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The comic can be found [[http://oncestung.thecomicstrip.org/ here]] on Website/ComicFury where it updates on Wednesdays.
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The comic can be found [[http://oncestung.thecomicstrip.org/ here]] on Website/ComicFury Platform/ComicFury where it updates on Wednesdays.
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* RubberMan: Thanks to the Snake DNA in her system, Serpent cancan extend her body and limbs.
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* RubberMan: Thanks to the Snake DNA in her system, Serpent cancan can extend her body and limbs.
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* SkewedPriorities: On her first adventure Cynthia isn't phased by the presence of a giant snake in a suburb house, rather that the snake has red hair.
* TeensAreShort: Zig-Zagged. Cynthia is a short teen but the fact is treated as unusual and a magnet for bullying. Her friend Samantha is taller than Cynthia's parents, which passes without comment.
* TeensAreShort: Zig-Zagged. Cynthia is a short teen but the fact is treated as unusual and a magnet for bullying. Her friend Samantha is taller than Cynthia's parents, which passes without comment.
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* BetaOutfit: Cynthia's first costume is cobbled togeter from a yellow tank top, a wig and a cloth mask.
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* BetaOutfit: Cynthia's first costume is cobbled togeter together from a yellow tank top, a wig and a cloth mask.
* GreenAroundTheGills: Serpent turns green and vomits after accidentally snapping Cold Snap's arm off when trying to pin him.
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* MistakenForPregnant: Cynthia's parents notice her weird behavior after getting super powers but come to the wrong conclusion.
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* RubberMan: Thanks to the Snake DNA in her system, Serpent cancan extend her body and limbs.
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Once Stung is a superhero webcomic focusing on the adventures of Cynthia Clarkson and her life as the super hero Queen Bee.
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The comic can be found [[http://oncestung.thecomicstrip.org/ here]] on ComicFury where it updates on Wednesdays.
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The comic can be found [[http://oncestung.thecomicstrip.org/ here]] on ComicFury Website/ComicFury where it updates on Wednesdays.
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!!This work provides examples of:
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* MyFriendsAndZoidberg: The profile describes Queen Bees foes as "a gallery of freakish super villains (And one guy named Jerry)".
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* AnimatedAdaptation: The giant snake fight from issue two has been animated and is [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwiKDHUdBsA available on youtube.]]
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* BetaOutfit: Cynthia's first costume is cobbled togeter from a yellow tank top, a wig and a cloth mask.
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* AlphaBitch: Jessica
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: In short order after getting her super powers, Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger, winds a football player by throwing the ball back to him and busting hole in her bedroom wall.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: In short order after getting her super powers, Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger, winds a football player by throwing the ball back to him and busting busts a hole in her bedroom wall.
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: After being turned back into a human, [[spoiler:Samantha]] wakes up the next day with some snake traits.
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: After being turned back into a human, [[spoiler:Samantha]] wakes up the next day with some snake traits.traits like a forked tongue and slitted eyes.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently there was an incident with Cynthia's late grandmother... Now she knows what bones sound like when they reform
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently there was an incident with Cynthia's late grandmother... Now she knows what bones sound like when they reformreform.
* NotQuiteBackToNormal: After being turned back into a human, [[spoiler:Samantha]] wakes up the next day with some snake traits.
* NotQuiteBackToNormal: After being turned back into a human, [[spoiler:Samantha]] wakes up the next day with some snake traits.
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* TeensAreShort: Zig-Zagged. Cynthia is a short teen but the fact is treated as unusual and a magnet for bullying. Her friend Samantha is taller than Cynthia's parents, which passes without comment.
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* SkewedPriorities: On her first adventure Cynthia isn't phased by the presence of a giant snake in a suburb house, rather that the snake has red hair.
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* TeensAreShort: Zig-Zagged. Cynthia is a short teen but the fact is treated as unusual and a magnet for bullying. Her friend Samantha is taller than Cynthia's parents, which passes without comment.
* TeensAreShort: Zig-Zagged. Cynthia is a short teen but the fact is treated as unusual and a magnet for bullying. Her friend Samantha is taller than Cynthia's parents, which passes without comment.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently there was an incident with Cynthia's late grandmother... Now she knows what bones sound like when they reform
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* ForScience: The reason given for why Unnatural Sciences Inc. was putting so much funding into bees.
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* MathematiciansAnswerMathematiciansAnswer: When the scientists realize a genetically modified bee stung Cynthia. They say the worst that can happen is death and the best is absolutely nothing.
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* ScaledUp: Queen Bee's first foe is a giant snake, formerly [[spoiler:her friend Samantha.]]
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* CompressedHair: In her first costume Cynthia somehow hid her more-than-waist length ponytail under a wig.
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* MistakenForPregnant: Cynthia's parents notice her weird behavior after getting super powers but come to the wrong conclusion.
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* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bitterly lampshades it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
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* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bitterly lampshades [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: In short order after getting her super powers, Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger, winds a football player by throwing the wall back to him and busting hole in her bedroom wall.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: In short order after getting her super powers, Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger, winds a football player by throwing the wall ball back to him and busting hole in her bedroom wall.
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* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bittterly lampshades it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
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* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bittterly bitterly lampshades it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
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* AlliterativeName: As per superhero tradition, our protagonist ''C''ynthia ''C''larkson.
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* AlliterativeName: As per superhero tradition, our protagonist ''C''ynthia ''C''larkson.'''C'''ynthia '''C'''larkson.
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* BatmanColdOpening: BatmanColdOpen: The first few pages cover Queen Bee foiling a robbery before flashing back to her origin story.
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Once Stung is a superhero webcomic focusing on the adventures of Cynthia Clarkson and her life as the super hero Queen Bee.
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* AlliterativeName: As per superhero tradition, our protagonist ''C''ynthia ''C''larkson.
* AlphaBitch: Jessica
* BatmanColdOpening: The first few pages cover Queen Bee foiling a robbery before flashing back to her origin story.
* DoesntKnowHisStrength: Within a short time of gaining her powers Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger and knocks a football player off his feet with a thrown ball.
* MathematiciansAnswer
* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bittterly lampshades it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
The comic can be found [[http://comicfury.com/comicavatars/67/17327_100229.png here]] on ComicFury.
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* AlliterativeName: As per superhero tradition, our protagonist ''C''ynthia ''C''larkson.
* AlphaBitch: Jessica
* BatmanColdOpening: The first few pages cover Queen Bee foiling a robbery before flashing back to her origin story.
* DoesntKnowHisStrength: Within a short time of gaining her powers Cynthia breaks Jessica's finger and knocks a football player off his feet with a thrown ball.
* MathematiciansAnswer
* MeaningfulName: The scientist in charge of the project that created the mutagenic bee is Dr Apoidea. (part of the scientific name for bees) She bittterly lampshades it as the kind of name that sticks you to one very specific career path.
