd have expected better of them - if not as parents, then as ''economists''."
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The inherent FridgeLogic of the setting is never really explored beyond lazy shock value.
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* {{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: [[spoiler: Melody and Zen's]] first kiss. And the moment Melody calls Harmony "sister" for the first time.
* {{Nightmare Fuel}}: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
* {{Nightmare Fuel}}: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* {{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[spoiler: Melody and Zen's]] first kiss. And the moment Melody calls Harmony "sister" for the first time.
*{{Nightmare Fuel}}: NightmareFuel: The "We Live To Deliver" Scholarship. Candidates have to give birth every year from their tenth to their eighteenth birthdays. The question being, ''who gets those girls pregnant''?
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* {{What An Idiot}}: Ash and Ty, as summarized by Melody herself: "How could they [[spoiler: turn their only daughter into a toxic asset in need of a quick bump bailout?]] I'd have expected better of them - if not as parents, then as ''economists''."
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Malia.
* {{The Woobie}}: Poor Malia.
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* {{What An Idiot}}: WhatAnIdiot: Ash and Ty, as summarized by Melody herself: "How could they [[spoiler: turn [[spoiler:turn their only daughter into a toxic asset in need of a quick bump bailout?]] I'd have expected better of them - if not as parents, then as ''economists''."
*{{The Woobie}}: TheWoobie: Poor Malia.Malia.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The ''Epigraph'' is a quote from a fictional president talking about how America can lead the world in teen pregnancy again, and it only gets weirder from there.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The ''Epigraph'' {{Epigraph}} is a quote from a fictional president talking about how America can lead the world in teen pregnancy again, and it only gets weirder from there.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremiseAudienceAlienatingPremise: The ''Epigraph'' is a quote from a fictional president talking about how America can lead the world in teen pregnancy again, and it only gets weirder from there.
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** Building on that: most ten-year-olds don't have the physical maturity or the bone structure to conceive or bear children. So...do they give them hormones, so their bodies mature faster? And how many girls have died or been made infertile by trying to get pregnant at ten?
