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* NightmareFuel: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxYsb-_dHIY The game overs]], ''especially'' the last one where [[spoiler: Athena is seized by the machines [[FateWorseThanDeath and ends up as]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]].]]
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* NightmareFuel: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxYsb-_dHIY The game overs]], ''especially'' the last one where [[spoiler: Athena [[spoiler:Athena is seized by the machines [[FateWorseThanDeath and ends up as]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]].]]system]]]].
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** The horrifying scene where [[spoiler: Athena is shot by ''dozens'' of snipers from all directions [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her horrified school friends]] and [[TheMole her teacher]]]], followed by [[spoiler: Rika's (almost) HeroicSacrifice.]]
** [[spoiler: Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is [[FateWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her sad face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
** [[spoiler: Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is [[FateWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her sad face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
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** The horrifying scene where [[spoiler: Athena [[spoiler:Athena is shot by ''dozens'' of snipers from all directions [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her horrified school friends]] and [[TheMole her teacher]]]], followed by [[spoiler: Rika's [[spoiler:Rika's (almost) HeroicSacrifice.HeroicSacrifice]].
** [[spoiler:Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** [[spoiler: Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** The third game over [[spoiler: where [[spoiler:where Athena is [[FateWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her sad face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
** [[spoiler:Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
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** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is[[FaeWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
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** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is[[FaeWorseThanDeath is [[FateWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her sad face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
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* TearJerker:
** The horrifying scene where [[spoiler: Athena is shot by ''dozens'' of snipers from all directions [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her horrified school friends]] and [[TheMole her teacher]]]], followed by [[spoiler: Rika's (almost) HeroicSacrifice.]]
** [[spoiler: Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is[[FaeWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
** The horrifying scene where [[spoiler: Athena is shot by ''dozens'' of snipers from all directions [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her horrified school friends]] and [[TheMole her teacher]]]], followed by [[spoiler: Rika's (almost) HeroicSacrifice.]]
** [[spoiler: Masato's heartbreaking death, [[DiedinyourArmsTonight in Athena's sorrowful embrace]].]]
** The third game over [[spoiler: where Athena is[[FaeWorseThanDeath forcibly turned into]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]] becomes this when there's a close-up to her face, and a SingleTear falls from one of her eyes...]]
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* NightmareFuel: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxYsb-_dHIY The game overs]], ''especially'' the last one.
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* NightmareFuel: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxYsb-_dHIY The game overs]], ''especially'' the last one.one where [[spoiler: Athena is seized by the machines [[FateWorseThanDeath and ends up as]] [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the new core of the Tantauls system]].]]
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* NightmareFuel: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxYsb-_dHIY The game overs]], ''especially'' the last one.
* TheWoobie: Poor, ''poor'', [[BreakTheCutie Athena]] and [[PoweredByAForsakenChild Masato]].
* TheWoobie: Poor, ''poor'', [[BreakTheCutie Athena]] and [[PoweredByAForsakenChild Masato]].
