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* RapunzelHair: Sophie's quill infested hair reaches to her feet.
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''[[http://overturecomic.com/ The Overture]]'' is a dark fantasy webcomic by Jacob Gray. It follows the tale of Richard Olsen, A newly made Slave of the Sun who recklessly took on a creature of legend.
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->'''Richard''': And what do you achieve by making me a hero?
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The Overture is a dark fantasy webcomic by Jacob Gray. It follows the tale of Richard Olsen, A newly made Slave of the Sun who recklessly took on a creature of legend.
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The Overture is a dark fantasy webcomic by Jacob Gray. It follows the tale of Richard Olsen, A newly made Slave of the Sun who recklessly took on a creature of legend.
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'''Sophie''': A song for little children.
''[[http://overturecomic.com/ TheOverture Overture]]'' is a dark fantasy webcomic by Jacob Gray. It follows the tale of Richard Olsen, A newly made Slave of the Sun who recklessly took on a creature of legend.
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It can be read [[http://overturecomic.com/ here.]]
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!! Tropes featured in The Overture:
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* InMediasRes: The series begins in the middle of the story, when Richard is already enslaved by Sophie. Only after realizing how hopeless his situation is does the story jump back to the beginning.
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Did I mention the creature happens to be a little girl.
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** Angela has hair just as impressive but [[http://overturecomic.com/page0118.html doesn't prove too well in a fight.]]
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** Angela has hair just as impressive but [[http://overturecomic.com/page0118.html doesn't prove too well in a fight.]]
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* PetTheDog: Angry, bitter Norbert tucking his daughter, Angela into bed.
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* SuperToughness: The headhuntress takes a faceful of needles and is stabbed through the chin... She's still kicking.
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* SuperToughness: The headhuntress takes a faceful face full of needles and is stabbed through the chin... She's still kicking.kicking.
* TreasureRoom: Sunny O'Reilly sits in one of these on the chapter six cover.
* TreasureRoom: Sunny O'Reilly sits in one of these on the chapter six cover.
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* ShakingHerHairLoose: Richard pulls the pin out of Janis Lashway's bun, revealing her long hair. The first step before the two [[spoiler: make love]].
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As the series progress, the comic begins to focus on the other members of Richard's family. These include his loving warlord mother, cruel father and two younger sisters.
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* RapunzelHair: Sophie's quill infested hair reaches to her feet.
** Angela has hair just as impressive but [[http://overturecomic.com/page0118.html doesn't prove too well in a fight.]]
** Angela has hair just as impressive but [[http://overturecomic.com/page0118.html doesn't prove too well in a fight.]]
