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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters [[spoiler:(and later a fourth)]] with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three multiple separate characters [[spoiler:(and later a fourth)]] with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
The protagonists (so far) are:
The protagonists (so far) are:
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* [[spoiler:Held: A magical ChildProdigy born in Kragmoria during a period where magic users where purged by the government, taught by her uncle on how to fight with and without magic. Her story seems to occur much earlier than any of the other protagonists, taking place shortly before the Heroland organization was officially founded.]]
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* [[spoiler:Held: Held: A magical ChildProdigy born in Kragmoria during a period where magic users where purged by the government, taught by her uncle on how to fight with and without magic. Her story seems to occur much earlier than any of the other protagonists, taking place shortly before the Heroland organization was officially founded.]]
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* RotatingProtagonist: The focus of the story often shifts between Burk, Noah, Tobi and Held, in no particular order, often with multiple chapters centered on a specific member before switching back to one of the others.
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* [[spoiler:Held: A magical ChildProdigy born during a period where magic users where purged by the government, taught by her uncle on how to fight with and without magic. Her story occurs much earlier than any of the other protagonists, taking place shortly before the Heroland organization was founded.]]
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* [[spoiler:Held: A magical ChildProdigy born in Kragmoria during a period where magic users where purged by the government, taught by her uncle on how to fight with and without magic. Her story occurs seems to occur much earlier than any of the other protagonists, taking place shortly before the Heroland organization was officially founded.]]
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG here]], as well as stories available exclusively on Neorice's Patreon (seen[[https://www.patreon.com/neoriceisgood here]]). There is also a wiki which can be found [[http://hero-oh-hero.wikia.com/wiki/Hero_oh_Hero_Wiki here]].
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG here]], as well as stories available exclusively on Neorice's Patreon (seen[[https://www.(seen [[https://www.patreon.com/neoriceisgood here]]). There is also a wiki which can be found [[http://hero-oh-hero.wikia.com/wiki/Hero_oh_Hero_Wiki here]].
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** This can also happen if a magic user uses a particular spirit technique they either don't have a good affinity or haven't practiced with, ''especially'' if they're already low on their reserves. Examples include Noah using a spirit shield during the [[spoiler:Chernyl's Nightmare arc]] and [[spoiler:Held during her childhood whenever she used... well, ''any'' spirit techniques]].
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* ChildProdigy: [[spoiler:Held. On top of being born with magic, she reveals that she has a shocking aptitude for spirit techniques, able to use spirit to move rapidly (to the point of resembling {{Teleportation}} when she was a ''toddler''. Unfortunately, [[DeconstructedTrope these techniques were too advanced for such a young body]], often resulting in her [[CastFromHitPoints coughing up blood]] whenever she had to use them extensively, to the point that her adoptive father sent her away for training to hopefully fix the issue.]]
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''[[http://neorice.com/archive Hero Oh Hero]]'' (also available in an ArchiveBinge friendly format [[https://tapastic.com/series/Hero-Oh-Hero here]]) is a {{Pixel Art|Comic}} webcomic created by Guido "Neorice" Bos which is a reboot of ''WebComic/APathToGreaterGood''.
It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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''[[http://neorice.com/archive Hero Oh Hero]]'' (also available in an ArchiveBinge friendly format [[https://tapastic.com/series/Hero-Oh-Hero here]]) is a {{Pixel Art|Comic}} webcomic webcomic, created by Guido "Neorice" Bos Bos, which is a reboot of their previous work ''WebComic/APathToGreaterGood''.
It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters [[spoiler:(and later a fourth)]] with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
It follows a plot, similar to its predecessor, with three separate characters [[spoiler:(and later a fourth)]] with their own PlotThreads (which slowly intersect), set in a fantasy world and updates on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays (with the occasional week of daily updates).
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG here]]. There is also a wiki which can be found [[http://hero-oh-hero.wikia.com/wiki/Hero_oh_Hero_Wiki here]].
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In addition there's a one-shot story, set in the same universe, which fills in some of the setting's details and can be found on Neorice's deviantArt account [[http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gallery/46020257/TOM-RPG
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* Tobi: A GadgeteerGenius who lives in the [[HungryJungle Hungry Desert]] based town of Rauel and is setting off on just another DungeonCrawl for resources.
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* Tobi: A GadgeteerGenius who lives in the [[HungryJungle Hungry Desert]] based town of Rauel and is setting off on just another DungeonCrawl DungeonCrawling expedition for resources.
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* ArsenalAttire: Pablo and his "Diplomatic Weapons." Seems to be a trait of important Livarian figures, and it serves as much a proof of their identity as any papers, with added bonus of making it near-impossible to impersonate a Livarian - the sheer complexity of all the machinery required in Livarian garb makes merely wearing them a lethal prospect without the required training.
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Morty, [[ArcVillain Vonesperda's]] secret accomplice]] has the power of multiple magic users due to [[spoiler:messing with Evyle's magic contract with the heroes]]... and apparently very little in the way of actual combat experience. He then makes the mistake of facing off against [[BadassNormal Burk]], who proceeds to [[CurbStompBattle kick his ass repeatedly]].
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* TransTribulations: It's revealed that the Beast Kingdom discriminates against "non-productives", which apparently means queer beastmen. This is the reason that [[spoiler: Foxy lives in Lorg instead of there; [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_2155 they'd refuse to recognise her as a woman]]]].
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:[[TheCaligula The Emperor]]. His mass-murdering ways stem from a combination of brain damage (in fact, ''everything'' damage) when his uncle tried to poison him in the womb, and corruption from using his resulting magical powers when he tried to become the perfect king by stealing stats from everyone else. From the Emperor's perspective, he knows he's something inherently wrong but believes he can do good, the exact opposite of his situation.]]
* TransTribulations: It's revealed that the Beast Kingdom discriminates against "non-productives", which apparently means queer beastmen. This is the reason that [[spoiler: Foxy lives in Lorg instead of there; [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_2155 they'd refuse torecognise recognize her as a woman]]]].
* TransTribulations: It's revealed that the Beast Kingdom discriminates against "non-productives", which apparently means queer beastmen. This is the reason that [[spoiler: Foxy lives in Lorg instead of there; [[http://www.neorice.com/hoh_2155 they'd refuse to