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* AerithAndBob: Jake Spencer and Sullivan Chesterford sound normal enough. Claret and Chaska are unusual first names. Corwin ''Elenthir'' and Qua' Lon, however, are not usual names at all.
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* AerithAndBob: Jake Spencer and Sullivan Chesterford sound normal enough. Claret and Chaska are unusual first names. Corwin ''Elenthir'' and Qua' Lon, however, are not usual names at all.
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* RichIdiotWithNoDayJob: Sullivan Chesterford, as he is [[spoiler:the Red Spectre and leader of the revolution against the Skyborn.]]
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''Skyborn'' is a 2012 western-made EasternRPG created for [[UsefulNotes/IBMPersonalComputer PC]] with the UsefulNotes/RPGMaker engine. It can be [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/278460/ bought]] through UsefulNotes/{{Steam}} or [[https://www.bigfishgames.com/games/7156/skyborn/?pc Big Fish Games]].
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''Skyborn'' is a 2012 western-made EasternRPG created for [[UsefulNotes/IBMPersonalComputer PC]] with the UsefulNotes/RPGMaker engine.engine by Dancing Dragon Games. It can be [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/278460/ bought]] through UsefulNotes/{{Steam}} or [[https://www.bigfishgames.com/games/7156/skyborn/?pc Big Fish Games]].
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[[caption-width-right:300:She's got skills and attitude.]]
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%%* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dhacian and Qua' Lon.Lon.
* WrenchWench: Claret from fixes airships and is all too ready to chew out anybody who mistreats their ship. She also built herself an [[{{TheUnintelligible}} R2-D2 type robot sidekick]].
* WrenchWench: Claret from fixes airships and is all too ready to chew out anybody who mistreats their ship. She also built herself an [[{{TheUnintelligible}} R2-D2 type robot sidekick]].
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''Skyborn'' is a 2012 western-made EasternRPG created for [[UsefulNotes/IBMPersonalComputer PC]] with the UsefulNotes/RPGMaker engine. It can be [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/278460/ bought]] through UsefulNotes/{{Steam}}.
Claret Spencer lives a simple and happy life working as the [[WrenchWench main mechanic]] in her family's repair shop, Spencer's Drydock and Repairs. That is until the day her brother announces he is selling up so he can travel the world, and [[ArrangedMarriage has promised Claret's hand in marriage]] to the shop's new owner, professional rich fop Sullivan Chesterford.
Claret Spencer lives a simple and happy life working as the [[WrenchWench main mechanic]] in her family's repair shop, Spencer's Drydock and Repairs. That is until the day her brother announces he is selling up so he can travel the world, and [[ArrangedMarriage has promised Claret's hand in marriage]] to the shop's new owner, professional rich fop Sullivan Chesterford.
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''Skyborn'' is a 2012 western-made EasternRPG created for [[UsefulNotes/IBMPersonalComputer PC]] with the UsefulNotes/RPGMaker engine. It can be [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/278460/ bought]] through UsefulNotes/{{Steam}}.
UsefulNotes/{{Steam}} or [[https://www.bigfishgames.com/games/7156/skyborn/?pc Big Fish Games]].
Claret Spencer lives a simple and happy life working as the [[WrenchWench main mechanic]] in her family's repair shop, Spencer's Drydock and Repairs.That is until the day But one day, her brother announces that he is selling up so he can travel the world, and [[ArrangedMarriage has promised Claret's hand in marriage]] to the shop's new owner, professional rich fop Sullivan Chesterford.
Claret Spencer lives a simple and happy life working as the [[WrenchWench main mechanic]] in her family's repair shop, Spencer's Drydock and Repairs.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Skyborn's magical abilities are greatly reduced from Qua'lon's death, surely dulling their teeth for more conquest especially with Alda telling them about what fueled them for so long, and most of the characters look forward to what will hopefully settle down into a much more peaceful time...aside from Chaska, who must be remain alone in the Celestial Nexus. She's happy that she's finally in the "place" she belongs though, and hopes that one day other Fey may be born out of the Earth, to learn how to open the dimensional portals to get visit her friends every now and then, and to change the Celestial Nexus to something less torturous.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Skyborn's magical abilities are greatly reduced from following Qua'lon's death, surely dulling their teeth for more conquest especially with Alda telling them about what fueled them for so long, and most of the characters look forward to what will hopefully settle down into a much more peaceful time...time... aside from Chaska, who must be remain alone in the Celestial Nexus. She's happy that she's finally in the "place" she belongs belongs, though, and hopes that one day other Fey may be born out of the Earth, to learn how to open the dimensional portals to get visit her friends every now and then, and to change the Celestial Nexus to something less torturous.]]
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* HalfHumanHybrid: The half-breeds born from Skyborn and human, discriminated by most others. [[spoiler:As it turns out though, half-breeds are really just half-human and half-winged-magical-humans, since the Skyborn were humans changed by the Fey]].
* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Those with Skyborn blood are inevitably magical, but healing magic is incredibly rare. [[spoiler:Only Corwin and the original Empress of the Skyborn are known to have this capability]].
* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Those with Skyborn blood are inevitably magical, but healing magic is incredibly rare. [[spoiler:Only Corwin and the original Empress of the Skyborn are known to have this capability]].
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* HalfHumanHybrid: The half-breeds half-breeds, born from Skyborn and human, discriminated are despised by most others. [[spoiler:As it turns out though, half-breeds are really just half-human and half-winged-magical-humans, since the Skyborn were humans changed by the Fey]].
Fey.]]
* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Those with Skyborn blood are inevitably magical, but healing magic is incredibly rare. [[spoiler:Only Corwin and the original Empress of the Skyborn are known to have thiscapability]].capability.]]
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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Hinted at. Ryler wants to say something to Alda before their final examinations, but neither she nor the player ever find out what it is.
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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Hinted at.Implied. Ryler wants to say something to Alda before their final examinations, but neither she nor the player ever find out what it is.
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* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: This view is held by the Skyborns towards the half-breeds, and to a certain extent, humans. The humans also think half-breeds are vermin.
* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, [[CannotSpitItOut Jake never told her]] [[spoiler:[[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou they had died as rebels when they were just children]].]]
* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, [[CannotSpitItOut Jake never told her]] [[spoiler:[[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou they had died as rebels when they were just children]].]]
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* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: This view is held by the Skyborns Skyborn towards the half-breeds, and to a certain extent, humans. The humans also think half-breeds are vermin.
* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, [[CannotSpitItOut Jake never told her]] [[spoiler:[[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou they had died as rebels whenthey Jake and Claret were just children]].]]
* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, [[CannotSpitItOut Jake never told her]] [[spoiler:[[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou they had died as rebels when
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* SecretOtherFamily: Played with. Jillie is Sullivan's half-sister. Sullivan knows Jillie is his half-sister. Silas knows that Jillie is his daughter. However, Silas doesn't know that Sullivan knows about Jillie until much later.
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* SecretOtherFamily: Played with. Jillie is Sullivan's half-sister. Sullivan knows Jillie is his half-sister. Silas knows that Jillie is his daughter. However, Silas doesn't know that Sullivan knows about Jillie until much later.late in the game.
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* SteamPunk: The human towns look of this, as does the protagonist Claret (not to mention the existence of airships, or the towns being covered in enough smog to conceal the sun...). However, other characters don't adhere to the genre's look and tend more toward a fantasy aesthetic.
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* SteamPunk: The human towns look of like this, as does the protagonist Claret (not to mention the existence of airships, or the towns being covered in enough smog to conceal the sun...). However, other characters don't adhere to the genre's look and tend more toward a fantasy aesthetic.
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** The Red Spectre is [[spoiler:Sullivan...though Claret figured it herself pretty easily.]]
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** The Red Spectre is [[spoiler:Sullivan... though Claret figured it herself pretty easily.]]
* TwistEnding: [[spoiler:A child and a cloaked man have a conversation about the new Empress Alda, during which the cloaked man tells the child that he once knew the Empress and that he was - ''is'' - in love with her. Dun dun dun.]]
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* TwistEnding: [[spoiler:A child and a cloaked man have a conversation about the new Empress Alda, during which the cloaked man tells the child that he once knew the Empress and that he was - ''is'' - in love with her. Dun dun dun.]]
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''Skyborn'' is a 2012 western-made EasternRPG created using for [[UsefulNotes/IBMPersonalComputer PC]] with the VideoGame/RPGMaker UsefulNotes/RPGMaker engine. It is currently available to buy can be [[http://store.steampowered.com/app/278460/ on Steam]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Philibert, who always has a heart in a speech bubble after talking to Alda and flowerly compliments her, including calling her a goddess. Alda regards him with little more than telling him to stand right there to get away from him, which he does all the time. [[spoiler:Funnily enough, [[RuleOfThree his third appearance]] gets her declared the Skyborn's Empress.]]
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* ElectiveMonarchy: After [[spoiler:the death of the Skyborn Empress]].
%%* FanBoy: Philibert, for Alda.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Skyborn's magical abilities are greatly reduced from Qua'lon's death, surely dulling their teeth for more conquest especially with Alda telling them about what fueled them for so long, and most of the characters look forward to what will hopefully settle down into a much more peaceful time...aside from Chaska, who must be remain alone in the Celestial Nexus. She's happy that she's finally in the "place" she belongs though, and hopes that one day other Fey may be born out of the Earth, to learn how to open the dimensional portals to get visit her friends every now and then, and to change the Celestial Nexus to something less torturous.]]
* BraggingRightsReward: Defeating Saehral gives you an achievement, an item that doesn't actually do anything, and a bunch of experience which you've just proven you don't need.
* DrawAggro: In an MMORPG-like fashion, the player's party has "threat" of 100% divided up among living members of the party. Damaging and killing enemies increases a party member's threat, and characters have specific abilities that especially manipulate the threat system.
* ElectiveMonarchy: After [[spoiler:the death of the SkybornEmpress]].
%%* FanBoy: Philibert, for Alda.Empress, Alda is made the new one after a bold exclamation from [[AbhorrentAdmirer Philibert]], funnily enough]].
* BraggingRightsReward: Defeating Saehral gives you an achievement, an item that doesn't actually do anything, and a bunch of experience which you've just proven you don't need.
* DrawAggro: In an MMORPG-like fashion, the player's party has "threat" of 100% divided up among living members of the party. Damaging and killing enemies increases a party member's threat, and characters have specific abilities that especially manipulate the threat system.
* ElectiveMonarchy: After [[spoiler:the death of the Skyborn
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: The equipment system in general. Your party will later be armed and armored to the teeth, which would probably attract interest in of itself given most of your characters aren't professional guards, and lots of that stuff certainly doesn't sound very concealable. Obsidian is mentioned to be closely regulated by the Skyborn, with various people saying having the stuff is a quick way to get the Skyborn to put you down. However, players are quite capable of eventually obtaining armor and weapons made from it (buying it from a Skyborn shop, even) which won't cause them any trouble with other Skyborn.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: The half-breeds born from Skyborn and human, discriminated by most others. [[spoiler:As it turns out though, half-breeds are really just half-human and half-winged-magical-humans, since the Skyborn were humans changed by the Fey]].
* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Those with Skyborn blood are inevitably magical, but healing magic is incredibly rare. [[spoiler:Only Corwin and the original Empress of the Skyborn are known to have this capability]].
* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Those with Skyborn blood are inevitably magical, but healing magic is incredibly rare. [[spoiler:Only Corwin and the original Empress of the Skyborn are known to have this capability]].
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* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, Jake never told her [[spoiler:they had died when they were just children.]]
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The Skyborn race in general. Alda found almost nothing about their past save for the war against the humans which is only part of their history they'll talk about, and military rank ''is'' Skyborn hierarchy.
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The Skyborn race in general. Alda found almost nothing about their past save for the war against the humans which is only part of their history they'll talk about, and military rank ''is'' Skyborn hierarchy.
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* ParentalAbandonment: This is the way Claret views her parents. To be fair, [[CannotSpitItOut Jake never told her [[spoiler:they her]] [[spoiler:[[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou they had died as rebels when they were just children.children]].]]
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The Skyborn race in general. Alda found almost nothing about their past save for the war against the humans which is only part of their history they'll talk about, and military rank ''is'' Skyborn hierarchy. [[spoiler:It's expected they'll drift away from this with Alda telling them of their horrible history and what's being done with the kidnapped half-breeds, not to mention Qua'lon's death has significantly reduces their magical powers.]]
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The Skyborn race in general. Alda found almost nothing about their past save for the war against the humans which is only part of their history they'll talk about, and military rank ''is'' Skyborn hierarchy. [[spoiler:It's expected they'll drift away from this with Alda telling them of their horrible history and what's being done with the kidnapped half-breeds, not to mention Qua'lon's death has significantly reduces their magical powers.]]
* RuleOfThree: Philibert's appearances. The first two times, Alda tells him to just stand him right there which he enthusiastically obeys. [[spoiler:The third time, he pops in after Alda tells the Skyborn of their past to suggest Alda should be the Empress, which promptly happens.]]
** Why the Skyborn are kidnapping half-breeds.
* TheUnfought: [[spoiler:The Empress. The player never fights her - Sullivan just kills her dropping in as the Red Spectre in a cutscene himself.]]
* TheUnfought: [[spoiler:The Empress. The player never fights her - Sullivan just kills her dropping in as the Red Spectre in a cutscene himself.]]
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