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* NamesTheSame: Shares the title with [[Fanfic/DanganRonpaLegacyOfDespair Legacy of Despair]] by an unrelated author.
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* SimilarlyNamedWorks: Shares the title with [[Fanfic/DanganRonpaLegacyOfDespair Legacy of Despair]] by an unrelated author.
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* FollowTheLeader: The popularity of ''A New Hope'' made more people produce fan-made spin-offs, however, few of them would come close to completion.
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* FollowTheLeader: The popularity of ''A New Hope'' made more people produce fan-made spin-offs, however, few of them would come close to completion.
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* AshcanCopy: In the work's Discord server, the reason for the abundance of [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] in the sequels is because the people who made didn't put a bit more emphasis on their supposed character biographies.
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* AshcanCopy: In the work's Discord server, the a reason for the abundance of [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] in the sequels is because the people who made didn't put a bit more emphasis on their supposed character biographies.
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* AshcanCopy: In the work's Discord server, the reason for the abundance of FlatCharacters in the sequels is because the people who made didn't put a bit more emphasis on their supposed character biographies.
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH and SoT were first being made,;the casts weren't pulled from huge piles of submissions and a writer doesn't exactly want to sit for too long waiting on characters to come in. Not to mention some of the characters applications are fairly sparse. I can't tell you how many submission we got for Oasis where it seemed like the submitter was trying to put down the bare minimum for filling out the application. Many of them just lazily taking an existing character, either from DR or anything else really, and slapping the characters name over it or only giving a sentence of backstory that gives us nothing to work with."
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH and SoT were first being made,;the casts weren't pulled from huge piles of submissions and a writer doesn't exactly want to sit for too long waiting on characters to come in. Not to mention some of the characters applications are fairly sparse. I can't tell you how many submission we got for Oasis where it seemed like the submitter was trying to put down the bare minimum for filling out the application. Many of them just lazily taking an existing character, either from DR or anything else really, and slapping the characters name over it or only giving a sentence of backstory that gives us nothing to work with."
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* AshcanCopy: In the work's Discord server, the reason for the abundance of FlatCharacters [[FlatCharacter flat characters]] in the sequels is because the people who made didn't put a bit more emphasis on their supposed character biographies.
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH andSoT [=SoT=] were first being made,;the casts weren't pulled from huge piles of submissions and a writer doesn't exactly want to sit for too long waiting on characters to come in. Not to mention some of the characters applications are fairly sparse. I can't tell you how many submission we got for Oasis where it seemed like the submitter was trying to put down the bare minimum for filling out the application. Many of them just lazily taking an existing character, either from DR or anything else really, and slapping the characters name over it or only giving a sentence of backstory that gives us nothing to work with."
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH and
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* AshcanCopy: In the work's Discord server, the reason for the abundance of FlatCharacters in the sequels is because the people who made didn't put a bit more emphasis on their supposed character biographies.
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH and SoT were first being made,;the casts weren't pulled from huge piles of submissions and a writer doesn't exactly want to sit for too long waiting on characters to come in. Not to mention some of the characters applications are fairly sparse. I can't tell you how many submission we got for Oasis where it seemed like the submitter was trying to put down the bare minimum for filling out the application. Many of them just lazily taking an existing character, either from DR or anything else really, and slapping the characters name over it or only giving a sentence of backstory that gives us nothing to work with."
--> " I will say for some of these character analysis, as a person who has helped a lot with character acceptance for games, and from what Crit has mentioned from his time back when FH and SoT were first being made,;the casts weren't pulled from huge piles of submissions and a writer doesn't exactly want to sit for too long waiting on characters to come in. Not to mention some of the characters applications are fairly sparse. I can't tell you how many submission we got for Oasis where it seemed like the submitter was trying to put down the bare minimum for filling out the application. Many of them just lazily taking an existing character, either from DR or anything else really, and slapping the characters name over it or only giving a sentence of backstory that gives us nothing to work with."
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Pretty much the majority of the sequels' casts are made from readers who sent their [=OCs=] for the stories (hence, why it's called ''Send Your OC''/[=SYOC=]). Subverted with ''Final Horizon'' 's Alice Bailey, ''Sea of Tranquility'' 's Mallory Walsh, and ''House Of Horrors'' ' Akeno Shujinmo.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Pretty much the majority of the sequels' casts are made from readers who sent their [=OCs=] for the stories (hence, why it's called ''Send Your OC''/[=SYOC=]). Subverted with ''Final Horizon'' 's Alice Bailey, ''Sea of Tranquility'' 's Mallory Walsh, and ''House Of Horrors'' ' Akeno Shujinmo.Shujinmo, all of whom were created by the author Crit Fail himself.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Pretty much the majority of the sequels' casts are made from readers who sent their [=OCs=] for the stories (hence, why it's called ''Send Your OC''/[=SYOC=]). Subverted with ''Final Horizon'''s Alice Bailey, ''Sea of Tranquility'''s Mallory Walsh, and ''House Of Horrors'''s Akeno Shujinmo.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Pretty much the majority of the sequels' casts are made from readers who sent their [=OCs=] for the stories (hence, why it's called ''Send Your OC''/[=SYOC=]). Subverted with ''Final Horizon'''s Horizon'' 's Alice Bailey, ''Sea of Tranquility'''s Tranquility'' 's Mallory Walsh, and ''House Of Horrors'''s Horrors'' ' Akeno Shujinmo.
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** It's been confirmed from this that [[spoiler: the killing game isn't in a [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2GoodbyeDespair virtual reality program]], nor is it a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony reality television show]]]].
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** It's been confirmed from this that [[spoiler: the killing game isn't in a [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2GoodbyeDespair virtual reality program]], nor is it a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony reality television show]]]]. [[spoiler: As such, some of the characters' dynamics were changed: the Chiaki that appears isn't the [=AI=] version and even [[SparedByTheAdaptation survives]]; the [=V3=] cast has their "fake" talents and backstories as their genuine backstories; and special mention to Tsumugi Shirogane being DemotedToDragon]].
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** In the spinoffs, the Ultimate Mercanary Takeo Onishi's creator, BirblordAlmighty, mentioned how he's not only aromantic, but also is infertile due to a forced vasectomy by a group he's worked for.
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** In the spinoffs, the Ultimate Mercanary Mercenary Takeo Onishi's creator, BirblordAlmighty, mentioned how he's not only aromantic, but also is infertile due to a forced vasectomy by a group he's worked for.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Ryoko initially wasn't planned to be included in the story, but a impassioned word from a reviewer changed his mind. [[spoiler: The Clone!Makoto, however, was planned from the beginning.]]
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Pretty much the majority of the sequels' casts are made from readers who sent their [=OCs=] for the stories (hence, why it's called ''Send Your OC''/[=SYOC=]). Subverted with ''Final Horizon'''s Alice Bailey, ''Sea of Tranquility'''s Mallory Walsh, and ''House Of Horrors'''s Akeno Shujinmo.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Ryoko initially wasn't planned to be included in the story, buta an impassioned word from a reviewer changed his mind. [[spoiler: The Clone!Makoto, however, was planned from the beginning.]]
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Ryoko initially wasn't planned to be included in the story, but
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* IKnewIt: Reviewer [=Fee5h=] correctly deduces [[spoiler: Yukiko and Dylan's complete involvement in the ''Sea of Tranquility'' killing game.]]
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* {{Jossed}}: The author was quick to clarify that [[spoiler: the eighty students that died in the first chapter of ''Kuma-Kuma Land'' were ''not'' the unselected {{Original Character}}s that were submitted.]]
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** It's been confirmed from this that [[spoiler: the killing game isn't in a [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2 virtual reality program]], nor is it a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3 reality television show]]]].
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** It's been confirmed from this that [[spoiler: the killing game isn't in a [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2 [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2GoodbyeDespair virtual reality program]], nor is it a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3 [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony reality television show]]]].
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** In the spinoffs, the Ultimate Mercanary Takeo Onishi's creator, Birbddha, mentioned how he's not only aromantic, but also is infertile due to a forced vasectomy by a group he's worked for.
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** In the spinoffs, the Ultimate Mercanary Takeo Onishi's creator, Birbddha, BirblordAlmighty, mentioned how he's not only aromantic, but also is infertile due to a forced vasectomy by a group he's worked for.
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* NamesTheSame: Shares the title with [[Fanfic/DanganRonpaLegacyOfDespair Legacy of Despair]] by an unrelated author.
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* {{Jossed}}: The author was quick to clarify that [[spoiler: the eighty students that died in the first chapter of ''Kuma-Kuma Land'' were ''not'' the unselected OCs that were submitted.]]
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* {{Jossed}}: The author was quick to clarify that [[spoiler: the eighty students that died in the first chapter of ''Kuma-Kuma Land'' were ''not'' the unselected OCs {{Original Character}}s that were submitted.]]
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* WordOfSaintPaul: Also pops up where the OCs creators are concerned:
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* WordOfSaintPaul: Also pops up where the OCs {{Original Character}}s creators are concerned:
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