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* ArtEvolution: Dahm improved his brush-drawn linework massively while making the comic. Compare [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=005 T-O-E leaving Suntown]] with [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=439 Rice Boy leaving Suntown]], 434 pages later.
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* ArtEvolution: Dahm improved his brush-drawn linework massively while making the comic. Compare [[http://www.[[https://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=005 T-O-E leaving Suntown]] with [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=439 Rice Boy leaving Suntown]], 434 pages later.
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* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Played with. Over the years hundreds of people were declared to be the fulfiller until they finally found the right one. [[spoiler: In the end, both [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=420 T-O-E and Rice Boy met the requirements to be Fulfiller]], but T-O-E is the one who dies first.]]
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* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Played with. Over the years hundreds of people were declared to be the fulfiller until they finally found the right one. [[spoiler: In the end, both [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=420 T-O-E and Rice Boy met the requirements to be Fulfiller]], but T-O-E is the one who dies first.]]
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* FlatWhat: Rice Boy does this [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=053 here.]] And [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=212 here.]]
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* FlatWhat: Rice Boy does this [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=053 here.]] And [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=212 here.]]
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* StealthPun: [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=353 Rise, boy.]]
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* StealthPun: [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.com/rb/index.php?c=353 Rise, boy.]]
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* ArtEvolution: Dahm improved his brush-drawn linework massively while making the comic. Compare [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=005 T-O-E leaving suntown]] with [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=439 Rice Boy leaving Suntown]], 434 pages later.
%% * AncientKeeper: In the library of the Kingdom of Seen.
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* ArtEvolution: Dahm improved his brush-drawn linework massively while making the comic. Compare [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=005 T-O-E leaving suntown]] Suntown]] with [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=439 Rice Boy leaving Suntown]], 434 pages later.
%% * AncientKeeper: In the The library of the Kingdom of Seen.Seen has an elderly librarian who advises Rice Boy on where to go from there.
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* BeneathTheEarth: The Kingdom of Seen, well hidden beneath the ground, is a gateway between Overside and Underside, so can be considered a double example. Also, a HiddenElfVillage - if you get in there, they might never let you out.
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* BeneathTheEarth: The Kingdom of Seen, well hidden beneath the ground, is a gateway between Overside and Underside, so it can be considered a double example. Also, a HiddenElfVillage - if you get in there, they might never let you out.
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%% * TheBlank: T-O-E.
%% * BountyHunter: Golgo.
%% * BreakTheCutie: Rice Boy. Gerund for some.
%% * BountyHunter: Golgo.
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%% * BreakTheCutie: Rice Boy. Gerund for some. %% that's... vague
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** Although, it should be remembered that Golgo [[spoiler: (aka Angel-Eye) used to be a searcher like T.O.E and Calabash. He's been around thousands of years, so she may not be his biological sister.]]
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** Although, it should be remembered that Golgo [[spoiler: Golgo (aka Angel-Eye) used to be a searcher like T.O.E and Calabash. He's been around thousands of years, so she may not be his biological sister.]]
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* FlatWorld: There are Overside and Underside. This story takes place mostly in the former.
* {{Foil}}: Calabash and T-O-E, to an extent. They have radically different personalities and outlooks, but are still friends and work towards a similar goal.
* {{Foil}}: Calabash and T-O-E, to an extent. They have radically different personalities and outlooks, but are still friends and work towards a similar goal.
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* FlatWorld: There are It resembles a giant coin with Overside and Underside. This story takes place mostly in the former.
* {{Foil}}: Calabash and T-O-E, to an extent. They have radically different personalities and outlooks, but are still friends and work towards asimilar common goal.
* {{Foil}}: Calabash and T-O-E, to an extent. They have radically different personalities and outlooks, but are still friends and work towards a
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%% * HeterosexualLifePartners: Rice Boy and Gerund become this.
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%% * HeterosexualLifePartners: Rice Boy and Gerund become this. %%they do become friends, but there's no indication of this level of closeness
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* ImmortalityImmorality: Not all immortal characters are immoral, but this is the effect that the Black Spirit has on people. Averted with Calabash and T-O-E, who still desperately cling to a failing moral compass.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: Not all immortal characters are immoral, but this is the effect that the Black Spirit has on people. Averted with Calabash and T-O-E, who still desperately cling to a failing moral compass. %%failing?
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* LordErrorProne: Yureg, the Prince of Satuar. His bumbling absentmindedness has to be seen to be believed. He also convinces himself that Rice Boy is a powerful wizard. His BeleagueredAssistant advises Rice Boy to get away as fast as possible.
* MechanicalLifeforms: The Machine Men. They can smoke, they grow as they age, and one of them nearly dies of ''poisoning''. ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' includes a story about them evolving into their metal form from rock material.
* MechanicalLifeforms: The Machine Men. They can smoke, they grow as they age, and one of them nearly dies of ''poisoning''. ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' includes a story about them evolving into their metal form from rock material.
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* LordErrorProne: Yureg, the Prince of Satuar. His bumbling absentmindedness has to be seen to be believed. He also convinces himself that Rice Boy is a powerful wizard. His BeleagueredAssistant advises Rice Boy to get away as fast as possible.
possible while the prince isn't looking.
* MechanicalLifeforms: The Machine Men. They can smoke, they grow as they age, and one of them nearly dies of ''poisoning''. ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' includes a story about them evolving into their metal form from rockmaterial.people.
* MechanicalLifeforms: The Machine Men. They can smoke, they grow as they age, and one of them nearly dies of ''poisoning''. ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' includes a story about them evolving into their metal form from rock
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* NeverGetsDrunk: Calabash and T-O-E drink vodka and whiskey as if it was water. Cal says it's over 3000 years of building tolerance.
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* NeverGetsDrunk: Calabash and T-O-E drink vodka and whiskey as if it was were water. Cal says it's over 3000 years of building tolerance.
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* WordsCanBreakMyBones: [[spoiler: A word uttered in the Trill language can ''literally'' do this.]]
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* WordsCanBreakMyBones: [[spoiler: A word uttered in the Trill language can ''literally'' do this.this, as well as change reality in general.]]
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* BadassAdorable: Admit it, Rice Boy's like [[Literature/TheLordofTheRings Frodo]], sweet-natured, cute, huggable and brave. Also Gerund.
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* BadassAdorable: Admit it, Rice Boy's like [[Literature/TheLordofTheRings Frodo]], sweet-natured, cute, huggable and brave. Also Gerund.Gerund, the most bumbling and innocent [[ProudWarriorRace Horned]] in the setting.
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** T.O.E, Calabash, and Golgo, all of them being immortal travelers who appear in legends and history books of various cultures.
** In a side story of their past, it mentions T.O.E becoming the king of a civilization while Calabash waited years for his return in tundra, right when ANOTHER hero of his own story was there.
** In a side story of their past, it mentions T.O.E becoming the king of a civilization while Calabash waited years for his return in tundra, right when ANOTHER hero of his own story was there.
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** T.O.E, T-O-E, Calabash, and Golgo, all of them being immortal travelers who appear in legends and history books of various cultures.
** In a side story of their past, it mentionsT.O.E T-O-E becoming the king of a civilization while Calabash waited years for his return in tundra, right when ANOTHER hero of his own story was there.
** In a side story of their past, it mentions
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* TVHeadRobot: T-O-E His head shows not-so-random images.
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* TVHeadRobot: T-O-E T-O-E. His head shows not-so-random images.
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* WhiteGloves: T-O-E wears them. Here, they're straight-up Mickey Mouse gloves; later comics like ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' would depict them as more realistic leather gloves.
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* WhiteGloves: T-O-E wears them. Here, they're straight-up Mickey Mouse gloves; later comics like ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' would depict them as more realistic leather gloves.
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* WorldTree: Daughter, the oldest and strongest tree in the Heart of the Dorlish Wood, which holds the Tree Keeper's most valuable possession.
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* WorldTree: Daughter, the oldest and strongest tree in the Heart of the Dorlish Wood, which holds the Tree Keeper's most valuable possession.
possession - [[spoiler: the handwritten scroll of Ridrom's prophecy]].
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* DialogueReversal:
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* DialogueReversal:DialogueReversal: When Rice Boy is trying to find Parod's house in Scortch, he meets a mysterious masked person whom he asks:
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** The mysterious person responds he'll go to Scortch, which Rice Boy does and passes out from the desert heat. Then he's rescued and meets the mysterious person again. Rice Boy follows the person and the questioning is reversed, only this time Rice Boy responds that he's going to Parod's house - and is led right there.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The 'vaguely-defined' prophecy is fulfilled and Spatch is defeated. But T.O.E. [[TheHeroDies is stabbed by Golgo]] for the last time while trying to save Rice Boy. Rice Boy and Gerund return to Rice Boy's home and will get to live HappilyEverAfter, but both are deeply shaken by everything that's happened.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The 'vaguely-defined' prophecy is fulfilled and Spatch is defeated. But T.O.E. T-O-E [[TheHeroDies is stabbed by Golgo]] for the last time while trying to save Rice Boy. Rice Boy and Gerund return to Rice Boy's home and will get to live HappilyEverAfter, but both are deeply shaken by everything that's happened.]]
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* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: It turns out T.O.E. is one of these, suffering a bout of WhoWantsToLiveForever.]]
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* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: It turns out T.O.E. T-O-E is one of these, suffering a bout of WhoWantsToLiveForever.]]
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* DramaticIrony: In Memoar, the garden of memories, T.O.E. purposefully induces in himself a flashback to the White Beast snatching his little brother (just like it snatched Gerund's brother), which seems to be a very traumatic memory. This is after the reader has learned that [[spoiler: the White Beast does '''not''' harm those it takes, bringing them to the heir of Ridrom - guardians of the very prophecy T.O.E. is working to fulfill - as apprentices]].
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* DramaticIrony: In Memoar, the garden of memories, T.O.E. T-O-E purposefully induces in himself a flashback to the White Beast snatching his little brother (just like it snatched Gerund's brother), which seems to be a very traumatic memory. This is after the reader has learned that [[spoiler: the White Beast does '''not''' harm those it takes, bringing them to the current heir of Ridrom - guardians guardian of the very prophecy T.O.E. T-O-E is working to fulfill - as apprentices]].
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* SacrificialLamb: Calabash is killed by their employer for stopping his search. It fuels T.O.E.'s [[WhoWantsToLiveForever depression]], who nevertheless continues the quest.
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* SacrificialLamb: Calabash is killed by their employer for stopping his search. It fuels T.O.E.'s T-O-E's [[WhoWantsToLiveForever depression]], who nevertheless continues the quest.
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* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. can make sparks with his fingers, which he uses in combat and to [[FingersnapLighter light fires]]. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
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* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. T-O-E can make sparks with his fingers, which he uses in combat and to [[FingersnapLighter light fires]]. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
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* StarfishLanguage: The language of Ridrom's prophecy, which took even him years to understand somewhat. [[spoiler: It;s the divine speech of the three avatars]].
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* StarfishLanguage: The language of Ridrom's prophecy, which took even him years to understand somewhat. [[spoiler: It;s It's the divine speech of the three avatars]].Avatars]].
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* TVHeadRobot: T.O.E. His head shows not-so-random images.
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* TVHeadRobot: T.O.E. T-O-E His head shows not-so-random images.
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* DramaticIrony: In Memoar, the garden of memories, T.O.E. purposefully induces in himself a flashback to the White Beast snatching his little brother (just like it snatched Gerund's brother), which seems to be a very traumatic memory. This is after the reader has learned that [[spoiler: the White Beast does '''not''' harm those it takes, bringing them to the heir of Ridrom - guardians of the very prophecy T.O.E. is working to fulfill - as apprentices]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Father Dimmon, former ruler of the Lonely Land, whose hands are nailed to the ground.
--> '''[[HulkSpeak GIVE.]]'''
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--> '''[[HulkSpeak GIVE.]]'''
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* EldritchAbomination: Father Dimmon, former ruler Dimmon of the Lonely Land, whose hands are nailed to the ground.
ground. Smaller dimmons bring him travellers who have drunk the water and became cursed, so he can eat them.
--> '''[[HulkSpeak GIVE.]]'''
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* FantasticDrug: The Black Drink or Black Spirit. The nice [[WhoWantsToLiveForever (?)]] thing about it is that it makes you immortal (and, apparently, tastes good), but is horribly addictive. As you DescentIntoAddiction, you will be more [[DrunkOnTheDarkSide and more ruthless, amoral and generally evil]].
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* FantasticDrug: The Black Drink or Black Spirit. The nice [[WhoWantsToLiveForever (?)]] thing about it is that it [[ElixirOfLife makes you immortal immortal]] (and, apparently, tastes good), but is horribly addictive. As you DescentIntoAddiction, you will be more [[DrunkOnTheDarkSide and more ruthless, amoral and generally evil]].
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* GodBeforeDogma: T-O-E's theological position.
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* GodBeforeDogma: T-O-E's theological position. %%quote?
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-->'''Rice Boy''': You aren't very helpful, Bor.
-->'''Bor the Very Large''': Uh-huh, well -- you aren't very large.
-->'''Bor the Very Large''': Uh-huh, well -- you aren't very large.
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-->'''Rice Boy''': You aren't very helpful, Bor.
-->'''BorBor.\\
'''Bor the Very Large''': Uh-huh, well -- you aren't very large.
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'''Bor the Very Large''': Uh-huh, well -- you aren't very large.
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* LordErrorProne: Yureg, the Prince of Satuar. His bumbling absentmindedness has to be seen to be believed.
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* LordErrorProne: Yureg, the Prince of Satuar. His bumbling absentmindedness has to be seen to be believed. He also convinces himself that Rice Boy is a powerful wizard. His BeleagueredAssistant advises Rice Boy to get away as fast as possible.
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* NeverGetsDrunk: Calabash and T-O-E drink vodka and whiskey as if it was water.
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* NeverGetsDrunk: Calabash and T-O-E drink vodka and whiskey as if it was water. Cal says it's over 3000 years of building tolerance.
* PurposeDrivenImmortality: The Searchers will not die until they fulfill or abandon their role. Golgo has abandoned it, but copes by using the Black Drink.
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* SceneryPorn: Sometimes it seems like the comic is nothing but excuses to draw more weird landscapes.
* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
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* SceneryPorn: Sometimes it seems like the comic is nothing but excuses an excuse to draw more weird landscapes.
* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. can make sparks with his fingers, which he uses in combat and to [[FingersnapLighter light fires]]. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
* ShockAndAwe: T.O.E. can make sparks with his fingers, which he uses in combat and to [[FingersnapLighter light fires]]. And only him (and maybe his brothers) - no other Machine Men have this power.
* StarfishLanguage: The language of Ridrom's prophecy, which took even him years to understand somewhat. [[spoiler: It;s the divine speech of the three avatars]].
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* TerminallyDependentSociety: The people of Whetton were utterly dependent on the Tree of Thought. When it died, they attacked another city for its tree.
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* TerminallyDependentSociety: The people of Whetton were utterly dependent on the Tree of Thought. When it died, they attacked another city Suntown for its tree.
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* KnifeNut: [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=074 T-O-E vs. Golgo.]]
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* BilingualBonus: Evan Dahm's constructed language of [[FanNickname Seen-Script]] is present in places all over the Overworld, and gives those who can read it extra little insights into the world.
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* BilingualBonus: Evan Dahm's constructed language of [[FanNickname Seen-Script]] Seen-Script is present in places all over the Overworld, and gives those who can read it extra little insights into the world.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Two statues in the Library of Seen resemble Koark and Gerráh, major characters from the prequel ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales''.
* EyepatchOfPower: The mercenary Golgo wears an eyepatch whenever he sends his cybernetic eyeball out to spy. Eventually that eye gets damaged beyond repair, so Golgo wears that eyepatch permanently.
* EyeSpy: Golgo has a [[ElectronicEyes cybernetic eye]] which can detach and fly around to spy on others. It can't transmit what it sees; instead it records video to play back to Golgo when it returns.
* EyeSpy: Golgo has a [[ElectronicEyes cybernetic eye]] which can detach and fly around to spy on others. It can't transmit what it sees; instead it records video to play back to Golgo when it returns.
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: The Frog-men use giant lizards, and Maquěn has a horse-like creature that's able to contract its entire body into its cubical head.
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: The Frog-men use giant lizards, and Maquěn Maquín has a horse-like creature that's able to contract its entire body into its cubical head.
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* PinballProtagonist: Rice Boy, per WordOfGod ( http://riceboycomic.tumblr.com/ ).
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* PinballProtagonist: Rice Boy, per Boy spends most of his quest just doing what other people ask him to do, in many cases literally falling or bouncing to his next quest objective like a real pinball. WordOfGod ( http://riceboycomic.confirms that this was intentional:
-->'''[[https://riceboycomic.tumblr.com/ ).com/post/120611002950/i-think-i-would-design-rice-boys-home-differently Evan Dahm:]]''' That’s sort of a categorical issue in this type of story, writ a little larger: the stereotypical hero of a hero’s journey is calculatedly boring and neutral, in a way that clashes with modern notions of storytelling and character development. Rice Boy is basically nothing but that neutrality extended as far as possible.
-->'''[[https://riceboycomic.tumblr.
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* PoisonedWeapons: T-O-E's knife. [[spoiler: It backfires on him, though it is implied that it was intended to end his own life.]]
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* PoisonedWeapons: T-O-E's knife. [[spoiler: It backfires on him, though knife, which is coated with a poison powerful enough even to kill immortals. [[spoiler:Golgo winds up snatching it is implied during their fight and stabbing T-O-E with it. T-O-E later admits that it was intended he'd been intending to end his own life.life with that knife for some time.]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Gortch, the late father of [[VillainWithGoodPublicity King Spatch]].
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Gortch, the late father of [[VillainWithGoodPublicity King Spatch]]. His leadership strengthened ties between the kingdom of Sunk and all its neighbors, turning his kingdom into a prosperous, cosmopolitan one.
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* SupportingLeader: T-O-E. regards himself as TheChooserOfTheOne, a mentor and helper in general to the real hero, the Fulfiller. [[spoiler: Or so he thinks.]]
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* SuicideByCop: Calabash despairs of the search for the Fulfiller and just quits searching--knowing full well that his employer will kill him for that.
* SupportingLeader:T-O-E. T-O-E regards himself as TheChooserOfTheOne, a mentor and helper in general to the real hero, the Fulfiller. [[spoiler: Or so he thinks.]]
* SupportingLeader:
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* WhiteGloves: T-O-E. wears them. Also wears a BadassLongcoat in a world where most inhabitants either don't wear anything at all or fantasy garb (in ''Order of Tales'').
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* WhiteGloves: T-O-E. T-O-E wears them. Also wears a BadassLongcoat in a world where most inhabitants either don't wear anything at all or fantasy garb (in ''Order of Tales'').Here, they're straight-up Mickey Mouse gloves; later comics like ''Webcomic/OrderOfTales'' would depict them as more realistic leather gloves.