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'''Pinkie Pie:''' No, Twilight! ''We'' stuck together! ''We'' were gonna get the help we needed! [[WhatTheHellHero The only thing that stopped us...was]] ''[[WhatTheHellHero you!]]''\\
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'''Pinkie Pie:''' No, Twilight! ''We'' stuck together! ''We'' were gonna get the help we needed! [[WhatTheHellHero The only thing that stopped us... was]] ''[[WhatTheHellHero you!]]''\\
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--> '''Applejack:''' What were you thinkin'? I mean, stealin' their pearl?\\
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--> '''Applejack:''' What were you thinkin'? thinkin'?! I mean, stealin' their pearl?\\pearl?!\\
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well, I'm doing the best I can! It's all on me--''I'm'' the one Tempest wants! ''I'm'' the last Princess!\\
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well, I'm doing the best I can! It's all on me--''I'm'' me! ''I'm'' the one Tempest wants! ''I'm'' the last Princess!\\
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'''Tempest:''' (''calming down'') [[SarcasmMode Please, how far could one little pony get on her own?]]
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'''Tempest:''' (''calming down'') [[SarcasmMode Please, how far could one one]] [[TitleDrop little pony pony]] [[SarcasmMode get on her own?]]
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** Derpy Hooves TakingTheBullet so Twilight could escape. It just hurts seeing [[EnsembleDarkhorse the fan-favorite]] getting turned to stone. Thankfully, she's restored with the princesses, but poor Derpy...
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** Derpy Hooves TakingTheBullet so Twilight could escape. It just hurts seeing [[EnsembleDarkhorse the fan-favorite]] getting turned to stone. Thankfully, she's restored with the princesses, but poor Derpy... [[TheBadGuyWins Tempest would have won immediately]] if Derpy didn't preform that HeroicSacrifice or Rainbow Dash's FreezeFrameBonus [[BigDamnHeroes rescue at the last second.]]
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** The build-up to Twilight's WhamLine. She finally lets all of her stress from everything get the best of her and turning on the other five, disowning them by calling them bad friends and losing her faith in friendship all while flaring her horn threateningly at Pinkie just like Tempest. She immediately regrets it, but the damage is already done and the rest of the group (except Spike) leave her be, which is how she winds up captured in the following scene. It is staggeringly, jarringly unnatural for the beloved Princess of Friendship, and shows a side of Twilight no one has ever seen before.
** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the more painful, triggering the film's DarkestHour.
** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the more painful, triggering the film's DarkestHour.
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** The build-up to Twilight's WhamLine. She Not only that it triggers the film's DarkestHour, she finally lets all of her stress from everything get the best of her and turning on the other five, disowning them by calling them bad friends and losing her faith in friendship all while flaring her horn threateningly at Pinkie just like Tempest. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone She immediately regrets it, it]], but the damage is already done and the rest of the group (except Spike) leave her be, which is how she winds up captured in the following scene. It is staggeringly, jarringly unnatural for the beloved Princess of Friendship, and shows a side of Twilight no one has ever seen before.
** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the morepainful, triggering the film's DarkestHour.painful.
** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the more
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** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the more painful.
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** Pinkie considers Twilight to be one of her absolute best friends, and hearing Twilight say and act this way to her is like a knife to the heart. The fact that it drives Pinkie not to hysterical weeping, but to quietly hurt tears makes it all the more painful.painful, triggering the film's DarkestHour.
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*** And to twist the knife, after Spike told them that Twilight had been captured due to them abandoning her, they instantly realized that they will never get back to Equestria in time and fight against the Storm King's minions. As a result, the Mane Five hung their heads in shame, finally blaming themselves for letting Twilight get kidnapped by Tempest and have no way in saving Equestria....but that is until Capper arrives
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* How about we start off with the fact that within the first 10 or so minutes of the film, Tempest Shadow [[TakenForGranite turns three of the four princesses to stone]]? [[SarcasmMode That seems like a joyful place to start off.]]
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* How about we start off with the fact that [[DownerBeginning within the first 10 or so minutes of the film, film]], Tempest Shadow [[TakenForGranite turns three of the four princesses to stone]]? [[SarcasmMode That seems like a joyful place to start off.]]
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' ''(absolutely furious)'' [[RageBreakingPoint Well, maybe I would've been better off without]] ''[[WhamLine FRIENDS LIKE YOU!]]''
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' ''(absolutely furious)'' [[RageBreakingPoint Well, maybe I would've been better off without]] ''[[WhamLine FRIENDS LIKE YOU!]]''LIKE]] '''[[WhamLine YOU!]]'''''
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* When Grubber makes an InnocentlyInsensitive remark about her broken horn, Tempest has something close to a VillainousBreakdown. It may look [[NightmareFuel scary]], but it's much more tragic in context when you remember the Storm King promised to restore it if she had all 4 princesses. This isn't about earning just any reward. Fixing a broken horn is considered impossible with regular magic alone. From where she stands, this is about as important as reviving a loved one from the grave. You can just ''feel'' her [[NotSoStoic desperation]] seep through the cracks of her heartless exterior.
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* When Grubber makes an InnocentlyInsensitive remark about her broken horn, Tempest has something close to a VillainousBreakdown. It may look [[NightmareFuel scary]], but it's much more tragic in context when you remember the Storm King promised to restore it if she had all 4 princesses. This isn't about earning just any reward. Fixing a broken horn is considered impossible with regular magic alone. From where she stands, this is about as important as reviving a loved one from the grave. You can just ''feel'' her [[NotSoStoic desperation]] seep through the cracks of her heartless exterior.exterior as she vows not to let this little setback of Twilight escaping deny her the chance to have her horn restored as she rants to Grubber in a mixture of TranquilFury and RageBreakingPoint.
--> '''Tempest:''' (''horn flares fiercely, speaking in barely-contained rage'') That ''princess'' is not going to keep me from getting my horn back! PREPARE MY SHIP!!\\
(''Grubber flees with a terrified whimper to do as Tempest ordered'')\\
'''Tempest:''' (''calming down'') [[SarcasmMode Please, how far could one little pony get on her own?]]
--> '''Tempest:''' (''horn flares fiercely, speaking in barely-contained rage'') That ''princess'' is not going to keep me from getting my horn back! PREPARE MY SHIP!!\\
(''Grubber flees with a terrified whimper to do as Tempest ordered'')\\
'''Tempest:''' (''calming down'') [[SarcasmMode Please, how far could one little pony get on her own?]]
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** Twilight's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone silent, horrified expression]] (see page image) the moment the words leave her mouth, followed by her crying inconsolably after getting left behind. It's Creator/TaraStrong's [[SugarWiki/SheReallyCanAct acting]] that sells this scene.
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** Twilight's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone silent, horrified expression]] (see page image) the moment the words leave her mouth, followed by her crying inconsolably after getting left behind. It's Creator/TaraStrong's [[SugarWiki/SheReallyCanAct acting]] that sells this scene.
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** Twilight's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone silent, horrified expression]] (see page image) the moment the words leave her mouth, followed by her crying inconsolably after getting left behind. It's Creator/TaraStrong's acting that sells this scene.
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** Twilight's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone silent, horrified expression]] (see page image) the moment the words leave her mouth, followed by her crying inconsolably after getting left behind. It's Creator/TaraStrong's acting [[SugarWiki/SheReallyCanAct acting]] that sells this scene.
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[[caption-width-right:350:And this is just ''one'' of these moments.]]
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** Luna's horrified expression when Celestia suffers the same fate.
** Celestia trying to quickly tell Luna where to get help before she fully becomes stone. The scene feels so much like those are Celestia's dying words to her sister! Then, Luna flying off to try to follow, only to be turned to stone before she can get away. Made worse that Luna would have died had Twilight not stopped her fall.
** Celestia trying to quickly tell Luna where to get help before she fully becomes stone. The scene feels so much like those are Celestia's dying words to her sister! Then, Luna flying off to try to follow, only to be turned to stone before she can get away. Made worse that Luna would have died had Twilight not stopped her fall.
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'''Pinkie Pie:''' Except it wasn't! The Queen was going to say yes! We did what you told us and that's what made her realize we were ponies worth saving! ''(gasp)'' Unless... You didn't really want us to show her the best time ever! You just wanted us to distract her!\\
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'''Pinkie Pie:''' Except it wasn't! The Queen was going to say yes! We did what you told us and that's what made her realize we were ponies worth saving! ''(gasp)'' Unless... You didn't really want us to show her the best time ever! You just wanted us to distract ''distract'' her!\\
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well, I'm doing the best I can! It's all on me. I'm the one Tempest wants. I'm the last Princess!\\
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'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well, I'm doing the best I can! It's all on me. I'm me--''I'm'' the one Tempest wants. I'm wants! ''I'm'' the last Princess!\\
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-->'''Spike:''' "Twilight? It's okay. You'll figure it out."\\
'''Twilight:''' "No. I can't. I ruined everything. There's no chance to save Equestria now. [[ItsAllMyFault It's all my fault]]."
'''Twilight:''' "No. I can't. I ruined everything. There's no chance to save Equestria now. [[ItsAllMyFault It's all my fault]]."
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-->'''Spike:''' "Twilight? Twilight? It's okay. You'll figure it out."\\
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'''Twilight:'''"No.No. I can't. I ruined everything. There's no chance to save Equestria now. [[ItsAllMyFault It's all my fault]]."
'''Twilight:'''
