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* SlefMadeLie: The catalyst of the plot is Oscar taking credit for killing a shark (who was actually killed by an anchor while trying to eat Oscar) and being dubbed "The Shark Slayer" by the rest of the city, who shower him in praise and money. Oscar's CharacterDevelopment is him realizing that lying just to boost his self-image (and endangering the ones he loves when the rest of the sharks come for revenge) isn't worth it in the long run.
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* SlefMadeLie: SelfMadeLie: The catalyst of the plot is Oscar taking credit for killing a shark (who was actually killed by an anchor while trying to eat Oscar) and being dubbed "The Shark Slayer" by the rest of the city, who shower him in praise and money. Oscar's CharacterDevelopment is him realizing that lying just to boost his self-image (and endangering the ones he loves when the rest of the sharks come for revenge) isn't worth it in the long run.
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* SlefMadeLie: The catalyst of the plot is Oscar taking credit for killing a shark (who was actually killed by an anchor while trying to eat Oscar) and being dubbed "The Shark Slayer" by the rest of the city, who shower him in praise and money. Oscar's CharacterDevelopment is him realizing that lying just to boost his self-image (and endangering the ones he loves when the rest of the sharks come for revenge) isn't worth it in the long run.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Angie [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls out Oscar]] for being selfish and discarding her feelings.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Angie [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calls out Oscar]] for being selfish and discarding her feelings. Don Lino also calls out his son Lenny for actually being friends with Oscar, whom he believes he killed Lenny's brother Frankie after Lenny [[TheReveal reveals himself]] to be alive to Don Lino.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Not exactly a villain, but [[spoiler:Frankie]] counts, seeing how sad Lenny felt when he died.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Not exactly a villain, but [[spoiler:Frankie]] counts, seeing how sad Lenny felt when he died.died and how all the sharks, including Lenny and Frankie's father, Don Lino were all disheartened and depressed during Frankie's funeral.
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** As it turns out, the shrimp wasn't bluffing: the baby makes and appearance when [[spoiler:the shrimp and his friends attack Don Lino when he's stuck in a porthole.]]
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** As it turns out, the shrimp wasn't bluffing: the baby makes and an appearance when [[spoiler:the shrimp and his friends attack Don Lino when he's stuck in a porthole.]]
