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* AnimeThemeSong: Sakura Saori's "Kiss My Lips" for the opening and [[Music/{{Vocaloid}} Miku Hatsune]]'s "Puzzle" for the ending.
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* AnimeThemeSong: Sakura Saori's "Kiss My Lips" for the opening and [[Music/{{Vocaloid}} Miku Hatsune]]'s Music/HatsuneMiku's "Puzzle" for the ending.
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Manko-chan's eyes supposedly turn red when she's angry. They also change colors (including a rainbow gradient at one point) from scene to scene in the show.
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Manko-chan's eyes supposedly turn red when she's angry. They also change colors (including to [[TechnicolorEyes a rainbow gradient at one point) point]]) from scene to scene in the show.
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* MoodRingEyes: Manko-chan's eyes [[RedEyesTakeWarning turn red when she's angry]].
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* TechnicolorEyes: At one point, Manko-chan's KaleidoscopeEyes turn into a rainbow gradient.
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->'''Imperial Exile''' ''Highest Rated Comments''
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* AnimeThemeSong: Sakura Saori's "Kiss My Lips" for the opening and [[{{Vocaloid}} Miku Hatsune]]'s "Puzzle" for the ending.
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* AnimeThemeSong: Sakura Saori's "Kiss My Lips" for the opening and [[{{Vocaloid}} [[Music/{{Vocaloid}} Miku Hatsune]]'s "Puzzle" for the ending.
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%% * CrossDressingVoices: [[SarcasmMode Pinisu-chan is not voiced by a man, she is voiced by a KAWAII DESU NEKO JAPANESE LADY!!!!!!!]]
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Oshikko. Manko-chan walks in on her and... thinks she has a yeast infection.
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* BloodyHilarious
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%% * BloodyHilariousBloodyHilarious (Give context why it is BloodyHilarious.)
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* CrossDressingVoices: [[SarcasmMode Pinisu-chan is not voiced by a man, she is voiced by a KAWAII DESU NEKO JAPANESE LADY!!!!!!!]]
* DerangedAnimation
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Fumi-sensei.
* DerangedAnimation
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Fumi-sensei.
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%% * CrossDressingVoices: [[SarcasmMode Pinisu-chan DerangedAnimation (Context is not voiced by a man, she is voiced by a KAWAII DESU NEKO JAPANESE LADY!!!!!!!]]
* DerangedAnimation
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%% * EvenTheGirlsWantHer:Fumi-sensei.Fumi-sensei. (Why is she?)
* DerangedAnimation
%% * EvenTheGirlsWantHer:
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** The way [[spoiler: Oshikko was blinded.]]
* FanDisservice: Oh so much.
* FanDisservice: Oh so much.
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%% ** The way [[spoiler: Oshikko was blinded.]]
]] (Needs context.)
%% * FanDisservice: Oh somuch.much. (Give examples.)
%% * FanDisservice: Oh so
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* GagBoobs: Manko-chan's ridiculous chest. Also see...
* {{Gainaxing}}: Manko-chan again.
* {{Gainaxing}}: Manko-chan again.
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* GagBoobs: Manko-chan's ridiculous chest. Also see...
chest.
%% * {{Gainaxing}}:Manko-chan again.Manko-chan. (Give Contect.)
%% * {{Gainaxing}}:
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* {{Gonk}}: Used both in the comic and fanime to exaggerate emotion. Example [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782626/page04/ here]] and [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782648/page26/ here]]. The opening theme also has some pretty good images.
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* {{Gonk}}: {{Gonk}}:
** Used both in the comic and fanime to exaggerate emotion. Example [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782626/page04/ here]] and [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782648/page26/ here]]. The opening theme also has some pretty good images.
** Used both in the comic and fanime to exaggerate emotion. Example [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782626/page04/ here]] and [[http://largebagel.smackjeeves.com/comics/782648/page26/ here]]. The opening theme also has some pretty good images.
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* GratuitousJapanese
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%% * GratuitousJapaneseGratuitousJapanese (Why? And give example of this.)
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* {{Jizzed in My Pants}}u: Happens to Pinisu-chan in chapter 1, page 18 while looking at Fumi-sensei.
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* {{Jizzed in My Pants}}u: JizzedInMyPants: Happens to Pinisu-chan in chapter 1, page 18 while looking at Fumi-sensei.
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* {{Meganekko}}: Fumi-sensei.
* MsFanservice: Manko-chan.
* MsFanservice: Manko-chan.
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%% * {{Meganekko}}: Fumi-sensei.
Fumi-sensei. (Why?)
%% * MsFanservice:Manko-chan.Manko-chan. (Give example.)
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* StealthParody: Not even stealth really. People still take it seriously.
* StylisticSuck: The writing. Maybe the art of the comic as it is scratchy.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Manko-chan speaks like this.
* StylisticSuck: The writing. Maybe the art of the comic as it is scratchy.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Manko-chan speaks like this.
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%% * StealthParody: Not even stealth really. People still take it seriously.
seriously. (What is this Webcomic a StealthParody of?)
* StylisticSuck: The writing.Maybe the The art of the comic as it is scratchy.
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** Manko-chan speaks like this.
* StylisticSuck: The writing.
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** Manko-chan speaks like this.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Onani-chan (Type A)
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair
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%% * {{Tsundere}}: Onani-chan (Type A)
A) (Please give context to this as it does not explain why Onani-chan is a Tsundere.)
%% *YouGottaHaveBlueHair
YouGottaHaveBlueHair (Examples are need.)
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Similar to ''NekoSugarGirls'', only a bit more coherent, better drawn, and more self aware.
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Similar to ''NekoSugarGirls'', ''WebAnimation/NekoSugarGirls'', only a bit more coherent, better drawn, and more self aware.
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* WhyDoYouKeepChangingJobs: Fumi-sensei is Pinisu-chan and Manko-chan's teacher, a waitress, a lifeguard, a nurse, and a hooker. (She didn't even know she worked as a hooker.)
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* FunWithAcronyms: Pinisu-chan has MAIDS, '''M'''agical '''A'''cquired '''I'''mmune '''D'''eficiency '''S'''yndrome.
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* BloodyHilarious
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Fumi-sensei restores Pinisu-chan by a kiss. Even though she's bleeding because she was ''hit in the head by a brick''.
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* TooDumbToLive: One of the girls at the beach find a brick underwater. Someone suggests to play catch with it. She throws the brick. Pinisu-chan tries to ''catch it''.
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* BeachEpisode: The beginning of chapter 2.
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* CantHaveSexEver: Pinisu-chan because the Crystal of Pure Kawaiiness can be reached by her "ecchi secret spot" and having sex would destroy the crystal.
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* GodwinsLaw: In page 2 of Chapter 1 of the comic, Pinisu-chan calls her teacher a Nazi.
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* GodwinsLaw: In chapter 1, page 2 of Chapter 1 of the comic, 2, Pinisu-chan calls her teacher a Nazi.
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* {{Jizzed in My Pants}}u: Happens to Pinisu-chan in page 18 of Chapter 1 of the comic while looking at Fumi-sensei.
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* {{Jizzed in My Pants}}u: Happens to Pinisu-chan in chapter 1, page 18 of Chapter 1 of the comic while looking at Fumi-sensei.
* ShoutOut: Pinisu-chan reads ''Manga/InuYasha'' in chapter 1, page 22. Manko-chan destroys it to protect Pinisu-chan from the realm of darkness.
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* StylisticSuck
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* StylisticSuckStylisticSuck: The writing. Maybe the art of the comic as it is scratchy.
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