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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: You can set your character's gender to man, woman, or other and successfully romance any of the romanceable characters.
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* GrayandGreyMorality: None of the three factions are obviously in the wrong or malicious. They just have competing interests.
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* GrayandGreyMorality: GrayAndGreyMorality: None of the three factions are obviously in the wrong or malicious. They just have competing interests.
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Diaspora is a ChooseYourOwnAdventure Game written in [[Creator/ChoiceOfGames ChoiceScript]] about a clan of people forced to flee their homeland and establish themselves elsewhere in the world.
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Diaspora is a ChooseYourOwnAdventure an InteractiveFiction Game written in [[Creator/ChoiceOfGames ChoiceScript]] about a clan of people forced to flee their homeland and establish themselves elsewhere in the world.
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* FantasyPantheon: The Castulians worship twin goddesses, one of which Pan serves, who seems to be mostly Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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* FantasyPantheon: The Castulians worship twin goddesses, one of which Pan serves, who seems to be mostly Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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* GrayandGreyMorality: None of the three factions are obviously in the wrong or malicious. They just have competing interests.
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* PurelyAestheticGender: Apart from pronouns, your character's gender is irrelevant.
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* WhiteMagicianGirl: ShrinkingViolet Aisling is <i>able</i> to use magic for combat... but she'd really rather use it to heal her friends.
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* WhiteMagicianGirl: ShrinkingViolet Aisling is <i>able</i> able to use magic for combat... but she'd really rather use it to heal her friends.
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* TheChiefsDaughter: The chief, in this case, being your loving and highly capable mother.
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* TheChiefsDaughter: The chief, in this case, being your loving and highly capable mother.If you play as a woman.
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* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's Castulians worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be mostly Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Pan is playful, charming, teasing, and always smiling. They will behead their enemies with a red hot sword.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: At least one character is established to have accurate prophectic dreams.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: At least one character is established to have accurate prophectic dreams.prophetic dreams.
* ElementalPowers: Pan favors fire, while Aisling is more of a water girl.
* ElementalPowers: Pan favors fire, while Aisling is more of a water girl.
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* TribalFacePaint: The Cine paint their faces with woad, both for battle and because it looks pretty.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Governor of Tarracina is in her late middle age and still able and willing to kick ass.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your [[NumberTwo second in command]] Cormac is big, cheerful anddelighted by the chance to take on a half dozen warriors on his own.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your [[NumberTwo second in command]] Cormac is big, cheerful anddelighted by the chance to take on a half dozen warriors on his own.
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* AbandonShip: If you choose the right course of action in your first sea battle you can force your enemy to do this.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Governor of Tarracina is in her late middle age and still able and willing to kickass.
ass. Your clan tends to follow this as well.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your [[NumberTwo second in command]] Cormac is big, cheerfulanddelighted and delighted by the chance to take on a half dozen warriors on his own.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Governor of Tarracina is in her late middle age and still able and willing to kick
* BoisterousBruiser: Your [[NumberTwo second in command]] Cormac is big, cheerful
* CurbStompBattle: If you choose all the right options in battle scenes, you can thrash your enemies either without taking on any damage at all or not more than superficial damage.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] NumberTwo isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of raiding.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] NumberTwo isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of
*WhiteMagicianGirl: ShrinkingViolet Aisling is <i>able</i> to use magic for combat... but she'd really rather use it to heal her friends.
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* BarbarianHero: Technically, the main character.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his own.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his own.
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* TheChiefsDaughter: The chief, in this case, being your loving and highly capable mother.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: If you pursue a relationship with either Cormac or Aisling, both of whom you've known nearly all your life.
* DisappearedDad: Your father sailed off one day and didn't return.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: If you pursue a relationship with either Cormac or Aisling, both of whom you've known nearly all your life.
* DisappearedDad: Your father sailed off one day and didn't return.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] second in command isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of raiding.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] second in command NumberTwo isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of raiding.
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* BarbarianHero: Technically, the main character.
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* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: At least one character is established to have accurate prophectic dreams.
* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancientRomans.Romans.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The Cine are basically Vikings, while the Castulia is heavily based on AncientRome.
* FeaturelessProtagonist: The player character is implied to be shorter than two other (unusually tall) characters and... that's about it.
* FourStarBadass: The Governor of Tarracina is also a General and is more often referred to as such than by her political title.
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] second in command isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of raiding.
* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The Cine are basically Vikings, while the Castulia is heavily based on AncientRome.
* FeaturelessProtagonist: The player character is implied to be shorter than two other (unusually tall) characters and... that's about it.
* FourStarBadass: The Governor of Tarracina is also a General and is more often referred to as such than by her political title.
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: The [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Chief's]] second in command isn't at all happy about the idea of trading instead of raiding.
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* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his own.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Governor of Tarracina is in her late middle age and still able and willing to kick ass.
* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his
* BiTheWay: You can set your character's gender to man, woman, or other and successfully romance any of the romanceable characters.
* FantasyPantheon: The Castulian's worship twin goddesses, one of which the character Pan serves, who seems to be Durga with a dash of Cybele as interpreted by ancient Romans.
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Diaspora is a ChooseYourOwnAdventure Game written in [[Creator/ChoiceOfGames ChoiceScript]] about a clan of people forced to flee their homeland and establish themselves elsewhere in the world.
The Cine, of which the Player Character is a part, are traditionally a raiding culture, accustomed to theft and piracy as a way of life, meaning that few will welcome them as neighbors. Throughout the story, the PC will have opportunities to shape the perception of their clan, as well as the direction their people will take with their new settlement. Will you stick to traditional values at the steep diplomatic cost that may entail? Or, against the advice of your clan’s leadership and some of your close friends, will you try to change the very fate of the Cine, their role in the world around them?
The first seven chapters are [[https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/diaspora-wip-updated-12-22-18/26738 available to play here]].
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!! This show provides examples of:
* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his own.
The Cine, of which the Player Character is a part, are traditionally a raiding culture, accustomed to theft and piracy as a way of life, meaning that few will welcome them as neighbors. Throughout the story, the PC will have opportunities to shape the perception of their clan, as well as the direction their people will take with their new settlement. Will you stick to traditional values at the steep diplomatic cost that may entail? Or, against the advice of your clan’s leadership and some of your close friends, will you try to change the very fate of the Cine, their role in the world around them?
The first seven chapters are [[https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/diaspora-wip-updated-12-22-18/26738 available to play here]].
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!! This show provides examples of:
* BoisterousBruiser: Your second in command Cormac is big, cheerful and fully capable of taking on a half dozen warriors on his own.
