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* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond takes place two years after Chapter 14.
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* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond The second half takes place two years after Chapter 14.the first.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: Even worse than other games, as there are simple dialogue options that cost diamonds. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: Even To a significantly worse degree than other games, as there are simple dialogue options Choices stories. Options that cost diamonds. diamonds in Choices are usually for powerful weapons, clues, combat training, sex scenes, or outfits (though the latter two also show up in this one). ''Witness'' includes diamond choices for things like ''eating breakfast'' and ''treating a burn'', in addition to multilayered sex scenes that end up costing twice as many diamonds as they normally do. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion. suspicion, and most of the free choices end up making Niamh look like an ungrateful {{Jerkass}}. The most insane example is in Chapter 27, in which ''dodging a taser'' is a premium choice (meaning that if you don't spend diamonds, Niamh gets tasered and complains about it), whereas it would be a timed choice in just about any other story.
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-->'''Harika''': You can’t keep hooking up with random guys without catching feelings!
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-->'''Harika''': You can’t keep hooking up with random guys guys/girls without catching feelings!
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!! ''Witness: A Bodyguard Romance'' includes examples of:
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* WhyWon'tYouDie?: Aisling shouts this while attempting to kill Cassian one last time after all the previous attempts on their and Niamh's lives failed.
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* WhyWon'tYouDie?: WhyWontYouDie: Aisling shouts this while attempting to kill Cassian one last time after all the previous attempts on their and Niamh's lives failed.
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* BigBad:
** [[UnholyMatrimony Killian and Maeve O' Connell]] form a BigBadDuumvirate in the first half of the book. Together, they commit the murder that Niamh witnesses, forcing her to go into Witness Protection.
** After they are arrested, their daughter Aisling takes up the mantle, attempting to kill Niamh and Cassian for putting her parents in prison.
** [[UnholyMatrimony Killian and Maeve O' Connell]] form a BigBadDuumvirate in the first half of the book. Together, they commit the murder that Niamh witnesses, forcing her to go into Witness Protection.
** After they are arrested, their daughter Aisling takes up the mantle, attempting to kill Niamh and Cassian for putting her parents in prison.
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* SpoiledBrat: Due to having wealthy mob bosses for parents, Aisling is accustomed to getting everything she wants. She even throws a tantrum when Niamh tells her she can’t have the gold compass, which is an artifact that’s part of the museuem exhibit.
* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 takes place 2 years after Chapter 14.
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* SpoiledBrat: Due to having wealthy mob bosses for parents, Aisling is accustomed to getting everything she wants. She even throws a tantrum when Niamh tells her she can’t have the gold compass, which is an artifact that’s part of the museuem exhibit.exhibit (and explicitly not for sale).
* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond takes place2 two years after Chapter 14.
* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond takes place
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* NationalStereotypes: All members of the Irish mob wear green, have a shamrock on their clothing, and all female members have red hair.
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* NationalStereotypes: All members of the Irish mob wear green, have a shamrock on their clothing, and all female members have red hair. Counts as {{Oireland}}.
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* TheCameo: One of the couples in Chapter 6 is [[VisualNovel/RulesofEngagement Isabelle and Santiago]].
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* TheCameo: TheCameo:
** One of the couples in Chapter 6 is [[VisualNovel/RulesofEngagement Isabelle andSantiago]].Santiago]].
** In Chapter 16, the reporter asking Aisling about the parole hearing is [[VisualNovel/WishfulThinking Ellen Thompson]].
** One of the couples in Chapter 6 is [[VisualNovel/RulesofEngagement Isabelle and
** In Chapter 16, the reporter asking Aisling about the parole hearing is [[VisualNovel/WishfulThinking Ellen Thompson]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: While Niamh has a tendency to get angry too quickly, especially when you don't spend diamonds, she has the option to get justifiably angry when she finds out that Cassian has worked against the O'Connells before because it would blow her cover if they saw them. Of course, [[UnintentionallySympathetic the game treats her as being in the wrong, and punishes you by withholding backstory for choosing that option.]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: While Niamh has a tendency to get angry too quickly, especially when you don't spend diamonds, she has the option to [[WhatTheHellHero get justifiably angry when she finds out that Cassian has worked against the O'Connells before because it would blow her cover if they saw them. Of course, [[UnintentionallySympathetic the game treats her as being in the wrong, and punishes you by withholding backstory for choosing that option.]]them]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: While Niamh has a tendency to get angry too quickly, especially when you don't spend diamonds, she has the option to get justifiably angry when she finds out that Cassian has worked against the O'Connells before because it would blow her cover if they saw them. Of course, [[UnintentionallySympathetic the game treats her as being in the wrong, and punishes you by withholding backstory for choosing that option.]]
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* CulturalStereotypes: All members of the Irish mob wear green, have a shamrock on their clothing, and all female members have red hair.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: Aisling O’Connell, who is every bit as cruel as her parents. [[spoiler:Chapter 14 reveals that Killian plans on having her kill Niamh for revenge.]]
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* CulturalStereotypes: All members of the Irish mob wear green, have a shamrock on their clothing, and all female members have red hair.
* DaddysLittleVillain: Aisling O’Connell, who is every bit as cruel as her parents. [[spoiler:Chapter 14 reveals that Killian plans on having her kill Niamh forrevenge.]]revenge]].
* DaddysLittleVillain: Aisling O’Connell, who is every bit as cruel as her parents. [[spoiler:Chapter 14 reveals that Killian plans on having her kill Niamh for
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