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* AdultFear:
** Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
** On the flipside: escaping from your kidnappers...only to realize your best friend is still in their clutches, and spend the next several years alone.
** Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
** On the flipside: escaping from your kidnappers...only to realize your best friend is still in their clutches, and spend the next several years alone.
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Commented out Darker and Edgier because it doesn't give context on how the fic is darker than the Crash games. Did some tweaking to fix indentation and grammar.
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* AdultFear: Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
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* AdultFear: AdultFear:
** Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
** Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
* BloodierAndGorier: The series has graphic violence, unlike the ''VideoGame/CrashBandicoot'' games. One example is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is much, much more darker than the series it based on.
** BloodierAndGorier: It is also more graphic in term of violence. One example is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him.]]
** BloodierAndGorier: It is also more graphic in term of violence. One example is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him.]]
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** BloodierAndGorier: It is also more graphic in term of violence. One example is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him.]]
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* TimeSkip: Crunch is first abducted roughly before the start of ''Cortex Strikes Back''. Then there is a time skip of some eighteen months.
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* TimeSkip: TimeSkip:
** Crunch is first abducted roughly before the start of ''Cortex Strikes Back''. Then there is a time skip of some eighteen months.
** Crunch is first abducted roughly before the start of ''Cortex Strikes Back''. Then there is a time skip of some eighteen months.
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** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than the original games? Oh, GOODNESS yes. Of course, it's a fanfic, but still....
** BloodierAndGorier: Oh, ''DEFINITELY''. Of particular note is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him....]]
** BloodierAndGorier: Oh, ''DEFINITELY''. Of particular note is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him....]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than The fanfic is much, much more darker than the original games? Oh, GOODNESS yes. Of course, it's a fanfic, but still....
series it based on.
** BloodierAndGorier:Oh, ''DEFINITELY''. Of particular note It is also more graphic in term of violence. One example is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him....him.]]
** BloodierAndGorier:
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''[[Franchise/CrashBandicoot Crash Bandicoot]]'' fanfic made by artist and web designer Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''[[Franchise/CrashBandicoot Crash Bandicoot]]'' ''VideoGame/CrashBandicoot'' fanfic made by artist and web designer Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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* CoversAlwaysLie: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
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* TheWikiRule: Yes, this fanfic has a [[http://outcastbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Characters wiki]]. And this is ''on top'' of the original franchise, which already has a [[http://crashbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Bandipedia:Main_Page wiki]] of its own!!
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* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught! [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong What could possibly go wrong?]]
** Sure, Cortex...grab Tani and Crunch, even though they're your least loyal minions. They couldn't possibly ruin your plans or rebel against you in any way!
** Sure, Cortex...grab Tani and Crunch, even though they're your least loyal minions. They couldn't possibly ruin your plans or rebel against you in any way!
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''[[Franchise/Crash Bandicoot Crash Bandicoot]]'' fanfic made by artist and web designer Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station from up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''[[Franchise/Crash Bandicoot ''[[Franchise/CrashBandicoot Crash Bandicoot]]'' fanfic made by artist and web designer Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station from up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''Crash Bandicoot'' fanfic made by artist Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station from up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''Crash Bandicoot'' ''[[Franchise/Crash Bandicoot Crash Bandicoot]]'' fanfic made by artist and web designer Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station from up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
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** Arguably ''Outcast Bandicoot'' [[RuleOfCool sounds better]] than ''Kidnapped Bandicoot''.
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* MoodWhiplash: Enter a spooky castle that's so dark you can't see anything, and has some of the series' creepiest music playing...then get jumped by two crazy potoroos...''THEN'' get attacked by the sadistic scientist who owns the place, and get kidnapped from your home.
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->''"Well it all started at this big castle...obviously owned by the twerp himself, Dr. Neo Cortex."''
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* AdultFear: Being kidnapped from your home by your worst enemy, and spending the next five years of your life as their (more or less) helpless minion.
** On the flipside: escaping from your kidnappers...only to realize your best friend is still in their clutches, and spend the next several years alone.
** On the flipside: escaping from your kidnappers...only to realize your best friend is still in their clutches, and spend the next several years alone.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Crunch survives five years on Cortex's space station -- which we can assume is nightmarish at the best of times. Crash and Coco help him escape and make his way back to X.Treme Island.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: You'd have to know the ''Crash Bandicoot'' series pretty well (particularly ''Wrath of Cortex'') in order to make sense of what's going on, or why you should care.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: You'd SheIsAllGrownUp: Tani, when Crunch returns from his exile. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as five years have to know the ''Crash Bandicoot'' series pretty well (particularly ''Wrath of Cortex'') in order to make sense of what's going on, or why you should care.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquaintedpassed since they last met.
* TakeMeInstead: Koala Kong, who would rather go withCrash.Cortex than watch Crunch and Tani suffer.
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* TakeMeInstead: Koala Kong, who would rather go with
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* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught! [[WhatCouldGoWrong What could possibly go wrong?]]
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: You'd have to know the ''Crash Bandicoot'' series pretty well (particularly ''Wrath of Cortex'') in order to make sense of what's going on, or why you should care.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught![[WhatCouldGoWrong [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong What could possibly go wrong?]]
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught!
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* ArtShift: Not within the completed parts of the work, but in the bonus scenes, you can see what Tara's art looked like before she began the work proper.
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* CanonForeigner: Several. Tani and Kris Roo are the most obvious examples.
* CoversAlwaysLie: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
* CoversAlwaysLie: The title is ''OUTCAST Bandicoot''. An outcast is someone who is kicked out of their home/society for some reason. Crunch wasn't kicked out of his home; he was ''kidnapped''.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The minions are ready to make their escape! But lab assistants show up to cut them off! [[spoiler: Crunch bravely stalls the escape to help Kris fight the lab assistants...only for Cortex to arrive and cut off the escape. And this is after Kris said he was willing to stay behind!]]
* PlatonicLifePartners: Crunch and Tani. [[spoiler: Averted later on, when they become a couple....]]
* ViewersAreGeniuses: You'd have to know the ''Crash Bandicoot'' series pretty well (particularly ''Wrath of Cortex'') in order to make sense of what's going on, or why you should care.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
* TimeSkip: Crunch is first abducted roughly before the start of ''Cortex Strikes Back''. Then there is a time skip of some eighteen months.
** Also, the time skip after the time Tara could no longer complete the movie; she was only able to add a few scenes from early production after that.
* TheWikiRule: Yes, this fanfic has a [[http://outcastbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Characters wiki]]. And this is ''on top'' of the original franchise, which already has a [[http://crashbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Bandipedia:Main_Page wiki]] of its own!!
* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught! [[WhatCouldGoWrong What could possibly go wrong?]]
** Sure, Cortex...grab Tani and Crunch, even though they're your least loyal minions. They couldn't possibly ruin your plans or rebel against you in any way!
* PlatonicLifePartners: Crunch and Tani. [[spoiler: Averted later on, when they become a couple....]]
* ViewersAreGeniuses: You'd have to know the ''Crash Bandicoot'' series pretty well (particularly ''Wrath of Cortex'') in order to make sense of what's going on, or why you should care.
** ShownTheirWork: And Tara was precisely the individual to fulfill both criteria. From her work, one can infer that she's especially well-acquainted with Crash.
* TimeSkip: Crunch is first abducted roughly before the start of ''Cortex Strikes Back''. Then there is a time skip of some eighteen months.
** Also, the time skip after the time Tara could no longer complete the movie; she was only able to add a few scenes from early production after that.
* TheWikiRule: Yes, this fanfic has a [[http://outcastbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Characters wiki]]. And this is ''on top'' of the original franchise, which already has a [[http://crashbandicoot.wikia.com/wiki/Bandipedia:Main_Page wiki]] of its own!!
* WhatAnIdiot: Sure, Crunch...let's go over to Cortex Castle to rob the mad scientist of some food. We won't get caught! [[WhatCouldGoWrong What could possibly go wrong?]]
** Sure, Cortex...grab Tani and Crunch, even though they're your least loyal minions. They couldn't possibly ruin your plans or rebel against you in any way!
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''Outcast Bandicoot'' is a ''Crash Bandicoot'' fanfic made by artist Tara Mckee. It concerns the character [[Characters/CrashBandicoot Crunch Bandicoot]] during his stay on Dr. Neo Cortex's space station from up to and during [[VideoGame/CrashBandicootTheWrathOfCortex Wrath of Cortex]].
Tara originally wrote the story as simple text (but with drawings she made herself), but later decided to adapt the story into a film. The film was placed on youtube, but left uncompleted. The entire film -- as far as she got -- can be watched [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFLzAAyhZEg here]]. (WARNING: The film should be considered PG-13 at least.) The original text which the film was based on, as well as several other stories in the universe, can be read [[http://www.outcastbandicoot.lurking-leanne.com/story.htm here]] (WARNING: NSFW!!)
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*ActionGirl: Tani Tiger. She handles herself pretty well in a fight.
*BadassInDistress: Crunch, obviously. By all means he's a capable fighter, but Cortex and his lab assistants prove to be too much for the poor bandicoot.
*DarkerAndEdgier: Than the original games? Oh, GOODNESS yes. Of course, it's a fanfic, but still....
**BloodierAndGorier: Oh, ''DEFINITELY''. Of particular note is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him....]]
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Tara originally wrote the story as simple text (but with drawings she made herself), but later decided to adapt the story into a film. The film was placed on youtube, but left uncompleted. The entire film -- as far as she got -- can be watched [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFLzAAyhZEg here]]. (WARNING: The film should be considered PG-13 at least.) The original text which the film was based on, as well as several other stories in the universe, can be read [[http://www.outcastbandicoot.lurking-leanne.com/story.htm here]] (WARNING: NSFW!!)
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''!![This work] contains examples of:''
*ActionGirl: Tani Tiger. She handles herself pretty well in a fight.
*BadassInDistress: Crunch, obviously. By all means he's a capable fighter, but Cortex and his lab assistants prove to be too much for the poor bandicoot.
*DarkerAndEdgier: Than the original games? Oh, GOODNESS yes. Of course, it's a fanfic, but still....
**BloodierAndGorier: Oh, ''DEFINITELY''. Of particular note is Crunch's nightmare, [[spoiler: in which Tani is brutally murdered in front of him....]]
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