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* IKnewIt: A few readers correctly guessed that [[spoiler:nosy reporter Mildred Marshall is actually an incognito ship girl]] before the author revealed it.
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*** [[spoiler:The mission to capture an abyssal would succeed, netting the team the one who led the attacks on Okinawa. This came at the cost of Shoukaku and Hibiki, who were killed in action. When Yvonne interrogates the abyssal, the latter identifies herself as Yorktown, causing the former to go into a fit of rage and attack the latter. A [=JMSDF=] officer managed to overhear the interrogation, and in a panic, reports to his superiors that the abyssals are [=USN=] shipgirls. When the Nationalists get wind of this, they spin it so that it comes out as "The abyssals are led by [=USN=] ship girls." Yvonne is essentially kicked out of the country, and the US is treated as a pariah. Meanwhile the Japanese ship girls would then be sent off on a mission to Ironbottom Sound, with neither them or their commanders aware that it is a trap set up by Arizona for express purpose of using the girls as sacrifices for the Abyssals. A BigDamnHeroes moment would've ensued, where Washington would manage to get in contact with Thresher and had the latter launch the nukes from the submarine she had been inspecting.]]
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*** [[spoiler:The mission to capture an abyssal would succeed, netting the team the one who led the attacks on Okinawa. This came at the cost of Shoukaku and Hibiki, who were killed in action. When Yvonne interrogates the abyssal, the latter identifies herself as Yorktown, causing the former to go into a fit of rage and attack the latter. A [=JMSDF=] officer managed to overhear the interrogation, and in a panic, reports to his superiors that the abyssals are [=USN=] shipgirls. When the Nationalists get wind of this, they spin it so that it comes out as "The abyssals are led by [=USN=] ship girls." Yvonne is essentially kicked out of the country, and the US is treated as a pariah. Meanwhile the Japanese ship girls would then be sent off on a mission to Ironbottom Sound, with neither them or their commanders aware that it is a trap set up by Arizona for express purpose of using the girls as sacrifices for the Abyssals. A BigDamnHeroes moment would've ensued, where Washington would manage to get in contact with Thresher and had the latter launch the nukes from the submarine she had been inspecting.]]
** There were points from the post-restart writing committee that were never implemented because the restart never went beyond Chapter 6.
*** The primary one: [[spoiler:We find out exactly just how ''Washington'' was summoned and how the CIA got their hands on her without the [=USN=] ship girl program even knowing that she existed. A group of college students, completely unaffiliated with the [=USN=], managed to summon her.]]
** There were points from the post-restart writing committee that were never implemented because the restart never went beyond Chapter 6.
*** The primary one: [[spoiler:We find out exactly just how ''Washington'' was summoned and how the CIA got their hands on her without the [=USN=] ship girl program even knowing that she existed. A group of college students, completely unaffiliated with the [=USN=], managed to summon her.]]
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** There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
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** There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters chapters, their initial published versions, and their published post-restart versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in both the final published version.and restarted versions.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
** Prior to [=Sasahara17's=] CreatorBreakdown, he had posted a bunch of upcoming plot points for events taking place after Chapter 12 (A chapter that had been posted in the fic's spoilers thread for feedback and not officially published.)
*** [[spoiler:Admiral Shimada would've committed suicide following his guilty verdict in the case of him retreating from Okinawa. This would've caused two of his ship-girls, the Fusou sisters, to blame Yvonne for his death.]]
*** [[spoiler:The mission to capture an abyssal would succeed, netting the team the one who led the attacks on Okinawa. This came at the cost of Shoukaku and Hibiki, who were killed in action. When Yvonne interrogates the abyssal, the latter identifies herself as Yorktown, causing the former to go into a fit of rage and attack the latter. A [=JMSDF=] officer managed to overhear the interrogation, and in a panic, reports to his superiors that the abyssals are [=USN=] shipgirls. When the Nationalists get wind of this, they spin it so that it comes out as "The abyssals are led by [=USN=] ship girls." Yvonne is essentially kicked out of the country, and the US is treated as a pariah. Meanwhile the Japanese ship girls would then be sent off on a mission to Ironbottom Sound, with neither them or their commanders aware that it is a trap set up by Arizona for express purpose of using the girls as sacrifices for the Abyssals. A BigDamnHeroes moment would've ensued, where Washington would manage to get in contact with Thresher and had the latter launch the nukes from the submarine she had been inspecting.]]
** There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
** Prior to [=Sasahara17's=] CreatorBreakdown, he had posted a bunch of upcoming plot points for events taking place after Chapter 12 (A chapter that had been posted in the fic's spoilers thread for feedback and not officially published.)
*** [[spoiler:Admiral Shimada would've committed suicide following his guilty verdict in the case of him retreating from Okinawa. This would've caused two of his ship-girls, the Fusou sisters, to blame Yvonne for his death.]]
*** [[spoiler:The mission to capture an abyssal would succeed, netting the team the one who led the attacks on Okinawa. This came at the cost of Shoukaku and Hibiki, who were killed in action. When Yvonne interrogates the abyssal, the latter identifies herself as Yorktown, causing the former to go into a fit of rage and attack the latter. A [=JMSDF=] officer managed to overhear the interrogation, and in a panic, reports to his superiors that the abyssals are [=USN=] shipgirls. When the Nationalists get wind of this, they spin it so that it comes out as "The abyssals are led by [=USN=] ship girls." Yvonne is essentially kicked out of the country, and the US is treated as a pariah. Meanwhile the Japanese ship girls would then be sent off on a mission to Ironbottom Sound, with neither them or their commanders aware that it is a trap set up by Arizona for express purpose of using the girls as sacrifices for the Abyssals. A BigDamnHeroes moment would've ensued, where Washington would manage to get in contact with Thresher and had the latter launch the nukes from the submarine she had been inspecting.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching a squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching a squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
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* IKnewIt: A few readers correctly guessed that [[spoiler:nosy reporter Mildred Marshall is actually an incognito ship girl]] before the author revealed it.
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* IKnewIt: A few readers correctly guessed that [[spoiler:nosy reporter Mildred Marshall is actually an incognito ship girl]] before the author revealed it.it.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching a squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There have some changes between the beta versions of some chapters and their published versions. Chapter 6 for example [[spoiler:would have seen Yvonne launching a squadrons of Bearcats instead of Corsairs as in the final published version.]]
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** This is due to the author being a follower of ''Pacific'' himself.
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** This is due to the author being a follower [[FollowTheLeader follower]] of ''Pacific'' himself.
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* {{Expy}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Expy}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic fanwork ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf homage of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].Enterprise]]. [[note]]She combines the slender build of the official Pacific design for Enterprise, with the height and long hair of the semi-official post-refit Enterprise.[[/note]]
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** This is due to the author being a follower of ''Pacific'' himself.
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* {{Expy}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Expy}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].Enterprise]].
* IKnewIt: A few readers correctly guessed that [[spoiler:nosy reporter Mildred Marshall is actually an incognito ship girl]] before the author revealed it.
* IKnewIt: A few readers correctly guessed that [[spoiler:nosy reporter Mildred Marshall is actually an incognito ship girl]] before the author revealed it.
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A crossover is when two mediums are explicitly stated to be interacting, for example Kan Colle and Arpeggio. This is an expy.
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* {{Crossover}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Crossover}}: {{Expy}}: Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Crossover}}: Several aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Crossover}}: Several Some aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler: an AlternateUniverse version AlternateSelf of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Crossover}}: Several aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler:
an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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* {{Crossover}}: Several aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler:
[[spoiler: an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
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Might as well put all the crossover-related stuff here, since that\'s what I did with Pacific\'s page.
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* {{Crossover}}: Several aspects and characters are borrowed from fellow Kancolle fanfic ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', most notably the fact that [[spoiler: Yvonne Swanson]] is actually [[spoiler:
an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
an AlternateUniverse version of ''Pacific's'' Enterprise]].
