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* HenpeckedHusband: Discussed in her review of a bad ''Series/TwilightZone'' fanfiction. She shows an example from "Time Enough At Last" and takes pity on the husband in question.

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* HenpeckedHusband: Discussed in her review of a bad ''Series/TwilightZone'' fanfiction.fanfic of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1959''. She shows an example from "Time Enough At Last" and takes pity on the husband in question.


* DrinkingGame: She often starts one up when a fic gets particularly bad, usually when she finds something incredibly repetitive or annoying about it (PurpleProse descriptions of a MarySue, run-on sentences, etc). She tells her viewers to join her if they want, but warns them not to drive and to have their hospital number on speed dial in case of alcohol poisoning.

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* DrinkingGame: She often starts one up when a fic gets particularly bad, usually when she finds something incredibly repetitive or annoying about it (PurpleProse descriptions of a MarySue, Mary Sue, run-on sentences, etc). She tells her viewers to join her if they want, but warns them not to drive and to have their hospital number on speed dial in case of alcohol poisoning.



** The beginning of the second '''Film/TheHumanCentipede'' fic.

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** The beginning of the second '''Film/TheHumanCentipede'' ''Film/TheHumanCentipede'' fic.


* OneOfUs: [[invoked]] She's used the names of tropes several times -- most frequently ShowDontTell -- and in a commentary admitted to being familiar with TV Tropes.


* ToThePain: Her descriptions of what she'd like to do with the author of FanFic/BackToTheFrollo get vivid, especially when she dresses up as [[CrowningMomentOfFunny "The Fanfiction Devil"]] and begins describing the center of Fanfiction Hell. It's a running trend during the worst of her reviews.

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* ToThePain: Her descriptions of what she'd like to do with the author of FanFic/BackToTheFrollo get vivid, especially when she dresses up as [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments "The Fanfiction Devil"]] and begins describing the center of Fanfiction Hell. It's a running trend during the worst of her reviews.


Her [=YouTube=] channel [[LostForever has been closed]]. She used to have a blip.tv channel, but it has since been deleted.

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Her [=YouTube=] Website/YouTube channel [[LostForever has been closed]].closed. She used to have a blip.tv channel, but it has since been deleted.


* ForScience: In the introduction of episode 43, 'TheHumanCentipede Double Feature', she says this word-for-word whilst explaining the premise.

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* ForScience: In the introduction of episode 43, 'TheHumanCentipede 'Film/TheHumanCentipede Double Feature', she says this word-for-word whilst explaining the premise.


'''The [=FanFiction=] Critic''' is a former reviewer on Website/YouTube. Her forte was ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin, bad fanfics. But not just any bad fanfics, no. She reviewed some of the worst fanfics out there, armed only with her [[DeadpanSnarker sarcasm]] and her never-ending fountain of {{Shout Out}}s to things much, much better than the things she reviewed.

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'''The ''The [=FanFiction=] Critic''' Critic'' is a former reviewer on Website/YouTube. Her forte was ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin, bad fanfics. But not just any bad fanfics, no. She reviewed some of the worst fanfics out there, armed only with her [[DeadpanSnarker sarcasm]] and her never-ending fountain of {{Shout Out}}s to things much, much better than the things she reviewed.

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** She doesn't take kindly to writers who can't take criticism, as shown by some of her response videos.



->''"I'm the [=FanFiction=] Critic, and this is what you do with a B.A. in English!"''

->''"In the future, if I happen to review your fanfiction, I'm not doing it to insult you; [[DeadpanSnarker I'm making fun of your poor writing skills.]]"''

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\n->''"I'm [[caption-width-right:320:"I'm the [=FanFiction=] Critic, and this is what you do with a B.A. in English!"''

English!"]]

->''"In the future, if I happen to review your fanfiction, I'm not doing it to insult you; [[DeadpanSnarker I'm making fun of your poor writing skills.]]"''"''


* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Diane the text reader in the review of "[[{{Titanic}} Seven Years Later]]"

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* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Diane the text reader in the review of "[[{{Titanic}} "[[Film/{{Titanic|1997}} Seven Years Later]]"


-->'''Critic''': Stop saying "furry friends"! Because every time you do, I picture ''this''! (Shows picture from [[FurryFandom Anthrocon]])

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-->'''Critic''': Stop saying "furry friends"! Because every time you do, I picture ''this''! (Shows picture from [[FurryFandom [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom Anthrocon]])

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** Playing "Twilight Time" by The Platters whenever she reviews bad ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction.

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* HenpeckedHusband: Discussed in her review of a bad ''Series/TwilightZone'' fanfiction. She shows an example from "Time Enough At Last" and takes pity on the husband in question.
-->'''Fanfiction Critic:''' ''Why'' would you marry [[EvilMatriarch that]]? Just why?

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny:
** In "Human Centipede Double Feature", she admits that "Centipede Crufts" would have been funny if the author clarified whether or not he intended it to be an InNameOnly creature feature about a guy entering a giant bug into a dog show. She gives it a D- instead of her usual F as a result.
** She admits that the opening line to "Oops-a-Daisy" was actually pretty good, as it really grabs the reader's attention (though she doesn't like that it's a sentence fragment).

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** In her review of "Sonic Fights Robotnik", she starts off by listing every art form that the ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' franchise has managed to dominate, concluding by saying that she wouldn't be surprised if the series was eventually adapted into a [[TheMovie full-length feature film]][[note]]the OVA doesn't technically count[[/note]].

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