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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic involves Twilight Sparkle suffering from PTSD over what happened at her brother's wedding. After "Slice of Life" showed Shining Armor crying at Cranky Doodle Donkey and Matilda's wedding (not to mention Cadence saying that he always cries at weddings), there's [[FridgeHorror indication]] that ''he'' may be having PTSD over the same reasons.
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic involves Twilight Sparkle suffering from PTSD over what happened at her brother's wedding. After "Slice of Life" showed Shining Armor crying at Cranky Doodle Donkey and Matilda's wedding (not not to mention Cadence saying explaining that he always cries at weddings), weddings, there's [[FridgeHorror indication]] that ''he'' may be having PTSD over the same reasons.
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their actions hurt her]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic involves Twilight Sparkle suffering from PTSD over what happened at her brother's wedding. After "Slice of Life" showed Shining Armor crying at Cranky Doodle Donkey and Matilda's wedding (not to mention Cadence saying that he always cries at weddings), there's [[FridgeHorror indication]] that ''he'' may be having PTSD over the same reasons.
* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their actions hurther]].
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their actions hurt
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their Actions did this To Her]].
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their Actions did this To Her]].
actions hurt her]].
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once the realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their Actions did this To Her]].
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once the they realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their Actions did this To Her]].
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I Fixed the text to make sense
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once the realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their action hero her]].
Actions did this To Her]].
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* TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once the realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their action hero her]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: its unknown what happens to the citizens of canterlot being Angry at there leader.
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It is YWMV
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TheWoobie: Mostly Twilight Sparkle, but plenty more characters follow once the realize [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone how much their action hero her]].her]].
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: its unknown what happens to the citizens of canterlot being Angry at there leader.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: its unknown what happens to the citizens of canterlot being Angry at there leader.
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*WhatHappenedToTheMouse: its unknown what happens to the citizens of canterlot.
