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''[[http://everblue-comic.com/ Everblue]]'' is a fantasy/adventure webcomic by Michael Sexton, set in an [[SingleBiomePlanet endless ocean]] sparsely populated by a few floating cities. Luna, an introverted young shipwright, was leading a quiet life in Rose City until Ten's [[CoolBoat flying boat]] was accidentally shot down and she is roped into helping him build a new one.
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''[[http://everblue-comic.com/ Everblue]]'' is a fantasy/adventure webcomic by Michael Sexton, set in an [[SingleBiomePlanet endless ocean]] sparsely populated by a few floating cities.
Luna, an introverted young shipwright, was leading a quiet life in Rose City until Ten's [[CoolBoat flying boat]] was accidentally shot down and she is roped into helping him build a newone. one.
Luna, an introverted young shipwright, was leading a quiet life in Rose City until Ten's [[CoolBoat flying boat]] was accidentally shot down and she is roped into helping him build a new
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* CoolBoat: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can fly. It becomes even cooler after Luna gets her hands on it and outfits it with forbidden ancient technology.
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* CoolBoat: CityOnTheWater: The world is an endless ocean aside from these.
* CoolShip: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can fly. It becomes even cooler after Luna gets her hands on it and outfits it with forbidden ancient technology.
* CoolShip: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can fly. It becomes even cooler after Luna gets her hands on it and outfits it with forbidden ancient technology.
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* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler: Seta... or so Luna thinks. It's actually a subversion, as Seta is faking betrayal to make *sure* Luna escapes and abandons him.]]
* FuroScene: Luna has a rather tasteful one with surprisingly little fanservice.
* FuroScene: Luna has a rather tasteful one with surprisingly little fanservice.
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* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler: Seta... Seta[[spoiler: or so Luna thinks. It's actually a subversion, as Seta is faking betrayal to make *sure* Luna [[ShooTheDog escapes and abandons him.him]].]]
* FuroScene: Luna has a rather tasteful one with surprisingly littlefanservice.{{fanservice}} and ShouldersUpNudity.
* FuroScene: Luna has a rather tasteful one with surprisingly little
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* InnocentFanserviceBoy: When Luna seems distressed about walking through a city in her pajamas, Ten gets the bright idea of giving her his clothes, going so far as to immediately start undressing on the spot before Luna stops him.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGuy: When Luna seems distressed about walking through a city in her pajamas, Ten gets the bright idea of giving her his clothes, going so far as to immediately start undressing on the spot before Luna stops him.
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* NoSell: [[http://everblue-comic.com/comic/282 Ten, potentially]].
* LostTechnology: unfortunately messing with it is punishable by death
* MementoMacGuffin: Ten's Traveler's Chart, a magical map of the world that's blank until it gets wet, is a legacy of his father.
**Luna's ribbon, which she usually wears wrapped around her bicep, wrist or forearm when she isn't using it to tie back her hair.
**Luna's ribbon, which she usually wears wrapped around her bicep, wrist or forearm when she isn't using it to tie back her hair.
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* OceanPunk: The main setting.
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* OceanPunk: The main setting. Dry land is just a myth.
* OrphansOrdeal: Luna and Ten are both orphans
* OrphansOrdeal: Luna and Ten are both orphans
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** TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: until she is forced to throw in her lot with Ten
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Dagger is a highly skilled mercenary who fights [[DoesNotLikeShoes barefoot]] wearing only a bikini top, some kind of skirt or loincloth, and a pair of shin guards that she probably only wears because they have built-in sheaths for her two knives and she's got nowhere else to keep them.
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* {{Stripperiffic}}: Dagger is a highly skilled mercenary who fights [[DoesNotLikeShoes barefoot]] wearing only a bikini top, some kind of skirt or loincloth, and a pair of shin guards that she probably only wears because they have built-in attached sheaths for her two knives and she's got nowhere else to keep them.
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* InnocentFanserviceBoy: When Luna seems distressed about walking through a city in her pajamas, Ten gets the bright idea of giving her his clothes, going so far as to immediately start undressing on the spot before Luna stops him.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Dagger, who hasn't appeared in the story yet, can be seen on wanted posters in the background. Clara also appears in a crowd scene a page before her official introduction.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Dagger wears a pair of shin guards but nothing on her actual feet. Luna has shown a preference for going barefoot indoors or on a ship, but will usually wear sandals when she's both outdoors and on dry land. Except for the time she was stuck as a PajamaCladHero for a while, but being barefoot wasn't exactly her choice there.
* EarlyBirdCameo: Dagger, who hasn't appeared in the story proper yet, can be seen on wanted posters in thebackground.background, and was featured at the end of Vignette 3. Clara also appears in a crowd scene a page before her official introduction.
* EarlyBirdCameo: Dagger, who hasn't appeared in the story proper yet, can be seen on wanted posters in the
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=195 The cover for Chapter 4]], in contrast to the cute and lighthearted covers from previous chapters, seems to indicate that parts of its story will be going in this direction.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=195 com/comic?sort=195 The cover for Chapter 4]], in contrast to the cute and lighthearted covers from previous chapters, seems to indicate that parts of its story will be going in this direction.
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* TheBartender: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=107 Lampshaded]]
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* TheBartender: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=107 com/comic?sort=107 Lampshaded]]
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* PajamaCladHero: Luna in [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=130 Chapter 3]] during a rainstorm, which results in a SexySoakedShirt.
* ThePollyanna: Ten. [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=158 Tragically optimistic]].
* ThePollyanna: Ten. [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=158 Tragically optimistic]].
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* PajamaCladHero: Luna in [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=130 com/comic?sort=130 Chapter 3]] during a rainstorm, which results in a SexySoakedShirt.
* ThePollyanna: Ten. [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=158 com/comic?sort=158 Tragically optimistic]].
* ThePollyanna: Ten. [[http://everblue-comic.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=33 Luna isn't singing banned songs,]] nope no singing here!
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: [[http://everblue-comic.com/?id=33 com/comic?sort=33 Luna isn't singing banned songs,]] nope no singing here!
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* AllThereInTheManual: Among the [[http://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.146082622097312.22883.146078468764394 old voting incentives]], [[http://everblue-comic.com/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page a small wiki]] and comments under each new page, a lot of background information about the world has already been explained.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Among the [[http://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.146082622097312.22883.146078468764394 old voting incentives]], [[http://everblue-comic.com/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page a small wiki]] (temporarily offline) wiki and comments under each new page, a lot of background information about the world has already been explained.
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* IdiotHero: Ten, though he's not so much an idiot as naive and happy-go-lucky to an unhealthy degree
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* CoolBoat: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can fly. It becomes even cooler after Luna gets her hands on it.
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* WrenchWench: Luna is a shipwright (boat builder), which is this setting's equivalent.
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* CoolBoat: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can fly
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* CoolBoat: The Skyward, Ten modified it so it can flyfly. It becomes even cooler after Luna gets her hands on it.
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* SadisticChoice: Given to [[spoiler: Seta]] by General Shar: [[either kill Luna or refuse the order and let someone else do it. It seems he was trying option 3 of taking the mission but letting her escape, which probably won't go well for him...]]
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* SadisticChoice: Given to [[spoiler: Seta]] by General Shar: [[either [[spoiler: either kill Luna or refuse the order and let someone else do it. It seems he was trying option 3 of taking the mission but letting her escape, which probably won't go well for him...]]
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