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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault - milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. [[https://store.playstation.com/en-us/product/UP0737-CUSA14222_00-0000000000000000 PS4]] and [[https://www.nintendo.com/games/detail/fault-milestone-one-switch/ Nintendo Switch]] versions of the game are available as well. The creators ALICE IN DISSONANCE have a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault - milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} Platform/{{Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. [[https://store.playstation.com/en-us/product/UP0737-CUSA14222_00-0000000000000000 PS4]] and [[https://www.nintendo.com/games/detail/fault-milestone-one-switch/ Nintendo Switch]] versions of the game are available as well. The creators ALICE IN DISSONANCE have a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. [[https://store.playstation.com/en-us/product/UP0737-CUSA14222_00-0000000000000000 PS4]] and [[https://www.nintendo.com/games/detail/fault-milestone-one-switch/ Nintendo Switch]] versions of the game are available as well. The creators ALICE IN DISSONANCE have a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault - milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. [[https://store.playstation.com/en-us/product/UP0737-CUSA14222_00-0000000000000000 PS4]] and [[https://www.nintendo.com/games/detail/fault-milestone-one-switch/ Nintendo Switch]] versions of the game are available as well. The creators ALICE IN DISSONANCE have a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}} Prequel]] VisualNovel/FaultLighkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}} Prequel]] VisualNovel/FaultLighkravte VisualNovel/FaultLightkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}} Prequel]] FaultLighkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}} Prequel]] FaultLighkravte VisualNovel/FaultLighkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}}]] FaultLighkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}}]] [[{{Prequel}} Prequel]] FaultLighkravte was released.
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In 2022, a [[{{Prequel}}]] FaultLighkravte was released.
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* ShoutOut: During chapter 8, [[spoiler:Melano]] exclaims, "I have the wrong person? ''[='=]I[='=]'' have the wrong person? [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfZelda Well, excuuuuuse me, Princess.]]"
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* ShoutOut: During chapter 8, [[spoiler:Melano]] exclaims, "I have the wrong person? ''[='=]I[='=]'' have the wrong person? [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfZelda [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfZelda1989 Well, excuuuuuse me, Princess.]]"
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. The creators Alice in Dissonance has a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. [[https://store.playstation.com/en-us/product/UP0737-CUSA14222_00-0000000000000000 PS4]] and [[https://www.nintendo.com/games/detail/fault-milestone-one-switch/ Nintendo Switch]] versions of the game are available as well. The creators Alice in Dissonance has ALICE IN DISSONANCE have a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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* LinearVisualNovel: The visual novel is more of a KineticNovel as it only has one point were it "[[ButThouMust branches]]" in the entire story. While the immediate dialog will be different depending on which option is chosen, the overall story does not change.
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* LinearVisualNovel: The visual novel is more of a KineticNovel as it only has one point were where it "[[ButThouMust branches]]" in the entire story. While the immediate dialog will be different depending on which option is chosen, the overall story does not change.
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* CoolSword: Ritona can use her manakravte to create an AbsurdlySharpBlade made of glass.
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* MistakenForProstitute: An unfortunate misunderstanding of Rune's "unusual line of work" on Selphine's part results in this.
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''fault - Silence the Pedant'', coming soon. The creators Alice in Dissonance has a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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''Fault Milestone One'', stylized as ''fault milestone one'', is the first part of a series of ScienceFantasy kinetic {{Visual Novel}}s by the dojin group ALICE IN DISSONANCE. [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/286260/ It is currently available on]] {{UsefulNotes/Steam}} with the sequel, ''VisualNovel/FaultMilestoneTwo'', and a prequel, ''fault - Silence the Pedant'', ''VisualNovel/FaultSilenceThePedant'', coming soon. The creators Alice in Dissonance has a [[https://www.patreon.com/fault patreon page]] and an [[https://ask.fm/aliceindissonance ASKfm]].
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* CultureClash: When inviting Albas back to their hotel to continue their talk, Ritona and Selphine were both perplexed when he implied that it was "careless" of them to suggest that. This led them to believe that Kadia City-- and the Outer-Pole as a whole-- was still a patriarchal society.
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* CultureClash: When inviting Albas back to their hotel to continue their talk, Ritona and Selphine were both perplexed when he implied that it was "careless" of them to suggest that. This led them to believe that Kadia City-- and the Outer-Pole as a whole-- was still a patriarchal society. They couldn't fathom such a thing, seeing as Rughzenhaide had eliminated sexism altogether.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Koko asking Ritona, "...Is it so wrong to take a life... if it means protecting someone you can't live without?"
* BerserkButton: Disrespecting Selphine in any shape or form is the easiest way to press Ritona's berserk button. Shown the most prominently in the Sky Terrace fight when Koko neglected to address Selphine by her "Princess" title.
* BerserkButton: Disrespecting Selphine in any shape or form is the easiest way to press Ritona's berserk button. Shown the most prominently in the Sky Terrace fight when Koko neglected to address Selphine by her "Princess" title.
* CultureClash: When inviting Albas back to their hotel to continue their talk, Ritona and Selphine were both perplexed when he implied that it was "careless" of them to suggest that. This led them to believe that Kadia City-- and the Outer-Pole as a whole-- was still a patriarchal society.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Albus had more than platonic feelings for Cid, who was HappilyMarried to Eline.]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Albus [[spoiler:Albas had more than platonic feelings for Cid, who was HappilyMarried to Eline.]]
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* ExpressiveHair: Selphine's little hair wings flap with joy when she's trying out new food.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: While Ritona is investigating in the graveyard, [[spoiler:Rune has them for a brief moment as she surprises Ritona with her sudden presence. It also foreshadows that she is an automaton]].
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: While Ritona is investigating in the graveyard, [[spoiler:Rune has them for a brief moment as she surprises Ritona suddenly appears with her sudden presence.pupils and angular lines in her irises glowing red in an attempt to scare her off. It also foreshadows that she is an automaton]].
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* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Albus had more than platonic feelings for Cid, who was HappilyMarried to Eline.]]
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* SuperPrototype: [[spoiler:Rune]] is one. Played with since [[spoiler: she's]] far more advanced thanks to [[spoiler: having human emotions and thought processes]], but compensates for it by being [[spoiler:self-admittedly physically weaker than the Sisters made after her]]. Justified thanks to [[spoiler:Cid sacrificing his own life in order to grant her her emotions, taking the fine details of how he created her [[RidiculouslyHumanRobot body]] to the grave with him]].
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* SuperPrototype: [[spoiler:Rune]] is one. Played with since [[spoiler: she's]] far more advanced thanks to [[spoiler: having human emotions and thought processes]], but compensates for it by being [[spoiler:self-admittedly physically weaker than the Sisters made after her]]. Justified thanks to [[spoiler:Cid sacrificing his own life in order to grant her her emotions, taking the fine details of how he created her [[RidiculouslyHumanRobot body]] to the grave with him]].him]].
* UncannyValley: [[invoked]] Both Rune's are noted to be naturally unsettling. Rune Zhevitz's eyes were noted to be just [[CreepyChild creepy]] to look at. The current [[spoiler:robot]] Rune's movements are considered a bit too flawless and calculating, she lacks a proper life-force, and can go without blinking.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Rudo gives Ritona's red eyes a very poetic description to the point she wonders if he's coming on to her.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Whether or not [[spoiler:Sara/Rune]] can be considered a person is the driving conflict for the second half of the story.
* WhatIsThisFeeling: [[spoiler:The original Rune had some level of emotions, but she couldn't understand them properly. The current Rune recognizes them as pity, envy, and admiration.]]
* UncannyValley: [[invoked]] Both Rune's are noted to be naturally unsettling. Rune Zhevitz's eyes were noted to be just [[CreepyChild creepy]] to look at. The current [[spoiler:robot]] Rune's movements are considered a bit too flawless and calculating, she lacks a proper life-force, and can go without blinking.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Rudo gives Ritona's red eyes a very poetic description to the point she wonders if he's coming on to her.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Whether or not [[spoiler:Sara/Rune]] can be considered a person is the driving conflict for the second half of the story.
* WhatIsThisFeeling: [[spoiler:The original Rune had some level of emotions, but she couldn't understand them properly. The current Rune recognizes them as pity, envy, and admiration.]]
