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** Gumball in the beginning of the story. He's completely depressed for three straight months because of his breakup with Penny. His friends and family have tried to be supportive of him, but that did nothing. He became a lot more distant from everyone, and they become very concerned about him (except for Ms. Simian).
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** Gumball and Darwin finding Tobais in the corner with his face in his knees. When he looks at the two, he was clearly crying.
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** Rob finding Rachel in the void and trying to reunite her with her family, but they don't remember Rachel and told both of them to leave.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny. She was going to tell Darwin the same thing. They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying a lot of baggage.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny. She was going to tell Darwin the same thing. They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying a lot of baggage.
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** Teri telling Gumball that everyone was affected by Penny moving away. Leslie was disappointed that he won't see his cousin again at school, and the cheerleaders were sad that they lost one of there best members.
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** One of the casualties of Silver Twelves rampage was Marvin one of Grandpa Louie and Richard's friend.
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** Teri's self-esteem and wishing she could do more in the fights with the Nephilims and feels like a burden to Gumball.
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* Tobais Parents fighting cause his Mom thinks that they are missing something or someone,
And when either him or his dad ask her
-->'''Mrs Wilson''': I don't know, but it's someone really important and I can't stop wondering if they're out there.
* One of the casualties of Silver Twelves rampage was Marvin one of Grandpa Louie and Richard's friend.
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Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.His freinds and family tried to be supportive to him but that did nothing.He became alot more distant from everyone and everyone was very concerned about him except for Ms.Simian.
-->'''Gumball''':"It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone."
-->'''Gumball''':"It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone."
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** Gumball in the beginning of the story he's story. He's completely depressed for three month cause straight months because of his breakup with Penny.Penny. His freinds friends and family have tried to be supportive to him of him, but that did nothing.nothing. He became alot a lot more distant from everyone everyone, and everyone was they become very concerned about him except (except for Ms.Simian.
-->'''Gumball''':"It'sMs. Simian).
-->'''Gumball''': It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone."
-->'''Gumball''':"It's
-->'''Gumball''': It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone.
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** Gumball and Darwin finding Tobais in the corner with his face in his knees when he looks at the two he was clearly crying.
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** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried to reunite with her family but they don't remember her and told both of them to leave.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny.She was going to tell Darwin the same thing.They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying alot of baggage.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny.She was going to tell Darwin the same thing.They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying alot of baggage.
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** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried trying to reunite her with her family family, but they don't remember her Rachel and told both of them to leave.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny. She was going to tell Darwin the samething.thing. They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying alot a lot of baggage.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny. She was going to tell Darwin the same
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--->'''Gumball''': "Yes, this one is more intimidating because of what we do and don't know about it, but we should at least face it so that all those uncertainties no longer become uncertain. Even if it is too much for the both of us, we can go get Rob and hope that him being there helps even the odds a little. If it's still not enough and we're defeated…" he paused then continued "... then at least we tried. We knew we were going to defend Elmore to the end and… and… (sigh) we both knew that it was a possibility anyway because nothing lasts forever." The last line was he reminds himself about Penny.
** Teri telling Gumball that everyone was affected by Penny moving away.Leslie was disappointed that he won't see his cousin again at school,the cheerleader were sad that they lost one of there best members.
--->'''Gumball''': "Yes, this one is more intimidating because of what we do and don't know about it, but we should at least face it so that all those uncertainties no longer become uncertain. Even if it is too much for the both of us, we can go get Rob and hope that him being there helps even the odds a little. If it's still not enough and we're defeated…" he paused then continued "... then at least we tried. We knew we were going to defend Elmore to the end and… and… (sigh) we both knew that it was a possibility anyway because nothing lasts forever." The last line was he reminds himself about Penny.
** Teri telling Gumball that everyone was affected by Penny moving away.Leslie was disappointed that he won't see his cousin again at school,the cheerleader were sad that they lost one of there best members.
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** Gumballs speech to Teri
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--->'''Gumball''': "Yes, this one is more intimidating because of what we do and don't know about it, but we should at least face it so that all those uncertainties no longer become uncertain. Even if it is too much for the both of us, we can go get Rob and hope that him being there helps even the odds a little. If it's still not enough and we're defeated…" he paused then continued "... then at least we tried. We knew we were going to defend Elmore to the end and… and…(sigh) ''(sigh)'' we both knew that it was a possibility anyway because nothing lasts forever." The last line was he reminds himself about Penny.
** Teri telling Gumball that everyone was affected by Penny moving away. Leslie was disappointed that he won't see his cousin again atschool,the cheerleader school, and the cheerleaders were sad that they lost one of there best members.
--->'''Gumball''': "Yes, this one is more intimidating because of what we do and don't know about it, but we should at least face it so that all those uncertainties no longer become uncertain. Even if it is too much for the both of us, we can go get Rob and hope that him being there helps even the odds a little. If it's still not enough and we're defeated…" he paused then continued "... then at least we tried. We knew we were going to defend Elmore to the end and… and…
** Teri telling Gumball that everyone was affected by Penny moving away. Leslie was disappointed that he won't see his cousin again at
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** Teri's jelously of Sherry.She was unsure of why she change her outfit to get Gumball's attention because he only said he wanted to see how Sheery performs with her sqaud.
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** Teri's jelously jealously of Sherry.Sherry. She was unsure of why she change changed her outfit to get Gumball's attention because he only said he wanted to see how Sheery Sherry performs with her sqaud.
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-->''InnerDemon'':Demon'': "You're afraid he's going to be so blown away by her that he'll forget about you entirely."
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Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.His freinds and family tried to be supportive to him but that did nothing.He became alot more distant from everyone and everyone was very concerned about him except for (Ms.SimianSadisticTeacher).Ms.Simian.
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Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.He is also aware that Everyone at school didn't really like him and none of the girl's really caught his attention either. It wasn't that he was picky or so hung up on Penny (okay, maybe that was part of it.) he just wasn't sure about any of the girls in his class and was worried that they didn't really like him. He felt like during sixth grade his constant misdeeds regarding his classmates earned him a terrible reputation and that no one would give him a chance because he had already proven to them that he wasn't exactly "boyfriend material". It all seemed hopeless to him and he wondered if it was even possible to move on, maybe he could meet someone online or perhaps a chance of fate will introduce him to someone?
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Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.He is also aware that Everyone at school didn't really like him His freinds and none of the girl's really caught his attention either. It wasn't that he was picky or so hung up on Penny (okay, maybe that was part of it.) he just wasn't sure about any of the girls in his class and was worried that they didn't really like him. He felt like during sixth grade his constant misdeeds regarding his classmates earned him a terrible reputation and that no one would give him a chance because he had already proven family tried to them that he wasn't exactly "boyfriend material". It all seemed hopeless be supportive to him but that did nothing.He became alot more distant from everyone and he wondered if it everyone was even possible to move on, maybe he could meet someone online or perhaps a chance of fate will introduce very concerned about him to someone?except for (Ms.SimianSadisticTeacher).
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--->'''Gumball''': "Yes, this one is more intimidating because of what we do and don't know about it, but we should at least face it so that all those uncertainties no longer become uncertain. Even if it is too much for the both of us, we can go get Rob and hope that him being there helps even the odds a little. If it's still not enough and we're defeated…" he paused then continued "... then at least we tried. We knew we were going to defend Elmore to the end and… and… (sigh) we both knew that it was a possibility anyway because nothing lasts forever." The last line was he reminds himself about Penny.
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** Teri's self-esteem and wishing she could do more in the fights with the Nephilims and feels like a burden to Gumball.
** Gumball and Darwin finding Tobais in the corner with his face in his knees when he looks at the two he was clearly crying.
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** Teri's self-esteem and wishing she could do more in the fights with the Nephilims and feels like a burden to Gumball.
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** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried to reunite with her family but they don't remember her and told both of them to leave.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny.She was going to tell Darwin the same thing.They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying alot of baggage.
** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried to reunite with her family but they don't remember her and told both of them to leave.
** Darwin asking Carrie if Gumball has gotten over Penny.She was going to tell Darwin the same thing.They both know he's showing sides of recovery but he is still carrying alot of baggage.
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Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.He is also aware that Everyone at school didn't really like him and none of the girl's really caught his attention either. It wasn't that he was picky or so hung up on Penny (okay, maybe that was part of it.) he just wasn't sure about any of the girls in his class and was worried that they didn't really like him. He felt like during sixth grade his constant misdeeds regarding his classmates earned him a terrible reputation and that no one would give him a chance because he had already proven to them that he wasn't exactly "boyfriend material". It all seemed hopeless to him and he wondered if it was even possible to move on, maybe he could meet someone online or perhaps a chance of fate will introduce him to someone?
-->'''Gumball''':"It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone."
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** Gumball and Darwin finding Tobais in the corner with his face in his knees when he looks at the two he was clearly crying.
** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried to reunite with her family but they don't remember her and told both of them to leave.
Gumball in the beginning of the story he's completely depressed for three month cause his breakup with Penny.He is also aware that Everyone at school didn't really like him and none of the girl's really caught his attention either. It wasn't that he was picky or so hung up on Penny (okay, maybe that was part of it.) he just wasn't sure about any of the girls in his class and was worried that they didn't really like him. He felt like during sixth grade his constant misdeeds regarding his classmates earned him a terrible reputation and that no one would give him a chance because he had already proven to them that he wasn't exactly "boyfriend material". It all seemed hopeless to him and he wondered if it was even possible to move on, maybe he could meet someone online or perhaps a chance of fate will introduce him to someone?
-->'''Gumball''':"It's been about three months, but I still can't believe that she's gone."
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** Gumball and Darwin finding Tobais in the corner with his face in his knees when he looks at the two he was clearly crying.
** Rob finding Rachel in the void and tried to reunite with her family but they don't remember her and told both of them to leave.