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'''You'd Expect:''' That the public would be notified immediately; even if a public outbreak was a significant risk, Twilight could easily quell that by telling them of their cure. As such, the ponies will know to be aware of signs of possession and contact Starfleet or the Elements of Harmony, the changelings' plans will be foiled and season 2 could possibly come to an early close thanks to their efforts.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' That the public would be notified immediately; even if a public outbreak panic was a significant risk, Twilight could easily quell that by telling them of their cure. As such, the ponies will know to be aware of signs of possession and contact Starfleet or the Elements of Harmony, the changelings' plans will be foiled and season 2 could possibly come to an early close thanks to their efforts.\\
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'''Result''': [[spoiler:[[StuffedInTheFridge Calista dies]].
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'''Result''': [[spoiler:[[StuffedInTheFridge Calista dies]].]]
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* The episode "Trial of Misjudgment" is just [[IdiotPlot a massive cavalcade of idiocy]]. The premise is that Starla exchanged a secret with Lightning and later saw him talking about something she ''thought'' was said secret.\\
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* The episode "Trial of Misjudgment" is just [[IdiotPlot a massive cavalcade of idiocy]].Misjudgment". The premise is that Starla exchanged a secret with Lightning and later saw him talking about something she ''thought'' was said secret.\\
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'''Result''': They end up in Pinkie's brain, [[IdiotPlot kickstarting the conflict of the week.]]
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'''Result''': They end up in Pinkie's brain, [[IdiotPlot kickstarting the conflict of the week.]]
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'''Instead''': They don't have any since it's somehow never happened before, and as such, Applejack, Rarity, and Mykan have to be stuck to each other for three days as they make a fresh batch, [[IdiotPlot thus kickstarting a plot that could've been avoided with application of common sense]]. Even Starla points out how idiotic this is.
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'''Instead''': They don't have any since it's somehow never happened before, and as such, Applejack, Rarity, and Mykan have to be stuck to each other for three days as they make a fresh batch, [[IdiotPlot thus kickstarting a plot that could've been avoided with application of common sense]].sense. Even Starla points out how idiotic this is.
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'''Result''': [[spoiler:[[StuffedInTheFridge Calista dies]]. [[IdiotPlot This was entirely preventable and wouldn't have happened if it weren't for several successive bouts of stupidity on the part of everyone else]].]]
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'''Result''': [[spoiler:[[StuffedInTheFridge Calista dies]]. [[IdiotPlot This was entirely preventable and wouldn't have happened if it weren't for several successive bouts of stupidity on the part of everyone else]].]]
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'''You'd Expect''': Him to pick another plan or at least work through the details first. If he had an ounce of brain cells, he would've considered the possibility of Lightning's immune system attacking them, the possibility that they could get infected by whatever germs are inside Lightning, them getting crushed by a strong enough impact on the body, their ability to escape when needed, etc. Futhermore, the focus should be spying on Starfleet through Lightning's senses, not gathering info from his brain, as contrary to what Starfleet believes, memories are ''very'' faulty, but one's senses are somewhat more reliable.\\
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'''You'd Expect''': Him to pick another plan or at least work through the details first. If he had an ounce of brain cells, he would've considered the possibility of Lightning's immune system attacking them, the possibility that they could get of them getting infected by whatever germs are inside Lightning, the possibility of them getting crushed by a strong enough impact on the body, their ability to escape when needed, etc. Futhermore, the focus should be spying on Starfleet through Lightning's senses, not gathering info from his brain, as contrary to what Starfleet believes, memories are ''very'' faulty, but one's senses are somewhat more reliable.\\
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** Later, DD manages to actually make a name for herself during the class project by [[IntimateMarks questioning the very concept of cutie marks]], which Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are clearly not happy about.\\
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** Later, DD manages to actually make a name for herself during the class project by [[IntimateMarks questioning the very concept of cutie marks]], marks, which Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are clearly not happy about.\\
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'''The Result:''' He gets stripped of his knighthood, thrown in the dungeon for the evening, and Celesto becomes captain.
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'''The Result:''' He gets stripped of his knighthood, knighthood and thrown in the dungeon for the evening, evening and Celesto becomes captain.
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'''You'd Expect''': Either Lightning or Krysta to tell their teammates about it before they jumped into the next fight.\\
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'''You'd Expect''': Either Lightning or Krysta to tell their teammates about it before they jumped jump into the next fight.\\
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'''Instead:''' He participates without saying anything.
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'''Instead:''' He participates without saying anything.\\
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'''Instead:''' He participates without saying anything. Therefore, he collapses from exhaustion and ends up in a hospital bed.
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'''Instead:''' He participates without saying anything. Therefore, he anything.
'''Result:''' He collapses from exhaustion and ends up in a hospital bed.
'''Result:''' He collapses from exhaustion and ends up in a hospital bed.
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* In "Realization: Part 1/A Night to Remember: Part 1", Inquerius is appalled at what she perceives to be childish activities at the coming gala for the Grand Ruler and insists that they should change it to be stuffy.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That, since Lightning has been raised by the Grand Ruler since he was a child, he would explain to her that he knows what he likes and dislikes and he would certainly like what they've already prepared.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't.\\
'''Alternatively''': If he did explain, you'd expect Inquerius to listen, given that she knows that he's the most familiar with the Grand Ruler among those planning the gala.\\
'''Instead:''' She doesn't.
'''You'd Expect:''' That, since Lightning has been raised by the Grand Ruler since he was a child, he would explain to her that he knows what he likes and dislikes and he would certainly like what they've already prepared.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't.\\
'''Alternatively''': If he did explain, you'd expect Inquerius to listen, given that she knows that he's the most familiar with the Grand Ruler among those planning the gala.\\
'''Instead:''' She doesn't.
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* The entire season, Starfleet knows that the Changelings' lair is in Titan's former castle on the Dark Planet.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to send an army of hundreds to assault the place and take them all captive in one fell swoop since they don't consider a single Changeling to be innocent.\\
'''Instead:''' They don't because, according to Mykan, that would qualify as an invasion, even though the goal is not to take territory (they certainly don't want to occupy any inch of the Dark Planet), but to capture enemy combatants.\\
'''Result:''' A protracted war that puts the people of United Equestria at risk.
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to send an army of hundreds to assault the place and take them all captive in one fell swoop since they don't consider a single Changeling to be innocent.\\
'''Instead:''' They don't because, according to Mykan, that would qualify as an invasion, even though the goal is not to take territory (they certainly don't want to occupy any inch of the Dark Planet), but to capture enemy combatants.\\
'''Result:''' A protracted war that puts the people of United Equestria at risk.
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'''You'd Then Expect:''' Celestia to have teleported to the thieves as they were getting away and/or incapacitated them with magic.\\
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'''You'd Then Expect:''' Celestia to have teleported to the thieves as they were getting away and/or incapacitated them with magic.\\magic (sure, they somehow had anti-magic charms, but she could've still used magic on their environs to stop them)\\
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'''You'd Expect''': Them to take protective measures to keep En away from Swift, such as keeping him out of battles where En Shi could run into him, training him in secret locations, limiting water sources to necessities like drinking water, having him be guarded by multiple fairies so they can transport him if En Shi finds him, etc. Swift is a sixteen year old, and he is supposed to be chosen by Lightning to boost morale for the other students; if something happens to him it will be a huge blow to their morale.\\
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'''You'd Expect''': Them to take protective measures to keep En away from Swift, such as keeping him out of battles where En Shi could run into him, training him in secret locations, limiting water sources to necessities like drinking water, having him be guarded by multiple fairies so they can transport him if En Shi finds him, etc. Swift is a sixteen year old, and he is supposed to be chosen by Lightning to boost morale for the other students; if something happens to him him, it will be a huge blow to their morale.\\
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'''Result''': Swift intervenes anyway and En Shi kidnaps him again. It's only through Swift's own wit that he is able to escape.\\
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'''Result''': Swift intervenes anyway and En Shi kidnaps him again. It's only through Swift's own wit that he is able to escape.\\
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* After Starfleet rescues Swift Star from the first time En Shi kidnaps him, the incident shows that [[Yandere En Shi is a very dangerous threat fixated on Swift]], and that Swift is very willing to take risks to do what he thinks is right.\\
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* After Starfleet rescues Swift Star from the first time En Shi kidnaps him, the incident shows that [[Yandere [[WouldHurtAChild En Shi is a very dangerous threat fixated on Swift]], and that Swift is very willing to take risks to do what he thinks is right.\\
