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* SeriesHiatus: The story has been put on hold while the author works on ''Fanfic/AccidentalApotheosis''.
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* SeriesHiatus: The story has been put on hold while in part due to the author works working on ''Fanfic/AccidentalApotheosis''.''Fanfic/AccidentalApotheosis''. Another reason for the hiatus is general burnout and lack of motivation, especially since Saph continues to have new ideas for fics and can't focus on everything at once.
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* DevelopmentGag: One is done to the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver Johto games]], as Misty was originally intended to be an Elite Four member in them, while she does successfully become one here.
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* DevelopmentGag: DevelopmentGag:
** One is done to the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver Johto games]], as Misty was originally intended to be an Elite Four member in them, while she does successfully become onehere.here.
** There were ideas for Latias to join Ash's group. However they were vetoed because the staff didn't want Ash to own a Legendary because Ash's other Pokémon would be OvershadowedByAwesome, nor did they want [[NonSerialMovie the movies to be canon to the anime proper]]. [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter This didn't sit well with fans]], who rejoiced when Ash did catch Latias in the fic.
** One is done to the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver Johto games]], as Misty was originally intended to be an Elite Four member in them, while she does successfully become one
** There were ideas for Latias to join Ash's group. However they were vetoed because the staff didn't want Ash to own a Legendary because Ash's other Pokémon would be OvershadowedByAwesome, nor did they want [[NonSerialMovie the movies to be canon to the anime proper]]. [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter This didn't sit well with fans]], who rejoiced when Ash did catch Latias in the fic.
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* DevelopmentGag: One is done to the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver Johto games]], as Misty was originally intended to be an Elite Four member in them, while she does successfully become one here.
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* SeriesHiatus: The story has been put on hold while the author works on ''Fanfic/AccidentalApprheosis''.
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* SeriesHiatus: The story has been put on hold while the author works on ''Fanfic/AccidentalApprheosis''.''Fanfic/AccidentalApotheosis''.
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* SeriesHiatus: The story has been put on hold while the author works on ''Fanfic/AccidentalApprheosis''.
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* FanNickname:
** [[CuddleBug Hug]]-[[EldritchAbomination Shoggoth]] for Muk.
** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.
** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.
** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.
** Deoxys from [[spoiler:the Delta Episode]] is nicknamed Deoxys Bad Driver.
** [[CuddleBug Hug]]-[[EldritchAbomination Shoggoth]] for Muk.
** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.
** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.
** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.
** Deoxys from [[spoiler:the Delta Episode]] is nicknamed Deoxys Bad Driver.
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** Chapter 300 has Ash's battle with Volkner, an Electric-type gym leader and the final Sinnoh gym.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen:WhatCouldHaveBeen: There are a lot of major and minor examples of plans changing either before or during the writing of a chapter, often due to either the situation working better in a different way, or fan-input on opinions. Examples include, but are not limited to the following:
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* InMemoriam: Chapter 256 has a Johto contest rival for May that is a tribute to the author's grandmother, who had passed away only recently.
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** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago. The reason Kelly was originally picked that it would be a rather ordinary name for a legendary weapon.
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** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago. The reason Kelly was originally picked that it would be a rather ordinary name for a legendary weapon.weapon.
* WriteWhatYouKnow: The author has geology knowledge, so he tends to write that in geologic matters come up in story. Ironically, in regards to this being a Pokémon fic about Cyrus causing the EndOfTheWorld, the author never did watch the Diamond and Pearl series.
* WriteWhatYouKnow: The author has geology knowledge, so he tends to write that in geologic matters come up in story. Ironically, in regards to this being a Pokémon fic about Cyrus causing the EndOfTheWorld, the author never did watch the Diamond and Pearl series.
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** Chapter 250 much like how Chapter 100 contained the entirety of the 5th movie adaptation, contained the entirety of the 10th movie adaptation.
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** Chapter 250 much like how Chapter 100 contained the entirety of the 5th movie adaptation, contained the entirety of the 10th movie adaptation.adaptation, much like Chapter 100 with the 5th movie.
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** Chapter 250 much like how Chapter 100 contained the entirety of the 5th movie adaptation, contained the entirety of the 10th movie adaptation.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: There have been some suggestions from his Spacebattles readers that made it into the story. One example is Ash's Honedge. It had been considered a new OC Pokémon for Ash to get, but it was a reader that suggested it would come from a ceremonial sword Ash had received prior.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: There have been some suggestions from his Spacebattles readers that made it into the story. One example is Ash's Honedge. It had been considered a new OC Pokémon for Ash to get, add to the cast, but it was a reader that suggested it would come from a ceremonial sword Ash had received prior.prior, considering the physics-defying stunts Ash pulled off with it.
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** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago.
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** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago. The reason Kelly was originally picked that it would be a rather ordinary name for a legendary weapon.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: There have been some suggestions from his Spacebattles readers that made it into the story. One example is Ash's Honedge. It had been considered a new OC Pokémon for Ash to get, but it was a reader that suggested it would come from a ceremonial sword Ash had received prior.
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** Zoey wasn't going to be one of the "remindable", due to the author's lack of knowledge regarding the character. He quickly pulled a AuthorsSavingThrow after being told by the readers on the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom forums how a major part Zoey was in Dawn's character development.
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** Zoey wasn't going to be one of the "remindable", due to the author's lack of knowledge regarding the character. He quickly pulled a AuthorsSavingThrow after being told by the readers on the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom forums how a major part Zoey was in Dawn's character development.development.
** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago.
** The human that became Ash's Honedge was originally named Kelly Burns, but Kelly was considered a bit to Anachronistic a name for a female knight that lived centuries ago.
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** An early version of the N buying Pokéballs scene had him purchasing a Master Ball, but readers on the Spacebattles forum objected to it, stating that N shouldn't have gotten a Master Ball from a normal shop, even if he did have the money to afford one.
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** An early version of the N buying Pokéballs scene had him purchasing a Master Ball, but readers on the Spacebattles forum objected to it, stating that N shouldn't have gotten a Master Ball from a normal shop, even if he did have the money to afford one.one.
** Zoey wasn't going to be one of the "remindable", due to the author's lack of knowledge regarding the character. He quickly pulled a AuthorsSavingThrow after being told by the readers on the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom forums how a major part Zoey was in Dawn's character development.
** Zoey wasn't going to be one of the "remindable", due to the author's lack of knowledge regarding the character. He quickly pulled a AuthorsSavingThrow after being told by the readers on the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom forums how a major part Zoey was in Dawn's character development.
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I want to cut the Main redirect.
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* HeAlsoDid: Saphroneth also writes for TheInfiniteLoops.
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* HeAlsoDid: Saphroneth also writes for TheInfiniteLoops.''FanFic/TheInfiniteLoops''.
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Accidentally Correct Writing is not for specualtion that turns out to be real. It's for lack of research in a work that happens to match reality, luckily for the author.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: In-universe example - Barry's WildMassGuessing during [[spoiler: the Delta Episode]] leads him to conclude that the danger is a powerful Psychic-type due to [[spoiler: the presence of Ash's Mega Absol.]] While he's [[EntertaininglyWrong wrong]] for what they need [[spoiler: Mega Absol for, that asteroid did have a certain extraterrestrial Pokémon passenger...]]
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** Deoxys from [[spoiler:the Delta Episode]] is nicknamed Deoxys Bad Driver.
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* HeAlsoDid: Saphorenth also writes TheInfiniteLoops.
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* HeAlsoDid: Saphorenth Saphroneth also writes for TheInfiniteLoops.
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* MilestoneCelebration:
** Chapter 100 contained the entirety of the 5th movie adaptation, when major events are normally split into multiple chapters.
** Chapter 150 features purely secondary characters and none of the main characters, dubbed as "Ashes Nowhere to be Seen"
** Chapter 151 has an appearance by Mew, [[DontExplainTheJoke which is the 151st Pokémon in the Pokédex]].
** Chapter 200 is focused on various legendaries, including the early appearance of [[spoiler:Manaphy]].
** Chapter 100 contained the entirety of the 5th movie adaptation, when major events are normally split into multiple chapters.
** Chapter 150 features purely secondary characters and none of the main characters, dubbed as "Ashes Nowhere to be Seen"
** Chapter 151 has an appearance by Mew, [[DontExplainTheJoke which is the 151st Pokémon in the Pokédex]].
** Chapter 200 is focused on various legendaries, including the early appearance of [[spoiler:Manaphy]].
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* AccidentallyAccurate: In-universe example - Barry's WildMassGuessing during [[spoiler: the Delta Episode]] leads him to conclude that the danger is a powerful Psychic-type due to [[spoiler: the presence of Ash's Mega Absol.]] While he's [[EntertaininglyWrong wrong]] for what they need [[spoiler: Mega Absol for, that asteroid did have a certain extraterrestrial Pokémon passenger...]]
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** Zinnia was considered to make an appearance in the Destiny Deoxys adaptation, as foreshadowing the Delta Episode.
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** Zinnia was considered to make an appearance in the Destiny Deoxys adaptation, as foreshadowing the Delta Episode.Episode.
** An early version of the N buying Pokéballs scene had him purchasing a Master Ball, but readers on the Spacebattles forum objected to it, stating that N shouldn't have gotten a Master Ball from a normal shop, even if he did have the money to afford one.
** An early version of the N buying Pokéballs scene had him purchasing a Master Ball, but readers on the Spacebattles forum objected to it, stating that N shouldn't have gotten a Master Ball from a normal shop, even if he did have the money to afford one.
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** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.
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** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.Squad.
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** Team Flare was planned to be connected to Cyrus' plot. Dropped after Team Flare made an appearance in the anime.
** Zinnia was considered to make an appearance in the Destiny Deoxys adaptation, as foreshadowing the Delta Episode.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** Team Flare was planned to be connected to Cyrus' plot. Dropped after Team Flare made an appearance in the anime.
** Zinnia was considered to make an appearance in the Destiny Deoxys adaptation, as foreshadowing the Delta Episode.
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** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.
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** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.Hyperkarp.
** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.
** Arceus and the new Creation Trio are collectively called the God Squad.
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** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.
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** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.deserved.
** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.
** Wallace's supercharged Magikarp is nicknamed Hyperkarp.
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** [[EldritchAbomination Hug-Shoggoth]] for Muk.
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** [[EldritchAbomination Hug-Shoggoth]] [[CuddleBug Hug]]-[[EldritchAbomination Shoggoth]] for Muk.
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* FanNickname:
** [[EldritchAbomination Hug-Shoggoth]] for Muk.
** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.
** [[EldritchAbomination Hug-Shoggoth]] for Muk.
** Ash's Legendary Maid Service for Mewtwo. Considering he tends to keep situations like the one at Shamouti from going completely out of control on his own, it's a nickname that is well deserved.
