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* PowerGlows: All Magicians can manifest a glowing aura with a color unique to the Magician. According to Din, the aura can manifest anywhere on a Magician's body at will, although hands are most common for the purposes of actually using magic. Pascal demonstrates by [[RudolphTheRedNosedReindeer making his nose glow]].
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* PowerGlows: All Magicians can manifest a glowing aura with a color unique to the Magician. According to Din, the aura can manifest anywhere on a Magician's body at will, although hands are most common for the purposes of actually using magic. Pascal demonstrates by [[RudolphTheRedNosedReindeer [[Literature/RudolphTheRedNosedReindeer making his nose glow]].
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''[[http://www.galebound.com Galebound]]'' is an ongoing webcomic started in May 2016, updating Wednesdays.
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: According to [[http://www.galebound.com/obligation/ the appendix]], a child of a Nobleman or a Magician is always a Nobleman or a Magician.
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: According to [[http://www.galebound.com/obligation/ the appendix]], a child of a Nobleman or a Magician is always ''always'' a Nobleman or a Magician.
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* AntiMagic: [[spoiler: Arcein's Ignorance doesn't just keep daemons from influencing Noblemen, or Noblemen from Commanding a Magician to obey, it apparently can't be affected by magic ''at all'', and is used to save Pascal from conflicting Commands that would otherwise kill him]].
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* AntiMagic: [[spoiler: Arcein's Ignorance doesn't just keep daemons from influencing Noblemen, or Noblemen from Commanding a Magician to obey, it apparently can't be affected by magic ''at all'', all'' (forcing Din to form ice around it to lift it off the seafloor instead of calling it up directly), and is used to save Pascal from conflicting Commands that would otherwise kill him]].
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** Magicians wield tremendous magical power but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use it. And even if the person commanding them dies, their heirs will inherit any active commands.
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** Magicians wield tremendous magical power but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use it. And even if the person commanding them dies, their heirs will inherit any active commands. And if two commands that they have are completely mutually contradictory, it will almost certainly kill them.
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* AntiMagic: [[spoiler: Arcein's Ignorance doesn't just keep daemons from influencing Noblemen, or Noblemen from Commanding a Magician to obey, it apparently can't be affected by magic ''at all'', and is used to save Pascal from conflicting Commands that would otherwise kill him]].
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** Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use it.
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but in return Noblemen can be manipulated by daemons.
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but in return Noblemen can be manipulated by daemons.
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** Magicians wield tremendous magical power, power but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use it.
it. And even if the person commanding them dies, their heirs will inherit any active commands.
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but inreturn return, Noblemen can be manipulated by daemons.
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but in
* ExactWords: A Magician can do this to commands. For example, "bringing someone's head" to another person clearly implies killing them, but if the command doesn't specify whether or not the head needs to still be ''attached''...
* RuleOfThree: Common in this world. For example, the connection between daemons, Magicians, and Noblemen.
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* TranquillizerDart: Din's answer to the RefusalOfTheCall, leading directly to KidnappedByTheCall.
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* TranquillizerDart: Din's answer to the RefusalOfTheCall, leading directly to KidnappedByTheCall.KidnappedByTheCall.
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: According to [[https://respheal.tumblr.com/post/171485413526/blessed-with-suck-noblemen-magicians-and-the the appendix]], a child of a Nobleman or a Magician is always a Nobleman or a Magician.
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: According to [[https://respheal.tumblr.com/post/171485413526/blessed-with-suck-noblemen-magicians-and-the [[http://www.galebound.com/obligation/ the appendix]], a child of a Nobleman or a Magician is always a Nobleman or a Magician.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Whatever Felix did to Din, Din is out for his 'head'.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Whatever Felix did to Din, Din is out for his 'head'.''head''.
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* ConflictingLoyalty: A dangerous exploitation of the trope, intentionally invoked by Din when he sold himself into Cymaria's service after already being sworn to Evenheim.
** "Conflict" has a dual meaning here: if either city-state commands Din directly to attack the other, the conflicting geas would kill him.
** "Conflict" has a dual meaning here: if either city-state commands Din directly to attack the other, the conflicting geas would kill him.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Whatever Felix did to Din, Din is out for his 'head'.
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* PowerGlows: All Magicians can manifest a glowing aura with a color unique to the Magician. According to Din, the aura can manifest anywhere on a Magician's body at will, although hands are most common for the purposes of actually using magic. Pascal demonstrates by [[RudolphTheRedNosedReindeer making his nose glow]].
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use it.
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* BlessedWithSuck: The magic system as a whole has huge drawbacks for anyone caught in it.
** Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to useit.it.
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but in return Noblemen can be manipulated by daemons.
** Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, their magic only works if they've been commanded to use
** Noblemen can [[{{Geas}} command]] Magicians to do ''anything'', but in return Noblemen can be manipulated by daemons.
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* LuredIntoATrapFogOfDoom: Averted, thanks to [[ProtectiveCharm Arcein's Ignorance]], when Altiria and a fire daemon collide and explode into mist. Pascal attempts to use the mist to create another illusion to use against Conan, but the amulet prevents the magic from having any effect.
* LuredIntoATrap: Being a [[spoiler: Nobleman]], Conan is particularly susceptible to daemons' influence, like being tricked into walking off a bridge.
* ProtectiveCharm: Arcein's Ignorance, a [[MagicalAccessory Magical Accessory]] that prevents daemons from manipulating Noblemen. Unfortunately [[spoiler: it also prevent Noblemen from commanding Magicians, raising questions as to who it's ''really'' protecting.]]
* LuredIntoATrap: Being a [[spoiler: Nobleman]], Conan is particularly susceptible to daemons' influence, like being tricked into walking off a bridge.
* ProtectiveCharm: Arcein's Ignorance, a [[MagicalAccessory Magical Accessory]] that prevents daemons from manipulating Noblemen. Unfortunately [[spoiler: it also prevent Noblemen from commanding Magicians, raising questions as to who it's ''really'' protecting.]]
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* AssassinationAttempt: Two so far: Pascal's attempt on Conan's life in Evenheim, and later an attempt by [[ElementalEmbodiment the ocean itself]].
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* AssassinationAttempt: Two Three so far: Pascal's attempt on Conan's life in Evenheim, and later an attempt by [[ElementalEmbodiment the ocean itself]].itself]], and then another [[ApologeticAttacker apologetic attempt]] by Pascal.
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* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: Pascal swims ten miles, waits for the appropriate point in the conversation, and only then does he [[DroppingTheBombshell interrupt]] to spill the secret that [[spoiler: Conan is a Nobleman and the prince of Evenheim]].
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* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: Pascal swims ten miles, miles to the end of the broken bridge, waits for the appropriate point in the conversation, and only then does he interrupts to [[DroppingTheBombshell interrupt]] to spill the secret secret]] that [[spoiler: Conan is a Nobleman and the prince of Evenheim]].
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* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: Pascal swims ten miles, waits for the appropriate point in the conversation, and only then does he [[DroppingTheBombshell interrupt]] to spill the secret that [[spoiler: Conan is a Nobleman and the prince of Evenheim]].
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: According to [[https://respheal.tumblr.com/post/171485413526/blessed-with-suck-noblemen-magicians-and-the the appendix]], a child of a Nobleman or a Magician is always a Nobleman or a Magician.
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* DramaticIrony: Most readers had an immediate handle on what was going on with [[spoiler: Lucie's]] sudden appearance. Conan, [[Gaslighting not so much]].
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* DramaticIrony: Most readers had an immediate handle on what was going on with [[spoiler: Lucie's]] sudden appearance. Conan, [[Gaslighting [[{{Gaslighting}} not so much]].
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, they can only use magic when commanded to do so.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, they can only use their magic when only works if they've been commanded to do so.use it.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians can wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, they can only use magic when commanded to do so.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians can wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence. Even worse, they can only use magic when commanded to do so.
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* DramaticIrony: Most readers had an immediate handle on what was going on with [[spoiler: Lucie's]] sudden appearance. Conan, not so much.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians can wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative sentence.
* DramaticIrony: Most readers had an immediate handle on what was going on with [[spoiler: Lucie's]] sudden appearance. Conan, not so much.
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AssassinationAttempt: Two so far: Pascal's attempt on Conan's life in Evenheim, and later an attempt by [[ElementalEmbodiment the ocean itself]].
* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians can wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperativesentence.
sentence. Even worse, they can only use magic when commanded to do so.
* DramaticIrony: Most readers had an immediate handle on what was going on with [[spoiler: Lucie's]] sudden appearance. Conan, [[Gaslighting not somuch.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Magicians can wield tremendous magical power, but can be commanded against their will by the simplest imperative
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* RewatchBonus: Conan demands various things from Din, but it isn't clear why Din complies so easily until [[CompellingVoice Conan's power]] is revealed and confirmed.
* TranquillizerDart: Din's answer to theabove.RefusalOfTheCall, leading directly to KidnappedByTheCall.
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''[[http://www.galebound.com Galebound]]'' is an ongoing webcomic started in May 2016.
2016, updating Wednesdays.
It follows the [[KidnappedByTheCall kidnapping]] of the seemingly-unimportant [[FarmBoy farmboy]], Conan Renaud, by the [[OurGeniesAreDifferent devilish Magician]], Din, who intends to overthrow the neighboring monarchy. Unfortunately for Conan and to his surprise, he possesses the ability the Magician needs to succeed in his rebellion--the power to command Magicians in binding [[{{Geas}} geasa]].
It follows the [[KidnappedByTheCall kidnapping]] of the seemingly-unimportant [[FarmBoy farmboy]], Conan Renaud, by the [[OurGeniesAreDifferent devilish Magician]], Din, who intends to overthrow the neighboring monarchy. Unfortunately for Conan and to his surprise, he possesses the ability the Magician needs to succeed in his rebellion--the power to command Magicians in binding [[{{Geas}} geasa]].
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''[[http://www.galebound.com Galebound]]'' is an ongoing webcomic started in May 2016, based on a NaNoWriMo project entitled ''Noblesse Oblige''.
Conan Renaud is a [[FarmBoy stablehand]] and that's all he ever wanted to be... Although he would also like to be [[OnlyInItForTheMoney filthy rich]] and married to his [[ChildhoodFriendRomance sweetheart]], Lucie. His dreams of wealth look to be within reach when Din, a Magician, comes to him with a lot of gold, a [[CheshireCatGrin sinister smile]], and a [[DevilsJobOffer deal]]: Guide me to Cymaria, the city of kings.
[[KidnappedByTheCall Not entirely by choice]], Conan takes the deal and finds an [[AffablyEvil over-friendly assassin]], a scathing [[NatureSpirit daemon]], and a [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses young queen]] standing between him and his happy marriage. Worse yet, the Magician brings with him an ancient curse that binds them both: the wind-driven magic known as the [[{{Geas}} Obligation]].
Conan Renaud is a [[FarmBoy stablehand]] and that's all he ever wanted to be... Although he would also like to be [[OnlyInItForTheMoney filthy rich]] and married to his [[ChildhoodFriendRomance sweetheart]], Lucie. His dreams of wealth look to be within reach when Din, a Magician, comes to him with a lot of gold, a [[CheshireCatGrin sinister smile]], and a [[DevilsJobOffer deal]]: Guide me to Cymaria, the city of kings.
[[KidnappedByTheCall Not entirely by choice]], Conan takes the deal and finds an [[AffablyEvil over-friendly assassin]], a scathing [[NatureSpirit daemon]], and a [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses young queen]] standing between him and his happy marriage. Worse yet, the Magician brings with him an ancient curse that binds them both: the wind-driven magic known as the [[{{Geas}} Obligation]].
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''[[http://www.galebound.com Galebound]]'' is an ongoing webcomic started in May 2016, based on a NaNoWriMo project entitled ''Noblesse Oblige''.
Conan Renaud is a [[FarmBoy stablehand]] and that's all he ever wanted to be... Although he would also like to be [[OnlyInItForTheMoney filthy rich]] and married to his [[ChildhoodFriendRomance sweetheart]], Lucie. His dreams of wealth look to be within reach when Din, a Magician, comes to him with a lot of gold, a [[CheshireCatGrin sinister smile]], and a [[DevilsJobOffer deal]]: Guide me to Cymaria, the city of kings.
[[KidnappedByTheCall Not entirely by choice]], Conan takes the deal and finds an [[AffablyEvil over-friendly assassin]], a scathing [[NatureSpirit daemon]], and a [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses young queen]] standing between him and his happy marriage. Worse yet, the Magician brings with him an ancient curse that binds them both: the wind-driven magic known as the [[{{Geas}} Obligation]].
2016.
Conan Renaud is a [[FarmBoy stablehand]] and that's all he ever wanted to be... Although he would also like to be [[OnlyInItForTheMoney filthy rich]] and married to his [[ChildhoodFriendRomance sweetheart]], Lucie. His dreams of wealth look to be within reach when Din, a Magician, comes to him with a lot of gold, a [[CheshireCatGrin sinister smile]], and a [[DevilsJobOffer deal]]: Guide me to Cymaria, the city of kings.
[[KidnappedByTheCall Not entirely by choice]], Conan takes the deal and finds an [[AffablyEvil over-friendly assassin]], a scathing [[NatureSpirit daemon]], and a [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses young queen]] standing between him and his happy marriage. Worse yet, the Magician brings with him an ancient curse that binds them both: the wind-driven magic known as the [[{{Geas}} Obligation]].
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* CheshireCatGrin: Seen on a teenage Din and a yet-unnamed Magician woman.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: Worn by the assassin in Evenheim.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: Worn by the assassin in Evenheim.
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* PowerGlows: How the use of magic manifests.
