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A goofy [[IdentityAmnesia amnesiac]] named Zap, though an improbable coincidence finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is psychic and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken after the previous captain, Efrem had been killed in action - or was he? Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain, mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material.
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A goofy [[IdentityAmnesia amnesiac]] named Zap, though an improbable coincidence finds himself coincidence, becomes the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is psychic and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken after the previous captain, Efrem had been killed in action - or was he? Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain, mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from not captain material.
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* BattleAura: Psychics, when ''seriously'' irked, emanate an aura in their colour.
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* BattleAura: Psychics, when ''seriously'' irked, emanate an aura in their colour.colour (green for Zap, blue for Efrem, yellow for Gunner).
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* BorrowedBiometricBypass: Naveed uses a guard's severed hand to retrieve her sword.
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* BorrowedBiometricBypass: Naveed uses a guard's severed hand to retrieve her sword.sword while breaking out of a high-security prison.
-->'''Naveed''' (regarding Reona's artifical hand): You let a Stickle put something on you on purpose?
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: When a psychic uses their powers, their eyes glow the color of their aura (good example would be when Efrem powers down and his eyes slowly turn from solid electric blue to normal, human blue irises with pupils.
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: When a psychic uses their powers, their eyes glow the color of their aura (good example would be when Efrem powers down and his eyes slowly turn from solid electric blue to normal, human blue irises with pupils.pupils).
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The GEF grunts are pretty much comic relief in {{Red Shirt}}s. Besides that, Kasey once makes robot guards leave their post by reprogramming another robot to run around in circles and insult them.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The GEF grunts are pretty much comic relief in {{Red Shirt}}s. Shirt}}s (or face-concealing armor). Besides that, Kasey once makes robot ''robot'' guards leave their post by reprogramming another robot to run around in circles and insult them.
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* PimpedOutDress: Demonica provides our heroes with some slinky clothes when inviting them for fancy dinner. Reona's dress, in addition to being rather more ''[[NavelDeepNeckline revealing]]'' than her usual clothes, is black with star-like sparkles and makes her look absolutely stunning (InUniverse, Zap is briefly speechless).
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* PimpedOutDress: Demonica provides our heroes with some slinky clothes when inviting them for fancy dinner. Reona's dress, in addition to being rather more ''[[NavelDeepNeckline revealing]]'' than her usual clothes, outfit, is black with star-like sparkles and makes her look absolutely stunning (InUniverse, Zap is briefly speechless).
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* PsychicPowers: Not ''very'' common in the setting [[spoiler: especially since [=GEF=] genocide of Zap's home planet]], but a number of characters have them. It's usually the whole spectrum (telepathy, telekinesis, prophetic dreams), but a degree of specialisation is possible. For instance Gunner mostly uses and is very proficient with telekinesis (up to [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest being able to heal]]), while Vitale is very good at seeing the future. [[spoiler: And, of course, there's the psychic army Gunner's building]].
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* PsychicPowers: Not ''very'' common in the setting [[spoiler: especially since [=GEF=] genocide of Zap's home planet]], but a number of characters have them. It's usually the whole spectrum (telepathy, telekinesis, prophetic dreams), but a degree of specialisation is possible. For instance instance, Gunner mostly uses and is very proficient with telekinesis (up to [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest being able to heal]]), while Vitale is very good at seeing the future.future. Zap's more of a {{Technopath}}. [[spoiler: And, of course, there's the psychic army Gunner's building]].
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%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]]. %%Lampshaded
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%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]]. %%Lampshaded%%Lampshaded - add to Lampshade entry?
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* SpaceshipGirl: The Excelsior is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona. The other [=AI=]s he built are also modeled after her]].
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* SpaceshipGirl: The Excelsior is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona. The Holograms for the other [=AI=]s he built are also modeled after her]].
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-->'''Author's comment''': No space-squids were hurt in the making of this comic. Maybe a couple of regular squids... but none from space. We coudln't find any, and we looked, really hard. Twice.
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-->'''Author's comment''': No space-squids were hurt in the making of this comic. Maybe a couple of regular squids... but none from space. We coudln't couldn't find any, and we looked, really hard. Twice.
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* SpotTheImposter: The BodyHorror creature takes Zap's appearance. Side by side, everyone debates who to shoot. Gunner comes up and just unceremoniously shoots the fake. The monster was quite easily distinguishable ("Meeee, Reaaal Zaaaaaap...") when everyone was "side by side" as it were, and the remark from Robot seemed like it was an obvious LampshadeHanging. %%needs work
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* SpotTheImposter: The BodyHorror creature takes Zap's appearance. Side They're side by side, everyone debates and the entire group is debating who to shoot. shoot, until Gunner comes up and just unceremoniously shoots the fake. The monster was quite easily distinguishable ("Meeee, Reaaal Zaaaaaap...") when everyone was "side by side" as it were, "), and the remark from Robot seemed like it was an obvious LampshadeHanging. %%needs work
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Meanwhile, generals of the [[TheEmpire Galactic Earth Federation]], Maximus Verbatim and Feonix Yago are plotting to overthrow the boofonish president Billings. Helping them is a mysterious figure who calls himself the Serpent and is organising a psychic army. Gambits accrue. The Serpent is very interested in news about a rouge psychic the troops encountered, and goes to search for Zap himself.
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Meanwhile, generals of the [[TheEmpire Galactic Earth Federation]], Maximus Verbatim and Feonix Yago Yago, are plotting to overthrow the boofonish president Billings. Helping them is a mysterious figure who calls himself the Serpent and is organising a psychic army. Gambits accrue. The Serpent is very interested in news about a rouge psychic the troops encountered, and goes to search for Zap himself.
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* AirVentPassageway: Due to PoorCommunicationKills Zap gets locked in the cell when he blunders into the Resistance members. He tries to escape through an air-vent. [[spoiler: And he does. Problem is, on the other side of the vent there's Yago and his troops waiting..]]
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* AirVentPassageway: Due to PoorCommunicationKills Zap gets locked in the cell when he blunders into the Resistance members. He tries to escape through an air-vent. [[spoiler: And he does. Problem is, on the other side of the vent there's Yago and his troops waiting..waiting...]]
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* AnimatedActors: Not animated, but [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/09/20040102a/ a filler comic]] portrayed the characters as actors playing parts, including a classically trained guy in a cheesy sci-fi role (i.e. playing Robot).
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* AnimatedActors: Not animated, but [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/09/20040102a/ a filler comic]] portrayed the characters as actors playing parts, including a [[ClassicallyTrainedExtra classically trained guy in a cheesy sci-fi role role]] (i.e. playing Robot).
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* HeelFaceTurn: Happened in the backstory to [[spoiler: Zap himself]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Happened in the backstory to [[spoiler: Zap himself]].himself]], which is why the plot turns out the way it does.
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* IdentityAmnesia: A couple of hours before he got shoved into the plot, Zap has forgotten his entire life story. A bit later, the villains exposit he's an escaped psychic test subject. [[spoiler: Which is a lie. He's actually enacting a MemoryGambit]].
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* IdentityAmnesia: A couple of hours before he got shoved into the plot, Zap has forgotten his entire life story. A bit later, the villains exposit he's an escaped psychic test subject. [[spoiler: Which is a lie. He's actually escaped, but enacting a MemoryGambit]].
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* JediMindTrick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
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* JediMindTrick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies.varies, dictated by RuleOfDrama nad RuleOfFunny. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his [[DreamingOfThingsToCome dreams]] [[LoveBeforeFirstSight introduced him to his future love.]]
* MakingASplash: Callisto uses water in battle. The Aquarians, who are an aquatic race (even if they resemble pterosaurs) can control water around themselves to an extent, making bubbles for landdwellers to breathe.
* MakingASplash: Callisto uses water in battle. The Aquarians, who are an aquatic race (even if they resemble pterosaurs) can control water around themselves to an extent, making bubbles for landdwellers to breathe.
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] Zap Vexler]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his [[DreamingOfThingsToCome dreams]] [[LoveBeforeFirstSight introduced him to his future love.]]
* MakingASplash: Callisto uses water in battle. The Aquarians, who are an aquatic race (evenif though they resemble pterosaurs) pterosaurs), can control water around themselves to an extent, making bubbles for landdwellers to breathe.
* MakingASplash: Callisto uses water in battle. The Aquarians, who are an aquatic race (even
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* PimpedOutDress: Demonica provides our heroes with some slinky clothes when inviting them for fancy dinner. Reona's dress, in addition to being rather more ''[[NavelDeepNeckline revealing]]'' than her usual clothes, is black with star-like sparkles and makes her look absolutely stunning.
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* PimpedOutDress: Demonica provides our heroes with some slinky clothes when inviting them for fancy dinner. Reona's dress, in addition to being rather more ''[[NavelDeepNeckline revealing]]'' than her usual clothes, is black with star-like sparkles and makes her look absolutely stunning.stunning (InUniverse, Zap is briefly speechless).
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%%* PstandardPsychicPstance: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/06/20050831/ Here.]]
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* PsychicStarshipPilot: The ''Excelsior'' and [[spoiler: the ''Deadalus'']], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features, hyperjump and DeflectorShields included. [[spoiler: They were built specifically to search the universe for psychics]].
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* PsychicStarshipPilot: The ''Excelsior'' Excelsior and [[spoiler: the ''Deadalus'']], Deadalus]], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features, hyperjump and DeflectorShields included. [[spoiler: They were built specifically to search the universe for psychics]].
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* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona. The other [=AI=]s he built are also modeled after her]].
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* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' Excelsior is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona. The other [=AI=]s he built are also modeled after her]].
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* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve his aim.
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* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s Excelsior's hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his psychic powers to improve his aim.
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* BunglingInventor: The Stickles. This is their [[PlanetOfHats hat]]. They're on their seventh home planet, having blown up the previous six, and Kasey, who has ''one'' invention that hasn't blown up (yet... hopefully...) may be the least bungling one of her race.
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* BunglingInventor: The Stickles. This is their [[PlanetOfHats hat]]. They're on their seventh home planet, having blown up the previous six, and Kasey, who has ''one'' working invention under her belt that hasn't ''hasn't'' blown up (yet... hopefully...) may be the least bungling one of her race.
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* ClothingDamage: Zap, Reona, and Grontar ruin their nice clothes in the [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20060918/ amusement park battle.]] But Reona's nice sheer hose survive the fight without even a run. [[spoiler: Gunner's cloak gets dramatically torn, as well]].
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* ClothingDamage: Zap, Reona, and Grontar ruin their nice spiffy clothes in the [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20060918/ amusement park battle.]] But Reona's nice sheer hose survive the fight without even a run. [[spoiler: Gunner's cloak gets dramatically torn, as well]].
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* DramaticPause: President Billings does this during a press conference, waiting three minutes to ramp up the drama.
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* DramaticPause: President Billings does this during a press conference, [[LampshadeHanging waiting three minutes to ramp up the drama.drama]].
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* Jedi Mind Trick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
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* Jedi Mind Trick: JediMindTrick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
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** Also, Reona sees Zap for the first time as he's hanging upside-down. [[spoiler: He's hanging upside-down again as he returns to her in the epilogue]].
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his [[DreamingOfThingsToCome dreams]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext introduced him to his future love.]]
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his [[DreamingOfThingsToCome dreams]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext [[LoveBeforeFirstSight introduced him to his future love.]]
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%% some links are broken - note to self, fix them
''[[http://www.zapcomic.com/ Zap!]]'' (not to be confused with the classic Underground ''Zap Comix'' by Creator/RobertCrumb, or [=ZZap=]! the Commodore 64 magazine) is a science fiction webcomic which ran from 2003 to 2014 and centers around the title character, Zap Vexler. Chris Layfield is the writer, and Pascalle Lepas is the artist.
A goofy [[LaserGuidedAmnesia amnesiac]] named Zap, though an improbable coincidence finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is [[PsychicPowers psychic]] and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken over the previous captain, Efrem. He had been apparently killed by an enemy, Naveed. Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain. This is mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material. They fight their way through the [[TheEmpire GEF]], crash land, fight their way through the GEF again, take off, and pick up an ally: Kasey. Another Resistance member, Kasey is infatuated with Robot and helps repair Reona's artificial arm. Zap runs into a stranger (to him at this point), Gunner, who claims to be a friend from his forgotten past. The comic finally concluded in September, 2014.
''[[http://www.zapcomic.com/ Zap!]]'' (not to be confused with the classic Underground ''Zap Comix'' by Creator/RobertCrumb, or [=ZZap=]! the Commodore 64 magazine) is a science fiction webcomic which ran from 2003 to 2014 and centers around the title character, Zap Vexler. Chris Layfield is the writer, and Pascalle Lepas is the artist.
A goofy [[LaserGuidedAmnesia amnesiac]] named Zap, though an improbable coincidence finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is [[PsychicPowers psychic]] and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken over the previous captain, Efrem. He had been apparently killed by an enemy, Naveed. Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain. This is mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material. They fight their way through the [[TheEmpire GEF]], crash land, fight their way through the GEF again, take off, and pick up an ally: Kasey. Another Resistance member, Kasey is infatuated with Robot and helps repair Reona's artificial arm. Zap runs into a stranger (to him at this point), Gunner, who claims to be a friend from his forgotten past. The comic finally concluded in September, 2014.
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A goofy
Meanwhile, generals of the [[TheEmpire
After some not-exactly-thought-out-wandering and a catastrophe or two, ''Excelsior'' crew goes to meet Kasey
[[CerebusSyndrome And then things stop being goofy]].
The comic finally concluded in September,
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!! ''Zap!'' contains examples of:
* AirVentPassageway: Zap uses this [[spoiler: right into the enemy's midst]]. %%needs context
* AmnesiaDanger: When Zap has to figure out how to work the [[FasterThanLightTravel hyperjump]] with his forgotten powers.
* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: That's complicated. [[spoiler: When we meet Zap, he is an IdiotHero, goofy, but well-meaning. But, as it later turns out, ''he was the mastermind behind the EvilPlan'' Gunner is putting in motion now. He began getting second thoughts (partly because he fell in love) and orchestrated another plan to give himself amnesia and invoke this very trope to have a chance with the [[GirlOfMyDreams girl he only saw in his dreams]] - Reona.]]
* AirVentPassageway: Zap uses this [[spoiler: right into the enemy's midst]]. %%needs context
* AmnesiaDanger: When Zap has to figure out how to work the [[FasterThanLightTravel hyperjump]] with his forgotten powers.
* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: That's complicated. [[spoiler: When we meet Zap, he is an IdiotHero, goofy, but well-meaning. But, as it later turns out, ''he was the mastermind behind the EvilPlan'' Gunner is putting in motion now. He began getting second thoughts (partly because he fell in love) and orchestrated another plan to give himself amnesia and invoke this very trope to have a chance with the [[GirlOfMyDreams girl he only saw in his dreams]] - Reona.]]
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* AbhorrentAdmirer:
** How Reona sees Zap at first, not as much because he's a stowaway who smells like garbage, but because the first thing he does upon seeing her is try to flirt. Badly. While being held upside-down by Grontar, who caught him stowing away on the ship.
** Robot is less than thrilled by Kasey's advances. This goes for most robots, actually.
* AchievementsInIgnorance: Zap, holding a [[RayGun lazer gun]] for the first time, zaps three troopers at once. By dropping it.
* AffectionateNickname: Kasey likes to call Robot "Sparky".
* AirVentPassageway: Due to PoorCommunicationKills Zap
* TheAllegedBoss: President Billings, nominally in charge of TheEmpire, keeps undermining his sinisterness by how incredibly, comically stupid he acts. Even his EvilLaugh is more weird than scary. The real mastermind behind his power seems to be the Serpent, who's trying to bring the empire down from the inside, and the generals who are plotting an EvilPlan of their own.
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: For all his bad pick-up lines, Zap's attitude towards Reona.
-->'''Zap''': I'll make sure you're okay. Always.
* AmnesiaDanger: When Zap has to figure out how to work the [[FasterThanLightTravel hyperjump]] with his forgotten
* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: That's complicated.
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* AnimatedActors: Not animated, but [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/09/20040102a/ one filler comic]] portrayed the characters as actors playing parts. It even included a ClassicallyTrainedExtra. The concept has since been revisited two or three times, making it a RunningGag.
* AnimalMotifs: Gunner's associated with snakes and [[spoiler: Zap with falcons]]. They're represented by those animals in psychic dreams and sometimes explicitly called their names.
* ArtEvolution: Pascalle's art noticeably improves over the years.
* ArtificialLimbs: In the backstory, Naveed cut off Reona's arm, necessitating one of these. Since it's [[GadgeteerGenius Kasey's]] work, it doubles as a [[ArmCannon powerful blaster]].
* AnimalMotifs: Gunner's associated with snakes and [[spoiler: Zap with falcons]]. They're represented by those animals in psychic dreams and sometimes explicitly called their names.
* ArtEvolution: Pascalle's art noticeably improves over the years.
* ArtificialLimbs: In the backstory, Naveed cut off Reona's arm, necessitating one of these. Since it's [[GadgeteerGenius Kasey's]] work, it doubles as a [[ArmCannon powerful blaster]].
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* AnimatedActors: Not animated, but [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/09/20040102a/ one a filler comic]] portrayed the characters as actors playing parts. It even included parts, including a ClassicallyTrainedExtra. The concept has since been revisited two or three times, making it classically trained guy in a RunningGag.
cheesy sci-fi role (i.e. playing Robot).
* AnimalMotifs: Gunner's associated with snakes and[[spoiler: Zap with falcons]]. falcons. They're represented by those animals in psychic dreams and sometimes explicitly called their names.
names. They have their respective motifs [[ThemedTattoos tattooed on their upper arms]] (which is how Gunner convinces Zap they know each other in the first place).
* ArtEvolution: Both Pascalle's art and Chris's writing noticeablyimproves improve over the years.
years - from odd angles and somewhat awkward exposition to a polished comic that has more to it than snarky humor.
* ArtificialLimbs: In the backstory, Naveed cut off Reona's arm, necessitating one of these.Since it's [[GadgeteerGenius Kasey's]] It's Kasey's work, it doubles as and early in the story Reona has her add a [[ArmCannon [[ArMcannon powerful blaster]].blaster]] for self-defense.
* AsYouKnow: [[TheAllegedBoss President Billings]]' emergency meeting of command.
-->'''Billings''': For those of you unfamiliar with my cabinet... To my right is Feonix Yago, general of the air and aquatic forces. And to my left is Maximus Verbatim, general of or ground troops and vehicles. Now, the reason you have been called here is of controversial nature. But [[LampshadeHanging in order to create dramatic suspense]], I will now pause here for three minutes. (grins)
* BatmanGambit: Gunner's plan not only allows for the generals' betrayal, it depends on it.
* AnimalMotifs: Gunner's associated with snakes and
* ArtEvolution: Both Pascalle's art and Chris's writing noticeably
* ArtificialLimbs: In the backstory, Naveed cut off Reona's arm, necessitating one of these.
* AsYouKnow: [[TheAllegedBoss President Billings]]' emergency meeting of command.
-->'''Billings''': For those of you unfamiliar with my cabinet... To my right is Feonix Yago, general of the air and aquatic forces. And to my left is Maximus Verbatim, general of or ground troops and vehicles. Now, the reason you have been called here is of controversial nature. But [[LampshadeHanging in order to create dramatic suspense]], I will now pause here for three minutes. (grins)
* BatmanGambit: Gunner's plan not only allows for the generals' betrayal, it depends on it.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: At least until this [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2014/09/epilogue-756-sparkly-boyfriend-forever/ strip]] where Zap returned back to the universe.]]
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* BeatPanel: Before the CerebusSyndrome sets in, Zap's blunders are met with these. By everyone in the room making identical, "you idiot" faces. Aliens and robots included. Also, as they're arguing on page twenty:
-->'''Robot''': By the way... I'm picking up two [=GEF=] battle cruisers heading straight for us. Thought you'd like to know.\\
All the organics in the room stare, jaws dropped.
* BittersweetEnding: The political plot gets neatly resolved, [[spoiler:At least until Gunner gets depowered and stranded with Naveed]], but [[spoiler: Efrem takes HeroicSacrifice and dies and Zap seems to die, as well. Although this [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2014/09/epilogue-756-sparkly-boyfriend-forever/ strip]] where Zap returned is DisneyDeath and he comes back to in the universe.epilogue.]]
-->'''Robot''': By the way... I'm picking up two [=GEF=] battle cruisers heading straight for us. Thought you'd like to know.\\
All the organics in the room stare, jaws dropped.
* BittersweetEnding: The political plot gets neatly resolved, [[spoiler:
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Zap, after a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20061012/ nasty gut shot]].
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Zap, after a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20061012/ nasty gut shot]].getting hit]] during the amusement park fight.
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* BodyHorror: The bizarre creature that kills the bounty hunters. It's some sort of goo beast that can bore through flesh and armor, and also has image-perfect shape-shifting ability - though it gives itself away when trying to talk.
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* BodyHorror: The bizarre creature that kills the bounty hunters. It's some sort of goo beast that can bore through flesh and armor, and also has image-perfect shape-shifting ability - though it gives itself away when trying to talk. %%doppelganger?
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* BountyHunter: The four Elementaros are initially brought in by the Galactic Earth Federation as bounty hunters to pursue Zap and company.
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* {{Bookends}}: "For some people, the future is now" concludes both the OpeningMonologue and the ending monologue.
* BountyHunter: The four Elementaros are initially brought in by the Galactic Earth Federation as bounty hunters to pursue Zap and company. %%are they? also, what about the distress call guy?
* BridalCarry: After Reona is injured and faints during the battle on rebel outpost, Zap carries her into the ship this way.
* BountyHunter: The four Elementaros are initially brought in by the Galactic Earth Federation as bounty hunters to pursue Zap and company. %%are they? also, what about the distress call guy?
* BridalCarry: After Reona is injured and faints during the battle on rebel outpost, Zap carries her into the ship this way.
* CalmingTea: Grontar is introduced offering Reona a cup of something hot to drink along with emotional comfort when she worries about their lack of captain.
* CatapultNightmare: Zap's DreamingOfThingsToCome (when he gets eaten by giant snake) and Reona's {{Past Experience Nightmare}}s in which she relives losing Efrem [[spoiler: as well as her TalkingInYourDreams session with Zap]] end like this.
* CatapultNightmare: Zap's DreamingOfThingsToCome (when he gets eaten by giant snake) and Reona's {{Past Experience Nightmare}}s in which she relives losing Efrem [[spoiler: as well as her TalkingInYourDreams session with Zap]] end like this.
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* ClothingDamage: Zap, Reona, and Grontar ruin their nice clothes in the [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20060918/ amusement park battle.]] But Reona's nice sheer hose survive the fight without even a run.
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* TheChessmaster: The Serpent has at least three plans going on at once and is only really thwarted by The PowerOfLove.
* ClothingDamage: Zap, Reona, and Grontar ruin their nice clothes in the [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20060918/ amusement park battle.]] But Reona's nice sheer hose survive the fight without even a run. [[spoiler: Gunner's cloak gets dramatically torn, as well]].
* ClothingDamage: Zap, Reona, and Grontar ruin their nice clothes in the [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/11/20060918/ amusement park battle.]] But Reona's nice sheer hose survive the fight without even a run. [[spoiler: Gunner's cloak gets dramatically torn, as well]].
* ConspicuousGloves: Reona begins the story wearing an elbow-lenght glove to hide her prosthetic hand.
* ContrivedCoincidence:
** Just a Excelsior crew are preparing to launch, and Zap is preparing to stow away (under fire from [=GEF=]), Excelsior decides she's found a new captain and won't move till he's on board. [[spoiler: Of course, Zap being a psychic and her creator, this is less contrived than it seems.]] In any case, he literally trips and falls into the cargo hatch - just in time to escape.
** The guy who got Zap chased by [=GEF=]? [[spoiler: That's Jason, who was trying to get them off ''his'' back.]]
** Zap just happens to meet an old friend on a random marketplace on a random space station... It's really blatantly obvious that it's the Serpent, who's been looking for him. Gunner's even ''wearing the same cloak he wears as the Serpent'', only with the hood down.
* ContrivedCoincidence:
** Just a Excelsior crew are preparing to launch, and Zap is preparing to stow away (under fire from [=GEF=]), Excelsior decides she's found a new captain and won't move till he's on board. [[spoiler: Of course, Zap being a psychic and her creator, this is less contrived than it seems.]] In any case, he literally trips and falls into the cargo hatch - just in time to escape.
** The guy who got Zap chased by [=GEF=]? [[spoiler: That's Jason, who was trying to get them off ''his'' back.]]
** Zap just happens to meet an old friend on a random marketplace on a random space station... It's really blatantly obvious that it's the Serpent, who's been looking for him. Gunner's even ''wearing the same cloak he wears as the Serpent'', only with the hood down.
* DistressCall: Answering one is how the crew gets into the trouble with the goo beast.
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%%* DreamSequence: A few symbolism loaded sequences here and there.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: The Galactic Earth Federation was finally dissolved and replaced with Universal Senate; a proper example of TheFederation.]]
* ElementalHairColors: Three of the last four Elementaro, as seen [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ here]]: Europa, with the power to control the wind, has white, flowing hair (even when [[DramaticWind there is no wind]]). Callisto, who has power over water, has blue hair. Gannymede, a master of earth is green-haired.
* ElementalHairColors: Three of the last four Elementaro, as seen [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ here]]: Europa, with the power to control the wind, has white, flowing hair (even when [[DramaticWind there is no wind]]). Callisto, who has power over water, has blue hair. Gannymede, a master of earth is green-haired.
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* DramaticThunder: It underscores the key points of the final battle.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Zap's initial piloting skills, or lack thereof, combined with the general IdiotHero demeanor result in this. And a crash.
%% I don't think this is the right trope * EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: The Galactic Earth Federation was finally dissolved and replaced with Universal Senate; a proper example of TheFederation.]]
* ElementalHairColors: Three of the last four Elementaro, as seen [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ here]]: Europa, with the power to control the wind, has white, flowing hair (even when [[DramaticWind there is no wind]]). Callisto, who has power over water, has blue hair. Gannymede, a master ofearth earth, is green-haired.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Zap's initial piloting skills, or lack thereof, combined with the general IdiotHero demeanor result in this. And a crash.
%% I don't think this is the right trope * EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: The Galactic Earth Federation was finally dissolved and replaced with Universal Senate; a proper example of TheFederation.]]
* ElementalHairColors: Three of the last four Elementaro, as seen [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ here]]: Europa, with the power to control the wind, has white, flowing hair (even when [[DramaticWind there is no wind]]). Callisto, who has power over water, has blue hair. Gannymede, a master of
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* EvilVersusEvil: The [=GEF=] against the Serpent's rebellion (which has nothing in common with the Resistance the heroes belong to).
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * {{Flashback}}: {{Lampshaded}} in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20050107-4/ this]] comic.
* FlashbackEffects: Sepia.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * {{Flashback}}: {{Lampshaded}} in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20050107-4/ this]] comic.
* FlashbackEffects: Sepia.
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* EvilCostumeSwitch: As a good guy, [[spoiler: Efrem Nutari]] wore baggy pants and pilot jacket. As a bad guy, well, hello, black leather and red accents. [[spoiler: Zap's initial bad guy garb is more grey, and his good guy garb is Efrem's clothes. His BrainwashedAndCrazy garb is classic black]].
* EvilVersusEvil: The [=GEF=] against the Serpent's rebellion (which has nothingin common to do with the Resistance the heroes belong to).
* FacelessGoons: The very first page has a shot of [=GEF=] troopers wearing their trademark evil-looking helmets against a background of blood-red sky, in case the reader didn't believe it's TheEmpire.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * {{Flashback}}: {{Lampshaded}} in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20050107-4/ this]]comic.
comic. %% there's a number of flashbacks, this refers to the lampshaded one, so...?
* FlashbackEffects:Sepia.Either sepia or lack of dialogue.
* EvilVersusEvil: The [=GEF=] against the Serpent's rebellion (which has nothing
* FacelessGoons: The very first page has a shot of [=GEF=] troopers wearing their trademark evil-looking helmets against a background of blood-red sky, in case the reader didn't believe it's TheEmpire.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * {{Flashback}}: {{Lampshaded}} in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20050107-4/ this]]
* FlashbackEffects:
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: The Excelsior crew only puts up with [[ManChild Zap]] because he's been chosen by the ship.
* TheFuture: The OpeningMonologue goes:
--> In the future, mankind will unlock the secrets of galactic travel...
* TheFuture: The OpeningMonologue goes:
--> In the future, mankind will unlock the secrets of galactic travel...
* GenocideSurvivor: Gunner, [[spoiler: Efrem and Zap]]. They are the last of PerfectPacifistPeople [=GEF=] genocided and are out for {{revenge}}. [[spoiler: Zap and Efrem give it up in the end, Gunner never does]].
* TheGunslinger: In a setting where [[RayGun blasters]] are standard, Gunner uses real bullets he can influence with his telekinesis.
* IdentityAmnesia: A couple of hours before he got shoved into the plot, Zap has forgotten his entire life story. A bit later, the villains exposit he's an escaped psychic test subject. [[spoiler: Which is a lie. He's actually enacting a MemoryGambit]].
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* JediMindTrick: Seemingly a standard psychic power. It even gets a ShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]]. %%needs quote
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* JediMindTrick: Seemingly ImprobableAimingSkills: Gunner, helped by [[MindOverMatter powerful telekinesis]].
* InTheHood: The Serpent, when dealing with Billings, follows the example set by Sith lords of old and wears astandard psychic power. It even gets voluminous hooded cloak that hides everything but [[ShadowedFaceGlowingEyes his glowing eyes]].
* InnerMonologue: Quite aShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]]. %%needs quotelot of the characters' thoughts are stated in thought bubbles.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Robot's OnlySaneMan moment on page 34.
-->'''Robot''' Whatever. It's not like Reona's dumb enough to actually let you drive.\\
'''Reona''' (on communicator): Zap, that lazer blast damaged the engine coil. I have to help Grontar, so you have to land us on that planet.\\
Zap grins.
* IWillFindYou: Reona won't believe Efrem is dead, despite all odds. She will contradict the Resistance orders if she has a chance to find a clue about where he is. [[spoiler: Later on, after learning of Efrem's betrayal, she acts the same about finding Zap]].
* Jedi Mind Trick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
-->'''Zap''': How did you do that?\\
'''Gunner''': I saw it in a movie once.\\
'''Zap''': Oh... Was it from... ''Titanic''?
* InTheHood: The Serpent, when dealing with Billings, follows the example set by Sith lords of old and wears a
* InnerMonologue: Quite a
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Robot's OnlySaneMan moment on page 34.
-->'''Robot''' Whatever. It's not like Reona's dumb enough to actually let you drive.\\
'''Reona''' (on communicator): Zap, that lazer blast damaged the engine coil. I have to help Grontar, so you have to land us on that planet.\\
Zap grins.
* IWillFindYou: Reona won't believe Efrem is dead, despite all odds. She will contradict the Resistance orders if she has a chance to find a clue about where he is. [[spoiler: Later on, after learning of Efrem's betrayal, she acts the same about finding Zap]].
* Jedi Mind Trick: Gunner is a dab hand with it, although his level of subtlety varies. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]]:
-->'''Zap''': How did you do that?\\
'''Gunner''': I saw it in a movie once.\\
'''Zap''': Oh... Was it from... ''Titanic''?
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * KickTheMoralityPet
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LaserSight [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/ Here.]]
* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elementaros are the last of their species. [[spoiler: Zap, Efrem, and Gunner]] are also the last three members of their species.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LaserSight [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/ Here.]]
* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elementaros are the last of their species. [[spoiler: Zap, Efrem, and Gunner]] are also the last three members of their species.
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * KickTheMoralityPet
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExampleKickTheMoralityPet %%I have no idea what event in the comic this refers to - none of the villains has any morality pets whatsoever
*LaserSight KickMePrank: Zap sticks an "unplug me" note to Robot's back once.
* LampshadeHanging: Provides much of the comic's humor, especially in the first chapters.
* LaserSight: For some reason, the BountyHunter uses one [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/Here.]]
here.]] In a setting where most guns are lasers. In a place he would realistically use lethal weaponry first and ask questions later.
* LastOfHisKind:Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elementaros are the last of their species. [[spoiler: Zap, Efrem, and Gunner]] are also the last three members of their species. %%Robot is one of a kind - also Zap built him
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample
*
* LampshadeHanging: Provides much of the comic's humor, especially in the first chapters.
* LaserSight: For some reason, the BountyHunter uses one [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/
* LastOfHisKind:
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his [[DreamingofThingstoCome dreams]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext introduced him to his future love.]]
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* LetsGetDangerous: Zap's very first use of his powers is a downplayed example. As enemy ships are approaching and Excelsior is in no way prepared for battle, Reona has him sit in the captain's chair and his [[AmnesiacResonance powers activate on their own]], turning on the hyperjump. Later on, until he learns a little control, his powers tend to overwhelm him when he's angry.
* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his[[DreamingofThingstoCome [[DreamingOfThingsToCome dreams]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext introduced him to his future love.]]
* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his
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* MindControlEyes: [[spoiler: Gunner seals William's mind, because he wants to use Will in his EvilPlan, something Will would never, ever agree to]]. After that, the affected person's eyes turn black, with only hints of their original color.
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* MindControlEyes: [[spoiler: Gunner seals William's mind, because he wants to use Will in his EvilPlan, something Will would never, ever agree to]]. After that, the affected person's eyes turn black, black-on-black, with only hints of their original color.controller's signature color.
* MomentKiller: Robot rather deliberately ruins the very first moment Reona has with Zap by yelling at them. Zap later returns the favour by walking in on Robot interfacing with Excelsior.
* MomentKiller: Robot rather deliberately ruins the very first moment Reona has with Zap by yelling at them. Zap later returns the favour by walking in on Robot interfacing with Excelsior.
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* OminousMultipleScreens: During the computer failure scene. %%needs context
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%% * OminousMultipleScreens: During the computer failure scene. %%needs context
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* OutrunTheFireball: Zap does this in the second comic. %%needs context
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* OutrunTheFireball: OutrunTheFireball:
** Zap does this in page two (as thesecond comic. %%needs contextdumpster behind him blows up).
** The entire crew does it while Jason distracts the [=GEF=] with an explosion.
** Zap does this in page two (as the
** The entire crew does it while Jason distracts the [=GEF=] with an explosion.
* PerfectPacifistPeople: [[spoiler: The people of Zap's home planet]] which resulted in a PacifismBackfire when [=GEF=] came.
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%%* PresidentEvil: Not ''competent'', but evil.
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* PresidentEvil:
* {{Protectorate}}: Reona, for Grontar, who will go [[UnstoppableRage berserk]] if she's hurt. Zap also tends to get angry and [[PowerGlows glowy]] when she's in danger.
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* PsychicPowers: Not very common in the setting [[spoiler: especially since [=GEF=] genocide of Zap's home planet]], but number of characters who have them. It's usually the whole spectrum (telepathy, telekinesis, prophetic dreams), but specialisation is possible. For instance Gunner mostly uses and is very proficient with telekinesis, while Vitale is very good at seeing the future. [[spoiler: And, of course, there's the psychic army Gunner's building]].
* PsychicStarshipPilot: The Excelsior [[spoiler: and the Deadalus]], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features.
%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]].
* PsychicStarshipPilot: The Excelsior [[spoiler: and the Deadalus]], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features.
%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]].
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* PsychicPowers: Not very ''very'' common in the setting [[spoiler: especially since [=GEF=] genocide of Zap's home planet]], but a number of characters who have them. It's usually the whole spectrum (telepathy, telekinesis, prophetic dreams), but a degree of specialisation is possible. For instance Gunner mostly uses and is very proficient with telekinesis, telekinesis (up to [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest being able to heal]]), while Vitale is very good at seeing the future. [[spoiler: And, of course, there's the psychic army Gunner's building]].
* PsychicStarshipPilot: TheExcelsior ''Excelsior'' and [[spoiler: and the Deadalus]], ''Deadalus'']], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features.
features, hyperjump and DeflectorShields included. [[spoiler: They were built specifically to search the universe for psychics]].
* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Aside from the confirmed psychics, Reona gets a couple of those. [[spoiler: This allows her [[TalkingInYourDreams to communicate with Zap]].]]
%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]]. %%Lampshaded
* PutOnABus: After William captures them, Jason and Justin are taken away. [[spoiler: Only to get rescued by Grontar and Kasey after the amusement park battle.]]
* RayGun: The standard in the setting, called "lazer". Used both as sidearm and spaceship cannon.
* PsychicStarshipPilot: The
* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Aside from the confirmed psychics, Reona gets a couple of those. [[spoiler: This allows her [[TalkingInYourDreams to communicate with Zap]].]]
%%* PuppyDogEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040825-5/ Here]]. %%Lampshaded
* PutOnABus: After William captures them, Jason and Justin are taken away. [[spoiler: Only to get rescued by Grontar and Kasey after the amusement park battle.]]
* RayGun: The standard in the setting, called "lazer". Used both as sidearm and spaceship cannon.
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%%* RebusBubble
* RestrainingBolt: The "crowns". And Robot's programming to obey the Captain, like it or not (he does not).
* RestrainingBolt: The "crowns". And Robot's programming to obey the Captain, like it or not (he does not).
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%%* RebusBubble
RebusBubble %%where?
* RestrainingBolt: The"crowns". psychic crowns. [[spoiler: Reona breaks the one placed on Zap in the climax]]. And Robot's programming to obey the Captain, like it or not (he does not).not).
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Robot is rude, snarky, contrarian, cowardly, pessimistic, apparently has a love life with AIs and is introduced being "woken up" - holding a teddy bear. [[spoiler: He is missing an important personality chip, though.]]
* {{Robosexual}}: Aside from Stickles who treat robots like teen idols, there's Billings fooling around with robotic secretaries.
* RunningGag:
** Reona's snoring being compared to a freight-hover train.
** Zap's [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes fear and loathing of space squid]].
** The alien who goes "Oh, poop. [[OhNoNotAgain Not again]]." Every time he appears.
* RestrainingBolt: The
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Robot is rude, snarky, contrarian, cowardly, pessimistic, apparently has a love life with AIs and is introduced being "woken up" - holding a teddy bear. [[spoiler: He is missing an important personality chip, though.]]
* {{Robosexual}}: Aside from Stickles who treat robots like teen idols, there's Billings fooling around with robotic secretaries.
* RunningGag:
** Reona's snoring being compared to a freight-hover train.
** Zap's [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes fear and loathing of space squid]].
** The alien who goes "Oh, poop. [[OhNoNotAgain Not again]]." Every time he appears.
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* ShirtlessScene: Zap, [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/09/20060417/ trying out tuxedos]] going [[SceneryCensor stark naked]].
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* ShirtlessScene: Zap, [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/09/20060417/ trying out tuxedos]] going [[SceneryCensor stark naked]]. %% it's more NakedPeopleAreFunny to me
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* SomeCallMeTim: Robot's renaming. %%needs explanation
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* SomeCallMeTim: Zap, being unable, unwilling or both to remember the ship's robot's complicated designation, renames him Robot. Robot's renaming. %%needs explanationunhappy about it, but it sticks.
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* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona]].
%%* SpaceWhale: Space Squid, actually. %%not sure if this counts
%%* SpaceWhale: Space Squid, actually. %%not sure if this counts
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* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona]].
%%*Reona. The other [=AI=]s he built are also modeled after her]].
* SpaceWhale: SpaceSquid, actually. %%not sure if squid, a giant, space-borne... squid, provides a BigLippedAlligatorMoment when Zap goes to fight it in chapter 2.
-->'''Author's comment''': No space-squids were hurt in the making of thiscountscomic. Maybe a couple of regular squids... but none from space. We coudln't find any, and we looked, really hard. Twice.
%%*
* SpaceWhale: Space
-->'''Author's comment''': No space-squids were hurt in the making of this
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* SpotTheImposter: The BodyHorror creature takes Zap's appearance. Side by side, everyone debates who to shoot. Gunner comes up and just unceremoniously shoots the fake. The monster was quite easily distinguishable ("Meeee, Reaaal Zaaaaaap...") when everyone was "Side by side" as it were, and the remark from Robot seemed like it was an obvious Lampshade hanging.
* StellarName: The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last four Elementaro]], the Galilean Satellites, named after four moons of Jupiter. Io, Callisto, Europa, and Gannymede.
* SuperRegistrationAct: Psychics are being rounded up for nefarious purposes (implied to be made into {{Super Soldier}}s).
* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve the function of his weapons.
* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Zap, mistaken for a stowaway at first, is almost dumped with the trash into space (or so he thought).
* TitleConfusion: Due to the old URL, the comic is often called "Zap [- [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]-]". This is also something of a BerserkButton for the author, to the point that they've migrated to a new URL.
* WebcomicTime: A few years of comics following a few weeks of plot.
* StellarName: The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last four Elementaro]], the Galilean Satellites, named after four moons of Jupiter. Io, Callisto, Europa, and Gannymede.
* SuperRegistrationAct: Psychics are being rounded up for nefarious purposes (implied to be made into {{Super Soldier}}s).
* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve the function of his weapons.
* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Zap, mistaken for a stowaway at first, is almost dumped with the trash into space (or so he thought).
* TitleConfusion: Due to the old URL, the comic is often called "Zap [- [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]-]". This is also something of a BerserkButton for the author, to the point that they've migrated to a new URL.
* WebcomicTime: A few years of comics following a few weeks of plot.
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* SpotTheImposter: The BodyHorror creature takes Zap's appearance. Side by side, everyone debates who to shoot. Gunner comes up and just unceremoniously shoots the fake. The monster was quite easily distinguishable ("Meeee, Reaaal Zaaaaaap...") when everyone was "Side "side by side" as it were, and the remark from Robot seemed like it was an obvious Lampshade hanging.
LampshadeHanging. %%needs work
* StellarName: The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last fourElementaro]], Elementaros]], the Galilean Satellites, named after four moons of Jupiter. Io, Callisto, Europa, and Gannymede.
* StoryBreakerPower: After [[spoiler: Zap regains his memory, his powers and his freedom (thanks to Reona breaking the crown), he makes short shrift of hitherto invincible Gunner, {{depower}}ing him and marooning him on a backwater planet with Naveed]].
* SuperRegistrationAct: Psychics are being rounded up as CannonFodder fornefarious purposes (implied to be made into {{Super Soldier}}s).
Gunner's EvilPlan.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: As Billings announces the founding of Universal Psychic Academy and a [[SuperRegistrationAct recruitment drive for it]]...
-->'''Billings''': Don't worry. (heh heh) We don't plan on exploiting the psychics for personal gain... (looks very shifty and turns red as Verbatim and Yago stare dissaprovingly)
* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve his aim.
* ThinkingOutLoud: For a while in thefunction of his weapons.
beginning, Zap. This [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome allows the pursuing troopers to locate him]].
* ThrownOutTheAirlock:Zap, mistaken for a stowaway at first, is almost dumped Reona wasn't ''really'' going to have Zap thrown out of the airlock, but she sure words it that way when dealing with the trash into space (or so he thought).
a stinking, badly-flirting random guy who gets on her already frazzled nerves.
* TitleConfusion: Due to the old URL, the comic is often called "Zap [- [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]-]". This is also something of a BerserkButton for the author, to the point that they've migrated to a newURL.
URL.
* TrashLanding: Zap's introduction consists of him falling into a dumpster, scrambling out, commenting to himself that wasn't a very good idea and "they" are still on his tail and legging it as the dumpster [[StuffBlowingUp is blown up]] by his pursuers.
* {{Understatement}}: Zap has a tendency.
--> (when Robot tells him how Reona lost her arm and Efrem) '''Zap''': Wow... this sucks.
* UnsoundEffect: "Rattle" and "shake" as ''Excelsior'' is under fire by [=GEF=] mooks. "WARNING" when the reactor is acting up. Also "DOOM" a couple of times.
* WebcomicTime: A few years of comics following a fewweeks months of plot.
* StellarName: The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last four
* StoryBreakerPower: After [[spoiler: Zap regains his memory, his powers and his freedom (thanks to Reona breaking the crown), he makes short shrift of hitherto invincible Gunner, {{depower}}ing him and marooning him on a backwater planet with Naveed]].
* SuperRegistrationAct: Psychics are being rounded up as CannonFodder for
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: As Billings announces the founding of Universal Psychic Academy and a [[SuperRegistrationAct recruitment drive for it]]...
-->'''Billings''': Don't worry. (heh heh) We don't plan on exploiting the psychics for personal gain... (looks very shifty and turns red as Verbatim and Yago stare dissaprovingly)
* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve his aim.
* ThinkingOutLoud: For a while in the
* ThrownOutTheAirlock:
* TitleConfusion: Due to the old URL, the comic is often called "Zap [- [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]-]". This is also something of a BerserkButton for the author, to the point that they've migrated to a new
* TrashLanding: Zap's introduction consists of him falling into a dumpster, scrambling out, commenting to himself that wasn't a very good idea and "they" are still on his tail and legging it as the dumpster [[StuffBlowingUp is blown up]] by his pursuers.
* {{Understatement}}: Zap has a tendency.
--> (when Robot tells him how Reona lost her arm and Efrem) '''Zap''': Wow... this sucks.
* UnsoundEffect: "Rattle" and "shake" as ''Excelsior'' is under fire by [=GEF=] mooks. "WARNING" when the reactor is acting up. Also "DOOM" a couple of times.
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might refurbish this properly later - if I have the time before the world goes to hell, and whose bloody fault is that, I'm asking? otherwise, watch Planet of the Apes. Fools.
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* MemoryGambit: [[spoiler: Zap, having searched the future for the most beneficial path after his HeelFaceTurn, found the best outcome would be reached if he had his memories erased]]. So he had his memories erased and set the plot in motion.
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* AirVentPassageway: Zap uses this [[spoiler: right into the enemy's midst]].
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* AirVentPassageway: Zap uses this [[spoiler: right into the enemy's midst]]. %%needs context
* AnimalMotifs: Gunner's associated with snakes and [[spoiler: Zap with falcons]]. They're represented by those animals in psychic dreams and sometimes explicitly called their names.
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* BattleAura: Psychics, when ''seriously'' irked, emanate an aura in their colour.
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%%* BlankWhiteEyes: A few times - for example, in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/09/20060529/ strip 299b]], when Reona invites Zap to dance with her at an elegant ball. Grontar, probably imagining everything that could go wrong, goes blank white in the eyes.
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%%* BlankWhiteEyes: A few times - for example, in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/09/20060529/ strip 299b]], when Reona invites Zap to dance with her at an elegant ball. Grontar, probably imagining everything that could go wrong, goes blank white in the eyes. %%is it this trope?
* BunglingInventor: The Stickles. This is their [[PlanetOfHats hat]]. They're on their seventh home planet, having blown up the previous six, and Kasey, who has ''one'' invention that hasn't blown up (yet... hopefully...) may be the least bungling one of her race.
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* PsychicStarshipPilot: The Excelsior [[spoiler: and the Deadalus]], having been built by a certain psychic genius, require a psychic to use some of their features.
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* AmnesiaDanger: Zap has to figure out how to work the [[FasterThanLightTravel hyperjump]] with his forgotten powers.
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* AmnesiaDanger: When Zap has to figure out how to work the [[FasterThanLightTravel hyperjump]] with his forgotten powers.
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* CerebusSyndrome: Before the crew visits Demonica, it's all goofying off and Zap's amnesia putting him in silly situations. Come the amusement park battle and revelations come, along with BloodFromTheMouth wounds
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler: Gunner is rather frank about only not killing William because he has a use for him]].
* CerebusSyndrome: Before the crew visits Demonica, it's all goofying off and Zap's amnesia putting him in silly situations. Come the amusement park battle and revelations come, along with BloodFromTheMouthwoundswounds and characters actually, dramatically dying all of a sudden.
* CerebusSyndrome: Before the crew visits Demonica, it's all goofying off and Zap's amnesia putting him in silly situations. Come the amusement park battle and revelations come, along with BloodFromTheMouth
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Apparently a fairly normal ability for psychics.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Apparently a fairly normal ability for psychics.Most psychics get prophetic dreams. Trouble is, they're rather symbolic and Zap, who can't remember how to use his powers, gets confused by them instead of learning anything.
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* ElementalPowers: The Elementaro race. The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last four members]] are recruited by Naveed.
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* ElementalPowers: The Elementaro race.shtick of the Elementaros. The [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ last four members]] are recruited by Naveed.
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* EvilVersusEvil: The [=GEF=] against the Serpent's rebellion (which is different from the Resistance).
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: An indication of often dangerous psychic powers.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * GovernmentConspiracy: Not fully revealed yet.
* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The GEF grunts are usually idiotic and are [[RedShirt killed in droves]].
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * GovernmentConspiracy: Not fully revealed yet.
* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The GEF grunts are usually idiotic and are [[RedShirt killed in droves]].
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: An indication of often dangerous When a psychic powers.
uses their powers, their eyes glow the color of their aura (good example would be when Efrem powers down and his eyes slowly turn from solid electric blue to normal, human blue irises with pupils.
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%%that's complicated
* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: The GEF grunts areusually idiotic pretty much comic relief in {{Red Shirt}}s. Besides that, Kasey once makes robot guards leave their post by reprogramming another robot to run around in circles and are [[RedShirt killed in droves]].insult them.
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Reona, about Zap. Even flat out says it on page 281.
* HypnoTrinket: The psychic AmplifierArtifact devices called "crowns" can be used to do this. At the GEF psychic academy, they are used to keep all the psychics underneath the GEF's control. [[spoiler:Gunner manipulated all of this into being, and plans to use the mind controlled psychic army to KillAllHumans as revenge for the destruction of his world.]]
* HypnoTrinket: The psychic AmplifierArtifact devices called "crowns" can be used to do this. At the GEF psychic academy, they are used to keep all the psychics underneath the GEF's control. [[spoiler:Gunner manipulated all of this into being, and plans to use the mind controlled psychic army to KillAllHumans as revenge for the destruction of his world.]]
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Reona, about Zap. Even flat out says Zap, for most of the silly part of the story, because she's pining for Efrem. After the amusement park battle [[spoiler: where Zap is wounded and abducted, and Efrem revealed to have been in league with Gunner for the entire time]] her loyalties shift, but it on page 281.
still takes her a while to admit she's in love.
* HypnoTrinket: The psychic AmplifierArtifact devices called "crowns" can be used to do this. At theGEF [=GEF=] psychic academy, they are used to keep all the psychics underneath the GEF's control. [[spoiler:Gunner manipulated all of this into being, and plans to use the mind controlled psychic army to KillAllHumans as revenge for the destruction of his world.]]
* HypnoTrinket: The psychic AmplifierArtifact devices called "crowns" can be used to do this. At the
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* JustAMachine: Several intelligent robots are destroyed for avoidable or petty reasons. Made more jarring by the fact one of the main cast is a robot.
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LaResistance: Played absolutely straight with "The Resistance".
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LawOfAlienNames: Lots of the names fit.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LeaveHimToMe: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/10/20060828/ Reona vs. Naveed.]]
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LawOfAlienNames: Lots of the names fit.
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LawOfAlienNames: Lots of the names
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LeaveHimToMe: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/10/20060828/ Reona vs. Naveed.
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* OutrunTheFireball: Zap does this in the second comic.
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%%* ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder: The Stickle race. %%no, they're just inventors
* SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains: Even compared to Reona in pirate arc (where she wears short shorts) or the amusement park battle (AbsoluteCleavage and ClothingDamage) Naveed's default outfit leaves very little to imagination. Then again, a CatGirl might have somewhat different standards of nudity.
* SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains: Even compared to Reona in pirate arc (where she wears short shorts) or the amusement park battle (AbsoluteCleavage and ClothingDamage) Naveed's default outfit leaves very little to imagination. Then again, a CatGirl might have somewhat different standards of nudity.
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* SomeCallMeTim: Robot's renaming.
* SpaceIsNoisy: There are some sound effects during the space battle.
* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]].
%%* SpaceWhale: Space Squid, actually.
* SpaceIsNoisy: There are some sound effects during the space battle.
* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]].
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* SomeCallMeTim: Robot's renaming.
renaming. %%needs explanation
* SpaceIsNoisy: There are some sound effects during the spacebattle.
battle. %%needs explanation
* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing bluewoman]].
woman]] who resembles Reona. [[spoiler: This is because she was built by Zap and the hologram is modeled after the girl he dreamt of - Reona]].
%%* SpaceWhale: Space Squid, actually. %%not sure if this counts
* SpaceIsNoisy: There are some sound effects during the space
* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue
%%* SpaceWhale: Space Squid, actually. %%not sure if this counts
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* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve the function of his weapons.
* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Zap, who was mistaken for a stowaway at first, is almost dumped with the trash into space (or so he thought).
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* {{Technopath}}: One of Zap's first displays of psychic ability is activating the ''Excelsior'''s hyperdrive. In fact his mental commands are apparently the only thing that can do so. [[spoiler: Of course, as it turns out, he ''built'' the ship, so...]] Gunner, as his name implies, uses his to improve the function of his weapons.
* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Zap,who was mistaken for a stowaway at first, is almost dumped with the trash into space (or so he thought).
* ThrownOutTheAirlock: Zap,
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[[LaserGuidedAmnesia Amnesiac]] Zap finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is [[PsychicPowers psychic]] and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken over the previous captain, Efrem. He had been apparently killed by an enemy, Naveed. Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain. This is mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material. They fight their way through the [[TheEmpire GEF]], crash land, fight their way through the GEF again, take off, and pick up an ally: Kasey. Another Resistance member, Kasey is infatuated with Robot and helps repair Reona's artificial arm. Zap runs into a stranger (to him at this point), Gunner, who claims to be a friend from his forgotten past. The comic finally concluded in September, 2014.
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A goofy [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Amnesiac]] Zap amnesiac]] named Zap, though an improbable coincidence finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is [[PsychicPowers psychic]] and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken over the previous captain, Efrem. He had been apparently killed by an enemy, Naveed. Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain. This is mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material. They fight their way through the [[TheEmpire GEF]], crash land, fight their way through the GEF again, take off, and pick up an ally: Kasey. Another Resistance member, Kasey is infatuated with Robot and helps repair Reona's artificial arm. Zap runs into a stranger (to him at this point), Gunner, who claims to be a friend from his forgotten past. The comic finally concluded in September, 2014.
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: Zap was evil before he became affected by amnesia, and he woke up good.
* AmusementPark: Scene of the biggest fight so far.
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: Zap That's complicated. [[spoiler: When we meet Zap, he is an IdiotHero, goofy, but well-meaning. But, as it later turns out, ''he was evil before the mastermind behind the EvilPlan'' Gunner is putting in motion now. He began getting second thoughts (partly because he became affected by amnesia, fell in love) and orchestrated another plan to give himself amnesia and invoke this very trope to have a chance with the [[GirlOfMyDreams girl he woke up good.
only saw in his dreams]] - Reona.]]
* AmusementPark:Scene of the biggest The big, dramatic fight so far.that marks the beginning of CerebusSyndrome takes place in an amusement park (partly in the HallOfMirrors).
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* ElementalHairColors: Three of the last four Elementaro, as seen [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ here]]:
--> Europa, with the power to control the wind. (White-haired)
--> Callisto, who has power over water. (Blue-haired)
--> Gannymede. He is a master of earth. (Green-haired)
--> Europa, with the power to control the wind. (White-haired)
--> Callisto, who has power over water. (Blue-haired)
--> Gannymede. He is a master of earth. (Green-haired)
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-->here]]: Europa, with the power to control the wind. (White-haired)
-->wind, has white, flowing hair (even when [[DramaticWind there is no wind]]). Callisto, who has power over water. (Blue-haired)
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* FlamingHair: Io's initially bald head becomes full of flaming hair when he demonstrates his powers on [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ this page]].
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* FlamingHair: Io's initially normally bald head becomes full of flaming hair when he demonstrates his powers on [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/05/20050608b/ this page]].
* GirlOfMyDreams: [[spoiler: The reason for Zap's HeelFaceTurn - he began dreaming about Reona, fell in love and decided he didn't want to be the bad guy anymore]].
* HeelFaceTurn: Happened in the backstory to [[spoiler: Zap himself]].
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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: The GEF have landed about 5 of their shots.
* JediMindTrick: Seemingly a standard psychic power. It even gets a ShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]].
* JediMindTrick: Seemingly a standard psychic power. It even gets a ShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]].
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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: The GEF have landed about 5 troopers follow the fine tradition of their shots.
not being able to land a shot. [[ConservationOfNinjutsu Gunner, however]]...
* JediMindTrick: Seemingly a standard psychic power. It even gets a ShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]]. %%needs quote
* JediMindTrick: Seemingly a standard psychic power. It even gets a ShoutOut[=/=]LampshadeHanging [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/01/20040818-5/ here]]. %%needs quote
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[[LaserGuidedAmnesia Amnesiac]] Zap finds himself the captain of a CoolStarship called the ''Excelsior''. He discovers that he is [[PsychicPowers psychic]] and falls for the first officer, Reona, who is still heartbroken over the previous captain, Efrem. He had been apparently killed by an enemy, Naveed. Reona and the ship's mechanic, Grontar, and navigation droid, Robot, aren't too thrilled about Zap being picked as the captain. This is mostly because Zap is a doofus and far from captain material. They fight their way through the [[TheEmpire GEF]], crash land, fight their way through the GEF again, take off, and pick up an ally: Kasey. Another Resistance member, Kasey is infatuated with Robot and helps repair Reona's artificial arm. Zap runs into a stranger (to him at this point), Gunner, who claims to be a friend from his forgotten past. The comic finally concluded in September, 2014.
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maybe gonna slowly pick away at filling in some ZC Es, maybe gonna forget about this page for months at a time
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%%* ElevatorEscape: Happens to [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/02/20071203/ Grontar]].
%%* TheEmpire: The Galactic Earth Federation.
* EvilVersusEvil: The [=GEF=] against the Serpent's rebellion (which is different from the Resistance).
%%* {{Flashback}}: {{Lampshaded}} in [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20050107-4/ this]] comic.
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%%* KickTheMoralityPet
%%* LaserSight [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/ Here.]]
%%* LaserSight [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/03/20041231-5/ Here.]]
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%%* LaResistance: Played absolutely straight with "The Resistance".
%%* LawOfAlienNames: Lots of the names fit.
%%* LeaveHimToMe: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/10/20060828/ Reona vs. Naveed.]]
%%* LawOfAlienNames: Lots of the names fit.
%%* LeaveHimToMe: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/10/20060828/ Reona vs. Naveed.]]
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%%* MindControlEyes: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/08/20051215/ Here.]]
%%* NonSequiturThud: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/08/20031020/ This comic]].
%%* NotWhatItLooksLike: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/08/20060116/ The title and the dialog.]]
%%* NonSequiturThud: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2003/08/20031020/ This comic]].
%%* NotWhatItLooksLike: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/08/20060116/ The title and the dialog.]]
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%% ZeroContextExample entries are not allowed on wiki pages. All such entries have been commented out. Do not uncomment them without expanding them to provide context. WeblinksAreNotExamples; a link to a strip with the comment "Here" or "This strip" and no further explanation tells us nothing about how the trope applies. Write the example so that it can be understood even without the link.
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%% ZeroContextExample Administrivia/ZeroContextExample entries are not allowed on wiki pages. All such entries have been commented out. Do not uncomment them without expanding them to provide context. WeblinksAreNotExamples; Administrivia/WeblinksAreNotExamples; a link to a strip with the comment "Here" or "This strip" and no further explanation tells us nothing about how the trope applies. Write the example so that it can be understood even without the link.
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*DreamingOfThingsToCome: Apparently a fairly normal ability for psychics.
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* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elementaros are the last of their species.
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* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elementaros are the last of their species. [[spoiler: Zap, Efrem, and Gunner]] are also the last three members of their species.
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the crown plan, which he only stopped when his dreams introduced him to his future love.
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the crown [[RestrainingBolt "crown"]] plan, which he only stopped when his dreams [[DreamingofThingstoCome dreams]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext introduced him to his future love.]]
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* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elelmentaros are the last of their species.
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* LastOfHisKind: Robot is the last robot left with a learning AI. The Elelmentaros Elementaros are the last of their species.
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* LoveRedeems: Although it's only shown through flashbacks, it's made clear that [[spoiler: Zap]] was the original mastermind behind the crown plan, which he only stopped when his dreams introduced him to his future love.
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%%* HallOfMirrors: [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2004/12/20070215/ Here.]]
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* SpaceshipGirl: The ''Excelsior'' is sentient and sometimes manifests as a hologram of a [[http://www.zapcomic.com/2005/05/20090920/ naked, glowing blue woman]].