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** Result three: Seeing that Lincoln is now becoming afraid, they don't lose their temper and instead, all give him a CooldownHug. While they may still be angry, they won't want to send Lincoln to the hospital ever again and decide to try to control their anger in a more calmer way.
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The Loud Parents aren’t angels, good as their intentions may be. They’ve done several shady things such as [[spoiler: drugging Leni with ADHD meds without her knowledge]], having more and more kids for Lori to take care of and essentially become a teen mom, refusing to take Lucy’s depression seriously, and only stepping in when their son was almost killed, then doing so by taking away their daughter’s coping mechanisms and [[spoiler: inadvertently killing one of Lana’s pets]]. The siblings will come to realize this, and collectively call them out on it.
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The Loud Parents aren’t angels, good as their intentions may be. They’ve done several shady things such as [[spoiler: drugging Leni with ADHD meds without her knowledge]], having more and more kids for Lori to take care of and essentially become a teen mom, refusing to take Lucy’s depression seriously, and only stepping in when their son was almost killed, then doing so by taking away their daughter’s coping mechanisms and [[spoiler: inadvertently killing one of Lana’s pets]]. The siblings will come to realize this, and collectively call them out on it.it.
[[WMG: Lori will give Lincoln a CoolDownHug.]]
If Lincoln and Lori have another conversation with each other, it could end with Lincoln still being afraid but this time, Lori decides to hug him out of comfort for him.
[[WMG: Lori will give Lincoln a CoolDownHug.]]
If Lincoln and Lori have another conversation with each other, it could end with Lincoln still being afraid but this time, Lori decides to hug him out of comfort for him.
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** Alternatively, their nightmares would have the sisters as themselves. Their nightmare would have not only Lincoln blame them for their sins, but also their friends. Including Carol, Bobby, Becky, and Margo.
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* Unlikely. Given that Lana already feels guilty about attacking Lincoln once, she'll possibly try to take some of Lincoln and Lola's criticisms of her lifestyle. She could even schedule an appointment with Dr. Lopez for her and Lincoln to work things out.
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* Conversely, the belt will be used AFTER the sisters and Lincoln reconcile. Perhaps the Loud sisters who do receive forgiveness are caught in a bad situation where they look like they're in the wrong, and despite Lincoln's pleas, they're hit with the belt for something Lincoln feels they don't deserve, crossing over into DisproportionateRetribution. If this happens, Lincoln may fear that the sisters could target him in revenge. Conversely he may instead lash out at his father for his TooLittleTooLate actions that caused more harm than good.
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[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will [[CallingTheOldManOut CallTheOldManOut]].]]
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[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will [[CallingTheOldManOut CallTheOldManOut]].call the old man out]].]]
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[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will CallTheOldManOut]]
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[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will CallTheOldManOut]][[CallingTheOldManOut CallTheOldManOut]].]]
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As revealed in Chapter 21, Lucy used to be a much more happy and bright-spirited child but was driven to depression through traumatic neglect from her family, neglect that her siblings (including Lincoln) seemed to gleefully partake in and joke about. When Lincoln finally encounters Lucy and learns this, he will become so racked with guilt that he realizes that he is an abusive sibling no different from his sisters (though clearly of a much lesser magnitude) and possibly become more withdrawn.
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As revealed in Chapter 21, Lucy used to be a much more happy and bright-spirited child but was driven to depression through traumatic neglect from her family, neglect that her siblings (including Lincoln) seemed to gleefully partake in and joke about. When Lincoln finally encounters Lucy and learns this, he will become so racked with guilt that he realizes that he is an abusive sibling no different from his sisters (though clearly of a much lesser magnitude) and possibly become more withdrawn.withdrawn.
[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will CallTheOldManOut]]
The Loud Parents aren’t angels, good as their intentions may be. They’ve done several shady things such as [[spoiler: drugging Leni with ADHD meds without her knowledge]], having more and more kids for Lori to take care of and essentially become a teen mom, refusing to take Lucy’s depression seriously, and only stepping in when their son was almost killed, then doing so by taking away their daughter’s coping mechanisms and [[spoiler: inadvertently killing one of Lana’s pets]]. The siblings will come to realize this, and collectively call them out on it.
[[WMG: Near or at the end, all of the siblings together will CallTheOldManOut]]
The Loud Parents aren’t angels, good as their intentions may be. They’ve done several shady things such as [[spoiler: drugging Leni with ADHD meds without her knowledge]], having more and more kids for Lori to take care of and essentially become a teen mom, refusing to take Lucy’s depression seriously, and only stepping in when their son was almost killed, then doing so by taking away their daughter’s coping mechanisms and [[spoiler: inadvertently killing one of Lana’s pets]]. The siblings will come to realize this, and collectively call them out on it.
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[[WMG: The discovery of Lucy's troubled past will cause Lincoln to believe he's NotSoDifferent]]
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[[WMG: The discovery of Lucy's troubled past will cause Lincoln to believe he's NotSoDifferent]]not so different]]
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Chapter 40 hints that Lincoln holds some pretty deep pent-up frustration with Lori far more than any of his other sisters. If it's proven that Lori's instructions to the sisters proved dysfunctional and debilitating to Lincoln, then Lincoln may feel that Lori actually holds most responsibility for the fight and its consequences and place the bulk of his blame on her. Chapter 37 has WordOfGod saying that Lincoln won't forgive ''all'' of his sisters, so technically leaving one out still qualifies.
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Chapter 40 hints that Lincoln holds some pretty deep pent-up frustration with Lori far more than any of his other sisters. If it's proven that Lori's instructions to the sisters proved dysfunctional and debilitating to Lincoln, then Lincoln may feel that Lori actually holds most responsibility for the fight and its consequences and place the bulk of his blame on her. Chapter 37 has WordOfGod saying that Lincoln won't forgive ''all'' of his sisters, so technically leaving one out still qualifies.qualifies.
[[WMG: Lincoln will forgive Lori]]
Chapter 41 seems to be the worst possible event that could have happened for Lori, but curiously Lincoln took at least a moment to consider what she said and realize that her reactions, though inexcusable, had a reason behind them. This is the first major instance where Lincoln has realized that his sisters aren't trying to attack him out of hatred but for more underlying reasons and may lead to him feeling enough sympathy for Lori and her predicament of having to raise 10 kids with little help from her parents that he will at least attempt to forgive her.
[[WMG: Lana will attack Lincoln rather than Lola]]
Defying expectations, Lola will take the time to consider Lincoln's criticisms of her and her meanness and possibly even [[BreakTheCutie break down under them]]. However, Lana will react very negatively to Lincoln expressing dislike of her often dangerous animals and lifestyle or maybe even become angry at Lincoln for making Lola cry, leading to her trying to fight him again.
[[WMG: The discovery of Lucy's troubled past will cause Lincoln to believe he's NotSoDifferent]]
As revealed in Chapter 21, Lucy used to be a much more happy and bright-spirited child but was driven to depression through traumatic neglect from her family, neglect that her siblings (including Lincoln) seemed to gleefully partake in and joke about. When Lincoln finally encounters Lucy and learns this, he will become so racked with guilt that he realizes that he is an abusive sibling no different from his sisters (though clearly of a much lesser magnitude) and possibly become more withdrawn.
[[WMG: Lincoln will forgive Lori]]
Chapter 41 seems to be the worst possible event that could have happened for Lori, but curiously Lincoln took at least a moment to consider what she said and realize that her reactions, though inexcusable, had a reason behind them. This is the first major instance where Lincoln has realized that his sisters aren't trying to attack him out of hatred but for more underlying reasons and may lead to him feeling enough sympathy for Lori and her predicament of having to raise 10 kids with little help from her parents that he will at least attempt to forgive her.
[[WMG: Lana will attack Lincoln rather than Lola]]
Defying expectations, Lola will take the time to consider Lincoln's criticisms of her and her meanness and possibly even [[BreakTheCutie break down under them]]. However, Lana will react very negatively to Lincoln expressing dislike of her often dangerous animals and lifestyle or maybe even become angry at Lincoln for making Lola cry, leading to her trying to fight him again.
[[WMG: The discovery of Lucy's troubled past will cause Lincoln to believe he's NotSoDifferent]]
As revealed in Chapter 21, Lucy used to be a much more happy and bright-spirited child but was driven to depression through traumatic neglect from her family, neglect that her siblings (including Lincoln) seemed to gleefully partake in and joke about. When Lincoln finally encounters Lucy and learns this, he will become so racked with guilt that he realizes that he is an abusive sibling no different from his sisters (though clearly of a much lesser magnitude) and possibly become more withdrawn.
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* If this happens, regardless of if Lucy succeeds, the act may be the trigger for an earlier WMG, such as the rest of the sisters getting into a fight or attacking Lincoln, or Lincoln bargaining with his parents to send the sisters away (this time for their own benefit as well as his).
* Conversely when Lincoln confronts Lucy and sees she's reached that point, he'll finally recognize her changes, remorse, and suffering depression and give her a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech to cheer her up and imply that while he hasn't forgiven her, he is still open to the possibility if she keeps trying.
* Conversely when Lincoln confronts Lucy and sees she's reached that point, he'll finally recognize her changes, remorse, and suffering depression and give her a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech to cheer her up and imply that while he hasn't forgiven her, he is still open to the possibility if she keeps trying.
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The end of the story will see Lincoln and his sisters finally reconcile, even if at least some of them aren't forgiven yet. StatusQuoIsGod will be undone and we'll see changes to the personalities and behaviors of the sisters as the underlying causes of dysfunction are addressed.
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The end of the story will see Lincoln and his sisters finally reconcile, even if at least some of them aren't forgiven yet. StatusQuoIsGod will be undone and we'll see changes to the personalities and behaviors of the sisters as the underlying causes of dysfunction are addressed.addressed.
[[WMG: Lincoln will forgive all of his sisters... except for Lori]]
Chapter 40 hints that Lincoln holds some pretty deep pent-up frustration with Lori far more than any of his other sisters. If it's proven that Lori's instructions to the sisters proved dysfunctional and debilitating to Lincoln, then Lincoln may feel that Lori actually holds most responsibility for the fight and its consequences and place the bulk of his blame on her. Chapter 37 has WordOfGod saying that Lincoln won't forgive ''all'' of his sisters, so technically leaving one out still qualifies.
[[WMG: Lincoln will forgive all of his sisters... except for Lori]]
Chapter 40 hints that Lincoln holds some pretty deep pent-up frustration with Lori far more than any of his other sisters. If it's proven that Lori's instructions to the sisters proved dysfunctional and debilitating to Lincoln, then Lincoln may feel that Lori actually holds most responsibility for the fight and its consequences and place the bulk of his blame on her. Chapter 37 has WordOfGod saying that Lincoln won't forgive ''all'' of his sisters, so technically leaving one out still qualifies.
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Considering his fear is being replaced with distrust and anger. He will probably try to get his parents to force the girls to live with Aunt Ruth for the rest of their lives or have them move away. He might also ask Dr. Lopez why none of the girls are under anger management. During this, the girls might eavesdrop about how Lincoln hates them and wants nothing to do with them.
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Considering his fear is being replaced with distrust and anger. He will probably try to get his parents to force the girls to live with Aunt Ruth for the rest of their lives or have them move away. He might also ask Dr. Lopez why none of the girls are under anger management. During this, the girls might eavesdrop about how Lincoln hates them and wants nothing to do with them.them.
[[WMG: Lucy will seriously contemplate suicide]]
Hinted at by WordOfGod in the notes for chapter 40. If Lincoln gives Lucy a ReasonYouSuckSpeech or asks for the sisters to leave his life, Lucy may fall into a deeper depression and decide to attempt suicide rather than be goaded to beating up Lincoln again.
[[WMG: The siblings will reconcile and set up new house rules]]
The end of the story will see Lincoln and his sisters finally reconcile, even if at least some of them aren't forgiven yet. StatusQuoIsGod will be undone and we'll see changes to the personalities and behaviors of the sisters as the underlying causes of dysfunction are addressed.
[[WMG: Lucy will seriously contemplate suicide]]
Hinted at by WordOfGod in the notes for chapter 40. If Lincoln gives Lucy a ReasonYouSuckSpeech or asks for the sisters to leave his life, Lucy may fall into a deeper depression and decide to attempt suicide rather than be goaded to beating up Lincoln again.
[[WMG: The siblings will reconcile and set up new house rules]]
The end of the story will see Lincoln and his sisters finally reconcile, even if at least some of them aren't forgiven yet. StatusQuoIsGod will be undone and we'll see changes to the personalities and behaviors of the sisters as the underlying causes of dysfunction are addressed.
