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* The fate of Diamond Tiara's nanny, Strawberry Star, as well as anypony else who tries to take a job that doesn’t involve ones special talent. Arrested on charges of Fraud. Let that sink in for a moment. Until Twilight posthumously made it legal, ''wanting to expand ones horizon was a felony!''

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* The fate of Diamond Tiara's nanny, Strawberry Star, as well as anypony else who tries to take a job that doesn’t involve ones one's special talent. Arrested on charges of Fraud. Let that sink in for a moment. Until Twilight posthumously made it legal, ''wanting to expand ones one's horizon was a felony!''
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* Seven months into Twilight's princesshood, and she has lost most of her enthusiasm and has begun to seriously doubt herself. The vitriol of Equestria is clearly taking it's toll.

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* Seven months into Twilight's princesshood, and she has lost most of her enthusiasm and has begun to seriously doubt herself. The vitriol of Equestria is clearly taking it's its toll.
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** The inscription on the engagement ring? “''TS x FS Till Death Do Us Part''.” ''AAARRGH!!!''

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** The inscription on the engagement ring? “''TS x FS Till Death Do Us Part''.” ''AAARRGH!!!''
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* Seven months in to Twilight's princess hood, and she has lost most of her enthusiasm and has begun to seriously doubt herself. The vitriol of Equestria is clearly taking it's toll.

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* Seven months in to into Twilight's princess hood, princesshood, and she has lost most of her enthusiasm and has begun to seriously doubt herself. The vitriol of Equestria is clearly taking it's toll.
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** The whole chapter overall gives quite good insight on Twilight's development as a character over time and her subsequent, gradual descent into depression after her coronation, which turned once cheerful and kind-hearted heroine into broken shadow of her former self. This makes her ordeal all the more heartbreaking, especially when Joe remembers the last time he saw her before her death. She was verbally assaulted by her foul-mouthed detractors at his donut shop and literally spat on when she calmly invited them to sit down and hear out her own part of the story. After they stormed out, Joe immediately locked up his place and tried to comfort Twilight, who broke out crying in despair. Before she left, he told her to never lose faith that there is good in everypony -- [[AllLovingHero faith that she apparently still held,]] [[TurnTheOtherCheek despite all hatred directed at her]]. A few days later, she was dead.
** And then everything is summed up by the fact that even years after Twilight's death, Joe never managed to get over it, because what reminds him of her fate is right in front of him every day -- namely, a corner booth where Twilight used to sit regularly. Joe still keeps looking there, expecting her to come and take her usual place, with a pile of books, a plate of donuts and a pot of coffee or hot chocolate, just like she always did. Of course, she is never there. This is something many people in real life can relate to -- a pretty mundane habit that you grew accustomed to, which reminds you now that a person you used to know and who used to do that is now forever gone.
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* Trixie attends Twilight's funeral to find proof that that [[HesJustHiding Twilight is still alive.]] It's not until she sees Spike mourning her death that she realizes the truth. It even gets her to stop talking in third person!

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* Trixie attends Twilight's funeral to find proof that that [[HesJustHiding Twilight is still alive.]] It's not until she sees Spike mourning her death that she realizes the truth. It even gets her to stop talking in third person!
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** Celestia's reaction to Sunset revealing that she had intended to kill herself when she was bullied after the fall formal, and would have if not for Human Twilight's intervention. While this is mostly a sad fanfic, it is HeartWarming to know that Celestia cares for Sunset as a daughter as well as Twilight.

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** Celestia's reaction to Sunset revealing that she had intended to kill herself when she was bullied after the fall formal, and would have if not for Human Twilight's intervention. While this is mostly a sad fanfic, it is HeartWarming heartwarming to know that Celestia cares for Sunset as a daughter as well as Twilight.
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** The day before Twilight's death, she and Rainbow Dash got into an argument over her recommending that Rainbow not be immediately put on the Wonderbolts due to her HairTriggerTemper. The last words Rainbow ever said to Twilight was that she hated her. This is the main reason she turned to alcohol.

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** The day before Twilight's death, she and Rainbow Dash got into an argument over her recommending that Rainbow not be immediately put on the Wonderbolts due to her HairTriggerTemper. [[PartingWordsRegret The last words Rainbow ever said to Twilight was that she hated her. her]]. [[MyGreatestFailure This is the main reason she turned to alcohol.alcohol]].
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---> '''Blueblood:''' I'm sorry... Candy...

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---> '''Blueblood:''' '''Blueblood/[[DyingAsYourself Bluey]]:''' I'm sorry... Candy...
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--> '''Celestia''': How... how could you think such a thing...? Did you ever stop to think that maybe I would miss you?!” She took me into her forelegs again and rested her head against mine. “Did you never once think that I missed you all those years you were gone? That I didn’t sit by that mirror day and night when it was open, hoping you would come back to me? Twilight wasn’t the only daughter figure I had in my life, you were one as well! I love you, Sunset Shimmer, no matter what! I lost one daughter, I don’t want to lose another!

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--> '''Celestia''': How... how could you think such a thing...? Did you ever stop to think that maybe I would miss you?!” She took me into Celestia hugs her forelegs again and rested her head against mine. while she continues: “Did you never once think that I missed you all those years you were gone? That I didn’t sit by that mirror day and night when it was open, hoping you would come back to me? Twilight wasn’t the only daughter figure I had in my life, you were one as well! I love you, Sunset Shimmer, no matter what! I lost one daughter, I don’t want to lose another!
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* When Sunset returns to Equestria, not yet knowing that Twilight died, she is reunited with Celestia, who forgives her for what she did. When Sunset asks where Twilight is so she can tell her about what happened since she changed, Celestia burst into tears, much to Sunset's shock and informs her of Twilight's death. Sunset asks to be taken to her so she can see for herself. When she has her proof, she is devestated and cries on the casket for hours.
** Celestia's reaction to Sunset revealing that she had intended to kill herself when she was bullied after the fall formal, and would have if not for Human Twilight's intervention. While this is mostly a sad fanfic, it is HeartWarming to know that Celestia cares for Sunset as a daughter as well as Twilight.
--> '''Celestia''': How... how could you think such a thing...? Did you ever stop to think that maybe I would miss you?!” She took me into her forelegs again and rested her head against mine. “Did you never once think that I missed you all those years you were gone? That I didn’t sit by that mirror day and night when it was open, hoping you would come back to me? Twilight wasn’t the only daughter figure I had in my life, you were one as well! I love you, Sunset Shimmer, no matter what! I lost one daughter, I don’t want to lose another!
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* Poor Regal... Ever since his uncle conspired in the plot to kill Twilight, he and his family have been subject to SinsOfOurFathers something ''fierce.'' Between the constant bullying from his classmates and Cheerilee's efforts to help Regal either fail or make the situation worse, [[spoiler:it comes as no surprise that he eventually commits suicide in front of the class.]]

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* Poor Regal... Ever since his uncle conspired in the plot to kill Twilight, he and his family have been subject to SinsOfOurFathers something ''fierce.'' Between the constant bullying from his classmates and Cheerilee's efforts to help Regal either fail or make the situation worse, [[spoiler:it it comes as no surprise that he eventually commits suicide in front of the class.]]



* Flash Sentry and Twilight had a SecretRelationship between the two of them. Despite this, Flash had plans to propose to her, and even bought an engagement ring. Unfortunately, the day he planned to propose was the day Twilight was killed. After her funeral, he resigns from the royal guard [[spoiler: [[TogetherInDeath and kills himself to be with Twilight again]]]].

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* Flash Sentry and Twilight had a SecretRelationship between the two of them. Despite this, Flash had plans to propose to her, and even bought an engagement ring. Unfortunately, the day he planned to propose was the day Twilight was killed. After her funeral, he resigns from the royal guard [[spoiler: [[TogetherInDeath and kills himself to be with Twilight again]]]].again]].



* Maud's chapter reveals that Granny Pie killed herself due to HearingVoices that drove her insane. Making it worse is that Pinkie Pie and her family walked in on her swinging on the rope. Making it much worse is that Pinkie suffers from that same condition and is constantly at risk of doing the same thing. Making it even worse than that [[spoiler: is the revelation that the metal that became the swords used to kill Twilight came from the Pie Family Rock Farm.]]

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* Maud's chapter reveals that Granny Pie killed herself due to HearingVoices that drove her insane. Making it worse is that Pinkie Pie and her family walked in on her swinging on the rope. Making it much worse is that Pinkie suffers from that same condition and is constantly at risk of doing the same thing. Making it even worse than that [[spoiler: is the revelation that the metal that became the swords used to kill Twilight came from the Pie Family Rock Farm.]]



* After the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset Shimmer was constantly bullied for her previous actions. On a good day, everyone would just ignore her, on a bad day, she'd end up in the nurses office. Unable to deal with the guilt of what she had done, she eventually went to a bridge to throw herself off. [[spoiler: Thankfully, this ended up being a HappilyFailedSuicide as Human!Twilight saw her and convinced her not to jump. They even became lovers after the event. Aww.]]

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* After the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset Shimmer was constantly bullied for her previous actions. On a good day, everyone would just ignore her, on a bad day, she'd end up in the nurses office. Unable to deal with the guilt of what she had done, she eventually went to a bridge to throw herself off. [[spoiler: Thankfully, this ended up being a HappilyFailedSuicide as Human!Twilight saw her and convinced her not to jump. They even became lovers after the event. Aww.]]



* The first part of Pinkie's chapter confirms her worst fears. [[spoiler:A member of her family (Marble Pie) was the one who gave the metal that became the swords used to kill Twilight.]]
** The second part of Pinkie's chapter reveals that [[spoiler:Marble was seduced by Prince Blueblood into giving away the location of the Pie Family orichalcum deposit. Poor Marble... ignoring the unwitting betrayal, she genuinely believed that somepony loved her romantically, only to find out that she was being used to commit regicide. The kicker? She's now pregnant with Blueblood's child.]]
* Peewee becoming Spike's familiar means that he senses all the emotions Spike experiences. This has the added effect of him feeling the pain Spike feels after Twilight dies. Even worse is that unlike the other ponies who get better over time, (except, obviously, Flash Sentry) Spike is ''completely'' unable to come to terms with Twilight's death [[spoiler:and eventually runs away from home.]]
* Big Mac's chapter reveals that [[spoiler:Applejack]] was in love with Twilight. There's something forlorn about someone being in love with someone else and never telling them, [[spoiler:let alone a one-sided love due to IncompatibleOrientation.]]

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* The first part of Pinkie's chapter confirms her worst fears. [[spoiler:A A member of her family (Marble Pie) was the one who gave the metal that became the swords used to kill Twilight.]]
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** The second part of Pinkie's chapter reveals that [[spoiler:Marble Marble was seduced by Prince Blueblood into giving away the location of the Pie Family orichalcum deposit. Poor Marble... ignoring the unwitting betrayal, she genuinely believed that somepony loved her romantically, only to find out that she was being used to commit regicide. The kicker? She's now pregnant with Blueblood's child.]]
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* Peewee becoming Spike's familiar means that he senses all the emotions Spike experiences. This has the added effect of him feeling the pain Spike feels after Twilight dies. Even worse is that unlike the other ponies who get better over time, (except, obviously, Flash Sentry) Spike is ''completely'' unable to come to terms with Twilight's death [[spoiler:and and eventually runs away from home.]]
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* Big Mac's chapter reveals that [[spoiler:Applejack]] Applejack was in love with Twilight. There's something forlorn about someone being in love with someone else and never telling them, [[spoiler:let let alone a one-sided love due to IncompatibleOrientation.]]



* Shining Armor's chapter where he learns that [[spoiler: Gallant Heart was actually trying to SAVE Twilight by infiltrating Blueblood's cabal on orders from Luna...only for Amadeus Blueblood to discover his status as a mole and blackmail him into going through with the assassination or else he'd kill Gallant's brother]].

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* Shining Armor's chapter where he learns that [[spoiler: Gallant Heart was actually trying to SAVE Twilight by infiltrating Blueblood's cabal on orders from Luna...only for Amadeus Blueblood to discover his status as a mole and blackmail him into going through with the assassination or else he'd kill Gallant's brother]].brother.



** Two weeks after that do we find out the main reason why Mystic ran away: [[spoiler: The school was bombed by a terrorist attack from Equestrian's First and Maplewood was one of the victims, but Mystic's parents didn't even ''allow'' her to go to the funeral.]] THAT was the final straw.

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** Two weeks after that do we find out the main reason why Mystic ran away: [[spoiler: The school was bombed by a terrorist attack from Equestrian's First and Maplewood was one of the victims, but Mystic's parents didn't even ''allow'' her to go to the funeral.]] funeral. THAT was the final straw.



** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal with his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]

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** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal with his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]] thoughts:



--> And with that said she walked away. Leaving me alone to my thoughts in silence. [[spoiler: I felt Peewee land on my shoulder and start to sing to make me feel better, but it didn’t work.]] I just stared at a retreating Aquilina and felt sorrow not just for her, but for some reason every island inhabitant in Erebus.

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--> And with that said she walked away. Leaving me alone to my thoughts in silence. [[spoiler: I felt Peewee land on my shoulder and start to sing to make me feel better, but it didn’t work.]] work. I just stared at a retreating Aquilina and felt sorrow not just for her, but for some reason every island inhabitant in Erebus.
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* Spike's [[InnocenceLost behavior]] in the wake of his mother's death. Best shown that when having a pony at his mercy after the latter tried to rob and kill him, he nonchalantly asked Marc to make it quick. No forgiveness or arrest, just death.

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* Spike's [[InnocenceLost behavior]] in the wake of his mother's death. Best shown that when having a pony at his mercy after the latter tried to rob and kill him, he nonchalantly asked Marc to make it quick. No forgiveness or arrest, just death.



** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]

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** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal with his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]
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** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family and even a home to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]

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** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family and even a home to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle.]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]
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* Spike's [[InnocenceLost behavior]] in the wake of his mother's death. Best shown that when having a pony at his mercy after the latter tried to rob and kill him, he nonchalantly to Marc to make it quick. No forgiveness or arrest, just death.

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* Spike's [[InnocenceLost behavior]] in the wake of his mother's death. Best shown that when having a pony at his mercy after the latter tried to rob and kill him, he nonchalantly to asked Marc to make it quick. No forgiveness or arrest, just death.



** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family and even a home to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle. Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]]]

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** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family and even a home to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle. ]] Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]]] thoughts:]]
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* Spike's [[InnocenceLost behavior]] in the wake of his mother's death. Best shown that when having a pony at his mercy after the latter tried to rob and kill him, he nonchalantly to Marc to make it quick. No forgiveness or arrest, just death.
* Aquilina's backstory. Her mother was a SexSlave and she herself is going to be groomed to be one when she is old enough, watching sexual intercourse between her master and her mother since she was ''three''. One fateful day, her mother did not perform up to standard. As punishment, her master used spells on her to ''[[AndIMustScream force her body to have sex with all his soldiers, his other slaves, and even his own sister]]''. After it was over, [[DrivenToSuicide she jumped to her death]] without even saying goodbye to her daughter. Aquilina lost it and she cut the master's throat when he wasn't looking and ran away to her uncle Rupert thanks to her mother telling her about him. The kicker? The master is '''''her own father!!'''''
** The build-up to this is no better. The reason Aquilina is spilling out her life story to [[spoiler: Spike? She is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling him out for running away from his problems because when he had to deal his murdered mother, he at least still had a perfectly good group of friends and family and even a home to turn to, a luxury she herself didn't have aside from her own uncle. Spike is too stunned and was left to stew in his own thoughts:]]]]
--> I tried to say something, but for a long time I couldn’t. Was this really what Erebus was? Was this really such a hellhole to live in? I kept thinking this as doubt began to creep into my heart and I began to wonder if this was such a good idea. Did I want to get stronger, yes. But looking at Aquilina and hearing her story, I wondered just how broken she and everyone on this island was.
--> “Why are you telling me this?” I asked.
--> Aquilina snorted and turned away from me. “Because you’re not the only rucking sad story on this island. Everyone has lost someone, been through hell, or has had their entire lives ruined. My story? Not even the saddest one out there so I don’t even mind telling you it. The truth is we’re all messed up here in Erebus and unless you want to end up that way too, I suggest you head home. Because there is nothing for you here.”
--> And with that said she walked away. Leaving me alone to my thoughts in silence. [[spoiler: I felt Peewee land on my shoulder and start to sing to make me feel better, but it didn’t work.]] I just stared at a retreating Aquilina and felt sorrow not just for her, but for some reason every island inhabitant in Erebus.

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