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* CameFromTheSky: The Drepanaspis falls back to the planet after it malfunctions.
* CoolStarship: The Drepanaspis
* CoolStarship: The Drepanaspis
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* DysonSphere: The superstructure being made by salvaging Imex.
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* HumanAliens: The people who inhabit Ebeno
* OffModel: Happens quite frequently. A notable example is on page eight when Atrypta walks back to her seat, making her head small, neck thick, and arms short.
* PlanetaryNation: Ebeno is implied to be this.
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* SpaceElevator: Where the Drepanaspis is launched
* OffModel: Happens quite frequently. A notable example is on page eight when Atrypta walks back to her seat, making her head small, neck thick, and arms short.
* PlanetaryNation: Ebeno is implied to be this.
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* SpaceElevator: Where the Drepanaspis is launched
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* StockDinosaurs: Heavily averted. Paleozoic animals are a rare sight in fiction.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: All of the characters are based on Paleozoic animals, leading to designs based on the Scaumenacia, Pteraspis, and Drepanaspis varieties of fish.
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[[caption-width-right:350: We are all pleased to announce the work on the Drepanaspis has been completed!]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: We are all pleased to announce the work on the Drepanaspis has been completed!]]completed]]
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After her ship malfunctions and kills two government officials, Atrypta is sent to the ancient artificial planet of Imex. The people sent are tasked with salvaging whatever remains of the construction to build a superstructure. Now, she must find a way off Imex before it dies in darkness.
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After her ship malfunctions and kills two government officials, Atrypta is sent to the ancient artificial planet of Imex. The people sent are tasked with salvaging whatever remains of the construction to build a superstructure.Dyson sphere. Now, she must find a way off Imex before it dies in darkness.
* DysonSphere: The superstructure being made by salvaging Imex.
* HumanAliens: The people who inhabit Ebeno
* PlanetaryNation: Ebeno is implied to be this.
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* StandardAlienSpaceship: Being based on a fish, the Drepanaspis has an organic and smooth appearance.
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* SpaceElevator: Where the Drepanaspis is launched
* StandardAlienSpaceship: Being based on a fish, the Drepanaspis has an organicand smooth appearance.
* StandardAlienSpaceship: Being based on a fish, the Drepanaspis has an organic
