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** Metallo for his [[spoiler:robot form]], real name [[spoiler:Bridge, to match with the term cadence also being a musical term.]]
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** Metallo for his [[spoiler:robot form]], real name [[spoiler:Bridge, to match with the term cadence also being a musical term.]]]]
** Forte
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Story summary states that the characters will be facing their own inner demons.
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** Metallo for his [[spoiler:robot form]], real name [[spoiler: Bridge, [[spoiler:Bridge, to match with the term cadence also being a musical term.]]
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He used to be a tyrant before something happened and he became TheAtoner. One of the main conflicts of the story will be him being haunted by his past.
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He used to be a tyrant before something happened and he became TheAtoner. One of the main conflicts of the story will be him being haunted by his past.past.
[[WMG: AdaptationNameChange for other characters.]]
Cuz why not, put your ideas for them here:
*Mysterious:
**Shadoom (too obvious)
**Ombre (French for shadow)
**Bizzaro (has bizarre abilities)
*Rep-Stallion:
**{{JackTheRipoff Jack (as in the ripper)}}
**Grim Ripper (pun on grim reaper)
**Slasher
*Dementia:
**Quantia (as in quantum mechanics, to counter act Asta(l) physics)
**Narcia (as in narcissistic, to match with her vanity)
*Dyno & Mite:
**Dina & Mita (Spanish for dynamite, which has a possibility for another sex change)
*[[spoiler:Fratello]]
**Metallo for his [[spoiler:robot form]], real name [[spoiler: Bridge, to match with the term cadence also being a musical term.]]
[[WMG: AdaptationNameChange for other characters.]]
Cuz why not, put your ideas for them here:
*Mysterious:
**Shadoom (too obvious)
**Ombre (French for shadow)
**Bizzaro (has bizarre abilities)
*Rep-Stallion:
**{{JackTheRipoff Jack (as in the ripper)}}
**Grim Ripper (pun on grim reaper)
**Slasher
*Dementia:
**Quantia (as in quantum mechanics, to counter act Asta(l) physics)
**Narcia (as in narcissistic, to match with her vanity)
*Dyno & Mite:
**Dina & Mita (Spanish for dynamite, which has a possibility for another sex change)
*[[spoiler:Fratello]]
**Metallo for his [[spoiler:robot form]], real name [[spoiler: Bridge, to match with the term cadence also being a musical term.]]
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He used to be a tyrant before something happened and he became TheAtoner. One of the main conflicts of the story will be him being haunted by his past.
He used to be a tyrant before something happened and he became TheAtoner. One of the main conflicts of the story will be him being haunted by his past.
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